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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on Jun 5, 2010 14:26:22 GMT -5
NEWER Animation CREDIT:Alexgg, K3V, and JaxHow do you like... think its my best Credit: Alexgg For Evan Bourne Stick, Dustin's pivot folder for laying stick, and K3V for style |
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Post by Ian on Jun 5, 2010 14:28:15 GMT -5
dont use kanes sticks if you are this bad :/
its choppy stiff etc etc
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on Jun 5, 2010 14:29:58 GMT -5
i really dont know whos laying stick it is it came out of Dustins Pivot folder so *sigh*
thanks for telling me what was wrong
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Post by alexgg on Jun 5, 2010 14:34:26 GMT -5
Yeah you have improved alot.
Its still choppy and stiff though, and the walking is okay but there is no visible jump or even a step off, he just somehow moves forward...
The air-time needs work because theres a lot of frames where they stay the same, get rid of a few to make the spacing better.
I don't like how he lands on his back, seems as a whole unrealistic and the reactions need work.
Although there is defiantly improvements, and less choppiness.
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Post by Ian on Jun 5, 2010 14:44:03 GMT -5
i really dont know whos laying stick it is it came out of Dustins Pivot folder so *sigh* thanks for telling me what was wrong no problem i am here to either insult you or help you and in my post i did both  |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2010 14:54:02 GMT -5
dont use kanes sticks if you are this bad :/ its choppy stiff etc etc honestly...>_> I hat this whole 'don't use kane's sticks unless you are so good' He probably likes the sticks, and they maybe inspire him to animate. So who gives a  if he uses them? Yea, you are improving. The start looks pretty good,I think he should have had another step before jumping off. It's pretty floaty, and it's a bit choppy when he first goes air 'bourne' ( ) You have improved alot overall. |
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Post by tnawrestlingfantsy on Jun 5, 2010 15:34:33 GMT -5
thx matt and updated
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Post by alexgg on Jun 5, 2010 16:24:49 GMT -5
You need to work on the jumping, start with a straight pose and bend the stick down with the feet in the same position.
Then for the jump expand the body angling toward the directions he will land.
The frames at the start of the air-time should be closish then each frame the stick should get further from its last place to show gravity and improve spacing.
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Post by trøy on Jun 6, 2010 0:08:52 GMT -5
dont use kanes sticks if you are this bad :/ its choppy stiff etc etc honestly...>_> I hat this whole 'don't use kane's sticks unless you are so good' He probably likes the sticks, and they maybe inspire him to animate. So who gives a if he uses them? Yea, you are improving. The start looks pretty good,I think he should have had another step before jumping off. It's pretty floaty, and it's a bit choppy when he first goes air 'bourne' ( ) You have improved alot overall. I do, its ing truth for god's sake. Yeah, stiff, choppy, fidgets, etc. Needs an edit. |
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