Ian
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Post by Ian on Jun 11, 2010 10:43:02 GMT -5
so i didnt really try too hard ;D what u think?  i  ing hate the table breaks  |
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Dan.
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Post by Dan. on Jun 11, 2010 11:31:14 GMT -5
To start off with, the jump is wrong for the move. he should've arched his back, backwards instead of forwards because it looks odd if you do it like you've done it.
the ani itself is smoooth, spacing still needs improving, the breaks are slow compared to the move itself, and the reaction is lacking. still better than the noobs.
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Jun 11, 2010 12:13:46 GMT -5
thank you dan  anymore |
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Post by alexgg on Jun 11, 2010 12:18:22 GMT -5
It looks really messed up lol, the way it goes back and forth and you need to work on the breaks cause they looks very fidgety and choppy.
Sholdnt fall on both sides in the middle.
And he should og had jumped higher cause he dosnt land on his back right. 
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Jun 11, 2010 12:21:27 GMT -5
thanks alex
as i said i didnt try too hard i mean i can do alot better jumps imo
anybody else care to comment
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