Ian
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Post by Ian on Jul 23, 2010 16:02:52 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 24, 2010 2:19:10 GMT -5
Choppy.seems kinda ok?.Black Orton?  |
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Ian
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Post by Ian on Jul 24, 2010 7:17:21 GMT -5
yeah
i forgot to colour him
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Post by alexgg on Jul 24, 2010 12:48:31 GMT -5
I'm guessing you did Codebreaker, and Deadly did the RKO?
Codebreaker:
The movements were good, nice stance.
The legs were fidgety, so try keeping them in roughly the same area each frame.
I do this by keeping the foot joint in the exact same area if it isn't need to move but the leg its self does, kinda hard to keep up with but it does work.
I think there should of had been more impact/reaction as there wasn't much of a connection.
It was also kinda stiff and the arms should of had moved more, perhaps to grasp the face more.
RKO:
Pose is okay, but what i tend to do with collabs is start the movement for the move by editing the partners frames before it, this is so there isn't any wait or long gap before each part.
It also makes it less stiff in a way and more interesting.
I like the jump, but the legs are a little stiff and need bending up more.
The floatyness to it works kinda well, yet more impact is needed.
I didn't like the reactions as they seemed so stiff and lifeless.
Not a bad collab, but both of you need to work on the stiffness.
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