Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jul 5, 2010 9:50:23 GMT -5
 i dont like the mid air bit in the first jump. i think its a little stiff. I might go fex that later  added another |
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Sabin
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Post by Sabin on Jul 5, 2010 18:25:41 GMT -5
thanks for all the detailed comments guys.  |
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Post by alexgg on Jul 5, 2010 18:29:22 GMT -5
No Prob.  (Will edit in a moment)TEH EDIT!!! Ani 1:
The jump up was kinda weak, prehaps floaty as there isnt much pull to it.
The ani looks quite stiff, esspically in the jump where he should bend down more.
The legs looks the worst, as the body just spins around as it falls with not much joint movement.
And the reactions look delayed, but good.
Ani TWWWOOOO!!!:
Better I guess, but still very stiff, and is fidgety in this one.
Im still not feelign your jumps, you need to work on them.
I dont think the legs bend down enough, and the arms should be better placed.
As for the spin, it looks effy but okay, legs just look odd due to weak jump. |
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