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Post by ghostboy259 on Apr 10, 2010 21:45:37 GMT -5
Sorry if I did anything wrong. First time, first post. hurricanrana:
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2010 23:58:46 GMT -5
That was GREAT for a first, good job
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Post by ghostboy259 on Apr 11, 2010 2:09:22 GMT -5
Sorry, Ishould have worded that better. this is not my first animation, this is my first time ever posting one of my animations on the internet.
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Post by alexgg on Apr 11, 2010 3:19:55 GMT -5
It looks good but its very fidgety, and on the lift he lifts him twice for some reason? The move was good but the legs need to bend anr the backs need to arch more, but the spacing is okay. You need to work on reactions and the ring bounce. Good job.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2010 22:53:12 GMT -5
Yeah when you do these don't post them as an attachment. The animation was pretty good considering that you're new. It had an okay amount of frames but you still need to use a lot more to make sure that the animation is smooth, also when you get that down you should try and space your animations which you can read about in the first aid section. Another thing that I notice is that you don't always more the joints as much as they should, like in some frames it looked although you didn't more any at all, something you should try to learn quickly is to move every joint in every frame. Your reaction was pretty good just I wasn't a fan of the impact and the reaction could of had a little more to it. Keep trying though and you will get better though.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2010 11:24:10 GMT -5
That was GREAT for a first, good job
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Apr 17, 2010 11:45:02 GMT -5
Upload it to a video hosting site like tinypic or photobucket so we can see it without saving it to our computer.
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