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Post by alexgg on Jun 1, 2010 8:00:52 GMT -5
Its okay but stiff and the start is odd...
The movements are cool and I like the impact but Dont think he went high enough.
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Post by Hoboturtle on Jun 1, 2010 8:07:36 GMT -5
First thing thanks for the reply to mine and alex's battle.
Now onto your ani.
Looks good, nice and smooth however its stiff but i believe thats because the sticks have few back joints i believe. Also not sure about the actual slam however overall its a really good animation.
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 1, 2010 8:16:21 GMT -5
There defaults ¬¬
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 1, 2010 14:35:53 GMT -5
Stiff: Stiff is when the joints in an animation aren't moved enough, and the stick may stay in the same position for to long. Move all joints in each frame. and make sure it looks different from the last frame. But not too much.  Lmao This ani has everything of that... its not stiff, accept the back which is a default soooo. it probably looks stiff because of hard spacing.. |
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Post by alexgg on Jun 1, 2010 14:37:51 GMT -5
Yeah the backs dont look right, dont move enough imo... why the hell did you use deafults anyway?
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 1, 2010 14:49:09 GMT -5
Didnt have any stks.
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Post by sicknicholas on Jun 1, 2010 20:10:36 GMT -5
I like it it flows well, haha its does look a bit wrong, I don't understand what he's doing in the beginning is he lifting him up?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 3, 2010 0:29:46 GMT -5
I don't like it because of the way you spaced it, just doesn't work for me  . |
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Post by animator on Jun 4, 2010 4:57:03 GMT -5
Love it,
really smooth
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Post by Walker PWA on Jun 4, 2010 12:51:58 GMT -5
Nah, it doesn't look correct to me, I've never seen a powerbomb like that  if you were trying to be creative with it that's really cool but meh, it's unrealistic, he wasn't lifted high enough, the reason they bend there legs in a powerbomb is to build up momentum to lift the opponent up high,which you barely did, also as Marc said there should be a bit more spacing. 8/10 |
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Post by MX5 on Jun 4, 2010 14:28:05 GMT -5
Its too simple. You didn't even do the pick up. You need to step outside your comfort zone and stop animating things like this and swanton bombs. It looks like you didn't even move the back joins but once or twice and only made the sticks go up and down. Just looks silly.
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Post by alexgg on Jun 4, 2010 14:32:59 GMT -5
YEAH WILL!!!!
But you do have a little comfort zone as MX5 says, you are always doing high flying moves and hate when I set stips for you.
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Post by Mr.W² on Jun 5, 2010 12:15:19 GMT -5
Wtf swantons? ive animated like 3,
and i said i like it better when you do stips?
i was the one who told you to do the stips... so erm ¬_¬
And a comfort zone lmfao i animate high flying moves because i enjoy animating them.
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