mushy
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formerly Mushahiro
Joined on: Aug 26, 2003 17:33:57 GMT -5
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Post by mushy on Sept 15, 2010 18:38:10 GMT -5
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tirva
Main Eventer
wTw pic fedder
Joined on: Apr 24, 2002 15:47:49 GMT -5
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Post by tirva on Sept 16, 2010 19:30:52 GMT -5
- I like how you have Punk with Delaney. I think delaney blows but you have him in a good roll. Decent opening segment! - Awesome Bridging Electric Chair! Your poses are really great! Looks like you too your time. You setup is sweet too! GBreat match. I'm not a London or Daniels fan but that was a great match! - I dug the length of Styles and Dragon. You have a very unique roster. I do like that. I'm not into any of the guys on the roster other than Jericho and Morrison so far but i'm still interested in everything. This is a really good fed man. Some great spots. Try and fix how the ropes are in knots, it looks a bit weird. - That was cool how you cut to commercial in the middle of the main! I dug it! AWESOME ENDING! Love how Angle attacked everyone. All the poses with the chair should have been better. Those are the ones we are going home with. That is my only complaints other than the rope pieces. - Awesome show dude. I love the Foley Faction!
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The Warsman
Main Eventer
The one and only...
Joined on: Feb 6, 2004 10:38:19 GMT -5
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Post by The Warsman on Sept 16, 2010 21:40:09 GMT -5
First, your picture quality is terrific! What kind of camera are you using?
Nice poses. Try to trim the excess rope and position it behind the turnbuckles. It'll look much better.
I like the "X" entrance area.
Daniels and London put on a great match! Daniels with the Angel's Wings, yes!
That top rope stomp by U. Dragon was brutal. Alright, Dragon!!
Foley, Miz and Lasley? Talk about an odd threesome! ;D Make it foursome now with Angle! What's next for these 4 men, Batista and Khali?
Wars
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Post by indywrestling on Sept 17, 2010 22:31:20 GMT -5
I like your fed man, very indyish to me, 1 thing i dont like though is th mixture of figs from jakks, toybiz, and mattel the size diiferent in them, especially the jakks next to mattel/toybiz, i just bad, Punk was standing next delany and delany looked bigger than Punk, wuzzzzzup wit dat? Angle being there, nice move, love Angles work man, ill be keeping an eye on your stuff my man
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mushy
Mid-Carder
formerly Mushahiro
Joined on: Aug 26, 2003 17:33:57 GMT -5
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Post by mushy on Sept 18, 2010 21:24:21 GMT -5
Thank you guys for the comments, I truly appreciate it! First, your picture quality is terrific! What kind of camera are you using? I'm glad you think so! I use a Canon VIXIA HF10. Thanks again guys who have replied, keep the replies coming!
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Post by brm on Sept 19, 2010 22:19:59 GMT -5
Yes! Episode 2 of PWX! I have been eagerly anticipating this show since the last one. I am really glad you are keeping this going, and hope you do plan to make it a normal thing. The Warrior title is a really neat idea, as I love when a fed creates it's own lore, and doesn't just rehash stuff that's been used. I'm still loving that X you have in the entrance way. It also looks like you have increased the size of your crowd. Loving that. Obviously, I strongly believe a large crowd can set a great atmosphere for a show. WOW! You actually referenced FIW (and ROP) in your pic fed! I absolutely love that you did that, as I hate when pic feds reference feds like WWE, TNA, etc. I feel like pic feds are separate from actual real life feds, and I love that you made references to other pic feds, and not real promotions. It's just the continuity buff in me. Love it. And I just have to say, I love your camera. I wish I had a clean, crisp camera, but I don't. So I just use that to my advantage, and make it look gritty. But you really have amazing shots in here. I've warmed up to this "fan" storyline a bit more since I first saw it. I think it can work, and it's pretty dang original. Loving Delaney being hired by Punk seemingly a few minutes ago. It just puts Punk over more as a scheming heel. I'm really enjoying Punk in your fed. Ok, Daniels vs. London. This should be a really great, fast paced match up. Ok, I just have to say I'm loving this match. When I used to do poses all the time back in like late 2005 - 2006, I LOVED that Adrenaline 11 Paul London. It was his first figure, and I loved it. That springboard moonsault pose to the outside so reminds me of my old posing days, using that figure all the time. You really have some of the best poses in pic feds today. You seem to know exactly what you are doing with string, and it really adds a lot to your matches. You also did a good job of capturing all the technical chain wrestling early on. The Angel's Wing pose, or lack of, was a bit disappointing, but it probably would be dang hard to do it with London being so much larger / heavier than Daniels. Haha. I love seeing other Indy feds use HOLY SHOOT! in caps. It's pretty much become an indy thing. Your commentary is really great. Man, that was a great match. The best I have seen from you so far. Oh boy. Ultimo Dragon vs. AJ Styles! This show is just stacked. The various kicks flying back and forth is great, but this match seemed a bit rushed compared to Daniels / London. I did notice a lot of transition poses missing, like AJ hitting the reverse DDT, and being set up for the styles clash the next shot. That makes the match seem a lot quicker, and makes it come off a bit spotty. Spotty wrestling can be good in pic feds, but not for every match. I would like to see this turn into a possible feud, and see a rematch between these two, but the last thing I want to do is write your shows for you. Anyway, this was still a fun match, and I love that Styles figure. Ok, I believe it is main event time. So far, I'm loving this show, but I have no idea how deep your roster goes. I know it's only the second show, but I hope you keep track of who you're featuring, and make sure people don't get lost in the shuffle. You probably have it all planned out, but I'm just getting concerned that you'll have 100 wrestlers in PWX. Anyway, Foley and Miz and Lashley need a name. Haha. The last match with Khali and Batista being taken out was a good way to establish the faction of Foley and co., but again, Kurt Angle coming in could be a problem. If you intend on having a large 5 on 5 or 4 on 4 main event scene, it could be fine, but I really hope your roster doesn't get too crowded. I'm loving your fed, and your posing and photography are great. I'm a big fan, and I hope to see PWX sticking around for a long while.
