ozarka098
Mid-Carder
Joined on: Oct 24, 2009 12:52:40 GMT -5
Posts: 183
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Post by ozarka098 on Jul 30, 2010 15:38:21 GMT -5
 this is the closthline...... its ok  and this is the swanton (: tell me what you think . im very rusty |
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Post by alexgg on Jul 30, 2010 15:53:52 GMT -5
Did you PM me? I didnt get back to you did I...
Anyway...
That clotheline is freakin epic imo, its a little stiff but had great flow and impact.
It just needs finishing off cause it gets cut short.
Your running is pretty good for a begginer, and I think with more practice you will get much better.
The swanton isnt as good, dosnt really have the shape of a swanton, you shoul find a video for referance of how it looks.
Also look at other animations on how to make the jumps, as here its just a fall from the turnbuckle.
The body should bend int and the legs, then expand out into the shape of the airtime move.
Pretty good stuff man.
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Post by overdose16 on Jul 30, 2010 16:05:24 GMT -5
on the swanton it dosent appear he actually hit it because his back hits the ground and on the first one are they suppose to be outside ring? also on second the green dosent land inside
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Post by 316austin316 on Jul 31, 2010 14:35:11 GMT -5
the swanton a tiny bit stiff but still very impressive!
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Hey i love making pivot animtions and i ride bulls to .... i do pivot when i get time but i also like to live too so yea lol thats pretty much it (: