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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 30, 2010 13:23:56 GMT -5
>> UPDATED WITH NEW ANIMATION <<------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- MY BEST EVERRR!! ;D  -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------  ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Best Animation Yet! Please Please Comment.   ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Better than the one before... I guess board break could of ben better.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------  It's okay I guess, What do you think? |
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Post by sicknicholas on May 30, 2010 13:30:30 GMT -5
The red stick shouhld be dangling after the kick, hell I like it though. The kick was great.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 30, 2010 13:33:48 GMT -5
The red stick shouhld be dangling after the kick, hell I like it though. The kick was great. Thanks, You should of said alittle fidgety in red's head and arms.  |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on May 30, 2010 13:49:03 GMT -5
A few fidgets.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 30, 2010 13:51:26 GMT -5
Yeah, It's hard sometimes to keep it focused on the same spot |
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Post by alexgg on May 30, 2010 14:04:03 GMT -5
Animation 1: Try keep the points the same on Reds arms,
I love how the kick is, you bent the legs in then kicked him off I wouldnt of had even thorught of that.
The reactions and break were very nice right amount of impact imo,
Onlything that bugs me is how red hands after wards.
Animation 2: Red should of had more of a spring off the wall imo, blue should of had moved before the move as he saw it coming as well.
I dont really like it becuase it becomes jumpy and stiff
The table breaks didnt look very good either as there wasnt really any impact.
Work on the stiffness.
Animation 3: Looks good and better, the spacing is improved and its not so stiff.
I just didnt like the bounce in the reactions as the legs and head didnt move much and it looked choppy.
I love Reds jump though but i dont know why.
Animation 4: Looks smooth part the pick up dosnt look complete for a power bomb and reds legs should show more strain and movement.
After the move red should follow through with more movement as it looks too stiff.
Reactions still need work on as they look fidgity
Animation 5: Very nice, I like how you sway the body first looks very smooth, the animation is nice but floaty theres some unnesscary frames in there that i would remove to make the spacing better.
And the arms are still fidgety as well as the legs still not having enough movement.
Good work.
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 30, 2010 15:05:50 GMT -5
Red should of had more of a spring off the wall imo, blue should of had moved before the move as he saw it coming as well. I dont really like it becuase it becomes jumpy and stiff The table breaks didnt look very good either as there wasnt really any impact. Work on the stiffness. okay. I'm never going to have 4 f'kn tables ever again xD Too hard.. |
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Post by joshuaggranberg on May 30, 2010 17:39:28 GMT -5
Updated.
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