Dan.
Main Eventer
Joined on: May 5, 2009 12:46:28 GMT -5
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Post by Dan. on Jun 5, 2010 16:24:41 GMT -5
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Post by alexgg on Jun 5, 2010 16:32:04 GMT -5
I swear the thread said Lightube Lungblower.... I wondered 'Wheres the lightube?'
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Animation looks perfect, you dont suck.
Only thing I dislike is Blues pose at the start, it looks stiff so to say.
The jumps are brilliant, and it has great spacing.
Reactions look nice, just needs finishing off.
Great work man. 
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xReyAlsanecx
Superstar
Joined on: Jan 23, 2009 16:14:12 GMT -5
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on Jun 5, 2010 17:34:34 GMT -5
Jump at the start looks great but the arms could be smoother. It gets quite choppy when he connects with the other guy and reactions look rushed.
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Joined on: Sept 25, 2024 6:18:16 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 6, 2010 0:22:46 GMT -5
Start was really good, I liked the way you spaced it and think that you should stick to that style, from the connection onwards it looks rushed though as CS said, just take more time with it and redo parts if they don't look right because honestly I think that you could of done that part a lot better.
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