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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 11:29:04 GMT -5
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Post by K3V on May 23, 2010 11:43:30 GMT -5
The Gore/ Spear was stiff at the beginning, pretty choppy and fast, then they just flew out of the ring... a little odd.  The secod one was stiff, needs atleast a reaction, didnt hit the ground, and just not very good. Sorry if I seem mean, I'm just saying.  |
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 11:43:57 GMT -5
no its fine i love critism
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Post by Ian on May 23, 2010 11:50:09 GMT -5
jesus didnt you used to be good
i mean in a better than this sence
choppy stiff and just odd tbh reactions are where ? etc etc same as k3v sorry for being so harsh
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 11:53:12 GMT -5
like i said i love critism.... and im just rusty i just need to do more anis
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Post by K3V on May 23, 2010 11:56:19 GMT -5
like i said i love critism.... and im just rusty i just need to do more anis For now, focus on moving arms and legs and probably torso more. Also, I love those styles |
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 11:59:55 GMT -5
Ok I Will do that and K3V Answer the PM I sent you
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 23, 2010 12:58:00 GMT -5
The first one was okay I guess, Too fast, The running was weird.
And where did you sticks go? the flew away? WTFWT?
The second was really just a moving spit wad. IMO it really didn't make sense.
You need to practice more IMO. Good job.
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 12:58:43 GMT -5
thanks for the reply wikll do
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on May 23, 2010 13:49:22 GMT -5
UPDATED THE FIRST ONE CHECK IT OUT
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Post by Ian on May 23, 2010 14:07:51 GMT -5
much better now they dont go flying into outer space  needs some reactions tho |
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Post by alexgg on May 24, 2010 13:04:25 GMT -5
You need to work on the movements because they are so stiff and the walking/runnings are just slidey.
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