mushy
Mid-Carder
formerly Mushahiro
Joined on: Aug 26, 2003 17:33:57 GMT -5
Posts: 371
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Post by mushy on Jul 26, 2010 0:31:49 GMT -5
Hello everyone, this is the first episode to my first ever pic fed. I've been reading pic feds for a while now, but now i've finally decided to try my hand at it. I appreciate criticism of all kinds, i'm here to learn from you guys and fix what I did wrong to make it better. A few things: The X doesn't stand for "Xtreme", it actually doesn't stand for anything. I edited a few pictures obviously for string, but for some reason a few pictures decided to show up as the original unedited pictures, and I don't know why. Hopefully i'll be able to get this fixed in the next episode. Anyway, without further ado: prowrestlingx.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=general&action=display&thread=1
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Post by dmallett4 on Jul 26, 2010 5:56:38 GMT -5
I figured id reply to this. your pictures are pretty good, the quality is good. cool opening to the show, would be better if there was a bit more info, about titles and such. punk promo was alright, a little short. cool opening first match, i wish you would zoom out on a few pictures though, all of the close ups are a bit overwhelming. this fan story is really interesting, i dont think ive seen anything like that in a while. the alex rhiley custom is weird, but whatever. i guess foley will be interfering in the main event. just a note, why does your ring have cracks in it you should probably get a hardcore ring thats a little bigger. it was an alright match, had some cool spots and the psychology was good, unlike a few other feds debuting here. some of your poses are pretty impressive, the slingshot over the rope from miz was really good. the 4-up sequence was really cool. it was a good match, the poses were good, and it sets up future events nicely. overall, a really impressive debut man. your poses and matchwork was really good, your pictures are crisp and clear. i look forward to viewing more of this.
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tirva
Main Eventer
wTw pic fedder
Joined on: Apr 24, 2002 15:47:49 GMT -5
Posts: 1,999
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Post by tirva on Jul 26, 2010 17:27:57 GMT -5
- Interesting little setup. - Punk vs. Moore was decent. Nice and quick. - Punk promo prior was way too short. - I dig the fan vs. Punk storyline. - Interesting tag teams. Kinda dig it and looking to see where it goes. - Glad Koz and Santino won! - Good main and good finish to the show, bro. - You have some really good poses, you should add some more backstage promos but i'm sure that will come with the following shows. Nice mix having Miz, Foley and Lashley. - I look forward to episode #2 to see where things are going. - Great job especially for a first show!
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Post by brm on Jul 26, 2010 22:57:57 GMT -5
For a debuting pic fed, this is really good. Believe me, my first "fed" was no where near this good. Pic quality is just great, and that's a big part of enjoying a fed. Crowd looks pretty small, but you work with what you've got. I liked Punk / Moore, but I can't help but feel it played out way too much like their ECW stuff from 06. I mean, you even had him slapping him and calling him a poser. It's good to get inspired by stuff, and even borrow stuff from real life feds, but this almost played like a carbon copy, with me even expecting the "you're a poser" line from Punk. Anyway, I love that you used string for some stuff. The fan storyline is good, and the "familiar" line has me thinking it's going somewhere. Also, love seeing TTL's used in the fed. Also I really like that huge X you have for the entrance. The toss of Riley out of the ring was a really good spot. Burke / Miz was a good match. It felt like the main event of the show, and nice use of string throughout. With the amount of feds today that don't use string, or use it once in a show, it's really nice to see you using it quite a bit. The Foley / Lashley / Miz alliance thing is really really interesting and seems very original as far as the pairing. I'm liking Foley trying to take down the company, and it establishes a good storyline to build on for awhile. Overall, I really enjoyed this, and can hardly believe it's your first show of your first fed. You seem to know full well what you are doing, and I can't wait to see more from you on here.
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mushy
Mid-Carder
formerly Mushahiro
Joined on: Aug 26, 2003 17:33:57 GMT -5
Posts: 371
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Post by mushy on Jul 29, 2010 19:47:21 GMT -5
Thanks guys for replying, I really appreciate all the input and kind words.
Mallett - The ring is the breakdown brawl ring, so it breaks away in the middle if you want it to, that's why there is cracks.
brm - Yeah, I pretty much stole the whole Punk/Moore thing from ECW, I don't plan on doing that again.
But anyway, thanks again guys, I truly appreciate it.
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Post by calhil8 on Jul 30, 2010 5:51:47 GMT -5
Yeh great start man. Not many pic feds start off this well but yours did. I like the pairing of Steven Richards and Steve Blackman as commentators and enjoyed Richards's banter with Blackman about Kozlov being a cyborg lol I like the mix of Mattels,Ruthless Agression and TTL. Will be interesting to see where the fan and punk storyline heads as well as the alliance of Foley, Lashley and Miz
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 30, 2010 12:21:21 GMT -5
Pros
- the back and forth banter between Richards and Blackman is very funny, and quite entertaining. great job with commentary throughout this whole show.
- your posing is actually quite good for a newcomer. just try and move the joints more to make your poses look even more realistic.
- i like the fact that you are mixing figures. i like shows that have the courage to do that. i think it looks great, in my opinion. keep it up =)
Cons
- some of the pics are a tad blurry. try holding the camera more steady and/or getting more light.
- presentation is key. i would suggest jazzing up your arena.
Overall, this is a great start. please continue to make quality shows. if you take the advice you are given, i guarantee you will improve. great start, man! =)
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