Sabin
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Post by Sabin on May 30, 2010 11:17:52 GMT -5
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Post by kyleiswwe97 on May 30, 2010 11:53:57 GMT -5
Yeah Bend the joints. It was good though. It was smooth and had a nice flow. You also need a reactiion. www.blogtv.com/people/KY97iswweGo to chat. But yeah just dont make him look stiff. |
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on May 30, 2010 11:59:33 GMT -5
Yeah Bend the joints. It was good though. It was smooth and had a nice flow. You also need a reactiion. www.blogtv.com/people/KY97iswweGo to chat. But yeah just dont make him look stiff. Its an RA figure..... I cant bend the legs that far back, And no just no. |
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MyyQee™
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Un hobbie jamás se deja..
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Post by MyyQee™ on May 30, 2010 12:06:10 GMT -5
Good beggining, Jomo´s looking the victim, The springboard to the top is a good idea and looks good,then the jump wasnt the best and jomo looks stiff in the air,Matt doesnt have a good reaction.
good job.
8/10
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Post by kyleiswwe97 on May 30, 2010 12:13:07 GMT -5
Good beggining, Jomo´s looking the victim, The springboard to the top is a good idea and looks good,then the jump wasnt the best and jomo looks stiff in the air,Matt doesnt have a good reaction. good job. 8/10 Thats exactly what im trying to tell him. |
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wwestevo07
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4 Time WF Ani World Champion
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Post by wwestevo07 on May 30, 2010 13:18:50 GMT -5
well i can def see u have improved, i liked the start with the look back, the jump up was good, pretty smooth, maybe could of been bent the joints just a bit more, the moonsault was pretty good, like how you moved the arms back during it, it had a pretty good flow, far better than what ive seen from you before, just a bit stiff, the reaction were alright, but looked a little choopy, overall pretty good ani from you
And also kyle do you really need to post your blog tv link every single time you post seriously?
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Post by jeffxtreme on May 30, 2010 15:01:41 GMT -5
i know right, who cares if your on blogtv... NOBODY not to be rude but its mental... the ani was ok i liked the jump but looked choppy at some parts  |
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Post by Andeh on May 30, 2010 15:18:57 GMT -5
i know right, who cares if your on blogtv... NOBODY not to be rude but its mental... the ani was ok i liked the jump but looked choppy at some parts And who cares about your comment on this animation? nobody! because you didnt give a proper reply... How hard is it to right out a paragraph saying whats good or bad about a animation. I like the taunt type thing at the beggining with Morrison looking at Hardy. There wasnt much of a jump to the middle rope at the beggining, you could have bent the knees more to build up the jump, because if you dont it sorta looks floaty. I liked him coming off the middle rope going toward the top rope but again he just sorta bounces off the tope rope and is terribly stiff due to no significant leg and arm movement. The animation was perfectly smooth and the speed was perfection. You really have that nailed. I just think if you moved the legs more in the actual back flip it would look alot less stiff. No real impact from the moonsault and because of that it makes the reaction look poor when really you made the best of a reaction with the little impact that was given. Overall it is a very nice animation and clean, just needs some tweeks here and there and it will be considered 'perfect'. 7.5/10 -Andrew |
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