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Post by jonirocks on Jun 28, 2010 2:22:29 GMT -5
 its pretty good for my first try at the vertabreaker [glow=red,2,300] Leave Feedback[/glow] |
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TTF4eva
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Post by TTF4eva on Jun 28, 2010 2:25:37 GMT -5
Ok lift up, weird that one rope boucnes, and wat was the guy doing rapidly with his hand? Oh, i dont wanna know
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Jun 28, 2010 2:36:21 GMT -5
Yeah, this animation was pretty wierd. Needs more frames and it was fridegy. And like ttf said whats up with only the tope rope bouncing? and the one stick moving his hands really fast :X Anyways this reminds me of my first animations (Not the one rope moving or weird hands moving really fast for some reason) Just keep practicing and you will get better  -Jesse |
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Post by alexgg on Jun 28, 2010 7:44:52 GMT -5
Keep the legs together!! Trust me it looks better, unless its necessary for the legs to be apart.
I think its quite fidgety and stiff, make smaller more rounded movements.
When the receiver hits the floor, he should arch in, instead of roll on his head, just wouldn't happen like that.
Not sure whats happening with the arms, clapping?
And ya need to work on the rope movements, the top one wouldn't move on its own, and it looks really choppy too, just move it a pixel down a few times then again back up.
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