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Post by deskjet on Sept 20, 2010 5:59:25 GMT -5
I gotta say, camera pics really do something to draw interest in a fed. The arena looks really good as well. Opening match was very well done. Great high spot poses, lots of good moves. AJ/Dragon..definately a dream match here. Woulda liked to seen it go a bit longer with a few more high risk moves, but other than that another solid match. Main event was good as well. Odd pairing in Foley's group which now got a bit more interesting with Angle. Your fed strikes nice balance of backstage segments, matches, and overall quality presentation. As a consequence, this make for a very strong fed and one that should be looked at as one to watch as an up and comer fed. Keep up the great work!
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Post by Byron F'N Saxton Fan on Sept 21, 2010 3:56:12 GMT -5
Alright, finally replying.
CM Punk and Colin Delaney were pretty good, and doing it to lure the fan out there was a clever twist, as I just thought Punk was beating up the paid Delaney to show what he would do to that fan.
Daniels/London was pretty good. Great action, some nice poses, but a very good Match that's only fault was a few too many figure out of frame pics (Understand not wanting to use String all the time, as when you did, it looked great, but I'm sure it gets tedious after a while), and something about Daniels smashing Paul's face on the Ring Mat from the Second rope, then them shaking hands is odd, but again, very good Match. Can't wait to see who JoMo's new partner is.
AJ Styles/Ultimo Dragon was pretty good. Probably would have this Match been the opener, as it would have been longer, but still, enjoyed the Match and the pic of AJ passed out was very well done/posed. Was glad to see the Deluxe AJ used in a Fed, finally, and it was used very well here.
The Main Event was okay. Would rather have the old PWX World Title, for the record, but as long as it's not the Women's Title, no big deal. The Match was decent, the team of Khali and Batista was a very good one, but the thing that kind of dragged down the Match was the commercial, which I'm fine with, as I use that same tactic often, but when you came back from break, not even 10 pics later, I believe, the Match ended on the DQ. Like I said, I have no issue with using a commercial break during a Match, but when you come back from it, at least have a few maneuvers. Anyways, was shocked to see Angle appear. The beatdown was very well done, and only stengthened the Foley Faction.
Misc. Stuff: Love the Entrance Way. Entrance Ways are one of my big "things" about Pic Feds and for me, just playing around with the figures, so I'm glad you have an awesome one. Stevie Richards is really funny as the Color guy. My favorite quote from him was in this exchange
"SB: Woah, look at the beautiful piece of gold! SR: I bet it's for me, the Best Commentator Title!"
I would switch out Steve Blackmen as the Play-by-Play guy, personally. I know some people probably get tired of JR and Joey Styles, but two Wrestlers being the Commentary team is something I'm not a fan of. Your pics are amazing; much better than most of mine. Hopefully I'll get an upgrade in Camera soon and be able to take PWX quality pics all the time! I would space out the Commentary, by just seperating it, as it can get a little tiresome on the eyes reading commentary like that, no big deal, really. You have a nice mix of in-ring action and backstage segments, which is obviously a good thing, otherwise I wouldn't have said it was a "Nice mix". Can't wait for the Warriors Champion to be crowned.
So, in closing, very good Fed, much better than I had expected, coming in, and if you're going to be surprised, it might as well be plesant. Also, I DEMAND Alex Riley get back in PWX (With some new trunks), as I want more A-Bombs from A-Ry.[/MichaelCole].
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Post by dmallett4 on Sept 21, 2010 6:09:27 GMT -5
hey, firstly, ive been meaning to talk to you about something that may be of interest. can you hit me up your email.msn/aim over pm please? cheers.
secondly, your fed, considering this is only the second show, is great. i love this feud with the fan btw, pretty creative on your part. ive noticed you havent zoomed in as much this time, and the action seems a lot better for it. your commentary is pretty funny, and punk having a lackey like delaney should be cool. daniels v london. have these two ever been against each other? its a dream match, no doubt. one thing ive notices, is that you have green carpet under your arena. it would ;ook better if that was covered with wood, or just black cloth or something. green makes it look tacky. some really, really nice poses here. brilliant opening match. that was better than anything in your first show by far. i had plans for a ultimo dragon/aj styles tag team in baow.i think they had a match in the best of the best tournament as well. i might have to dig that out. the hurricarana sequence was nicely done. the ending was out of nowhere, but was cool to see a submission finish. you should draw up a bracket for the tournament so everyone can check the progress. your faction is odd, but whatever, it could be interesting. angle in the faction as well? hopefully we get an explanation next time, as the faction just doesnt seem to click iyam.
awesomein ring action, i love the warriors tournament. i look forward to ep3.
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