Jesseversion1
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Nov 14, 2010 6:15:31 GMT -5
Here is a move from my match im working on for my fed. WSW - World Stopmotion Wrestling   What do you think? Rate & Reply Please [ btw i made this at 4am ] |
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Post by M on Nov 14, 2010 6:28:32 GMT -5
Very nice Jesse.
But why were you animating at 4am -_-
Geh, i've been awake for 37 Hours straight...
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The jump could of had more movement in the legs, the rope bounces looked good, the twist was great but a little choppy, the move could of had a bigger impact, maybe a middle and bottem rope shake and the reactions looked like they got cut off, but it is part of a match so yeah...
Just wondering, are you going to edit the string when the whole match is done?
It makes it look a whole lot better.
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Post by Jesseversion1 on Nov 14, 2010 6:36:12 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting, Yes I'm going to edit the string when im done filming it. And i just felt like animating even though it was past 4am  For some reason i just like animating at this time. |
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Post by NEW™ on Nov 15, 2010 15:14:59 GMT -5
Good job! I liked the animation overall, even at 4 am in the morning. It was smooth as usual, going up was good, good job on not making in fidgety because a lot of animators tend to do that, such as me. I did see some string although, I didn't think it was too stiff on the jump up onto the ropes, going onto the other rope was stiff though, and also saw some string somemore. Matt didn't move through the animation, not floaty at all, very creative, saw no shadows or hands, I guess the reaction could have been lacked, but the impact needs somemore work. Not shaky, blurry, and the lighting was great. Good job for an animation at 4 am in the morning.
OVERALL: 7/10
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