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Post by overdose16 on Aug 20, 2010 23:27:59 GMT -5
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Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Aug 21, 2010 0:21:57 GMT -5
Looks pretty good. Take off was pretty good. Oranges legs were stiff and the movements/placments were off. Green was stiff to so you gotta work on that. Not much of a reaction. I say your improving. Just keep on makin animations and practice. +1 for using my Style  |
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Post by alexgg on Aug 22, 2010 11:07:32 GMT -5
Sweet animation man, I quite like it and I do think you are improving.
Id say make smaller movements, the jump looks fantastic but i think it needs some more frames to make it flow better.
Work on the arms as they look the most stiff whilst airbourne, expand them out more instead of keeping them L shaped for so much, and don't move them too far away from their previous positions either.
Green looks too stiff, the back needs arching back a little for the Catch while his legs bend in under the weight, he should then expand out and forward and up as he does the move.
Finally the reactions were lacking impact, try to make more of a bounce and make them look not so straight, the legs shouldnt go down like they did, they should bend in more.
Otherwise good work.
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matfin123
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Post by matfin123 on Sept 2, 2010 2:36:28 GMT -5
looks good
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Post by leggoman2461 on Sept 5, 2010 21:54:14 GMT -5
Looks good a little stiff could be more of a reaction though
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