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Post by Andeh on Aug 20, 2010 20:10:41 GMT -5
Update Made my second pivot today while my internet was being lame. I am gunna be honest I am not that much of a fan of this Pivot stuff but it is growing on me. I have not grasped pic speed yet. If anyone would really like to help me and edit the animation for me to make it a decent speed, I would love you long time. I used Alex's pack for the sticks and my good buddy Jesse for the style.  ________________________________ Made my first ever Pivot animation today. I think it is "OK". It is slow  i36.tinypic.com/ezpcfm.jpg |
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Deadly
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SFBL Record: 13 - 3 - 0
Joined on: Jun 30, 2010 0:04:05 GMT -5
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Post by Deadly on Aug 20, 2010 20:13:14 GMT -5
its very nice for a first
i suggest you work on stiffness and spacing
its not choppy but its smooth
but keep practicing
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Post by mrshwabss on Aug 20, 2010 20:13:53 GMT -5
ANDEHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Nice ani. Slow yes, could use better spacing. Smooth none the less. Try to keep the sticks 2-D instead of 3-D and it will look a lot better. Glad to see that more and more animators come here. |
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xReyAlsanecx
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Post by xReyAlsanecx on Aug 21, 2010 14:09:18 GMT -5
Pretty nice for a first. Movements are a good effort and better than most noobs. Main problem is its so slow,try less frames for a start,also get a ring/style or at least make a floor. Looks weird how they are at two different levels at the start as theres no surface for them to stand on.
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Post by alexgg on Aug 22, 2010 10:01:18 GMT -5
Movements look good, has a sence of realisim, apart from the mad back bending.
I wouldnt make a animation on the canvas that big, use options to to adjust the size of the canvas, or save the sticks (by selecting them and clicking edit then save as stick) and then load them into a style that can be found in first aid.
Try working on the stiff ness, and fidgets, but otherwise looks like a good first animation.
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Post by Andeh on Aug 22, 2010 14:54:28 GMT -5
Update with the Warriors Way/Ghetto Stomp
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Shikari Ferrari
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October 14th o2 arena newcastle <3
Joined on: Aug 20, 2010 6:24:06 GMT -5
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Post by Shikari Ferrari on Aug 22, 2010 15:02:33 GMT -5
the jump was stiff, the air-time was floaty, the roll was incredibly smooth, stick at these and you will be pro in no-time
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