June
Main Eventer
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Post by June on Nov 20, 2010 10:14:09 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Nov 20, 2010 10:47:00 GMT -5
That was fantastic June! Andre handicap match, Mattel jobbers, Orndorff, Murdoch, Orton, Taylor, what an action packed episode. It's all coming together with the new show I love it. Your poses are excellent and I love the addition of Bruno as announcer.
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Post by shiftyeyes on Nov 20, 2010 11:14:49 GMT -5
Hmm, bit indifferent on this show as a whole if I'm completely honest, since most of the things that were good about the show weren't quite good enough to be considered a pro, but not bad enough to be a con either if you understand what i'm saying. The matches had a nice flow to them, which is a good indication of you knowing what you are doing when filming, but the posing looked pretty awkward at some points, and it took away from the matches a bit. You have some good customs, and I like the idea of using youngsters who would later become stars, it gave me, someone from a later generation, a good feel of when this pic fed was based time wise. The lighting on the show as well is inconsistent, dark in some shots, bright in others, try and get it to be one or the other, preferably brighter. While on the subject of pictures, some were quite blurry, so maybe invest in a tripod, or build one out of a stack of books or old tapes. Commentary was pretty solid all the way through, so well done there, probably the only thing I think was consistently good. I am liking the storylines, since it seems less based on ME WANT TITLE MATCH like some of the other feds are, and more on animosity, which I like a lot more storyline wise to be honest, as it requires more creativity. Hosting wise, I have no problem with proboards, as long as you use it correctly, which you haven't in my opinion, as the entire show is stuffed into one post. It causes the show to drag a bit, since your either constantly scrolling or have a finger on the page down button or down directional key. Instead, split the show up into segments, and post them in different topics, with a next button at the bottom of each one linking to the next part. As well, try and make the site look less like a message board, and more like a regular website. If you want some help with that, message me, and I'll set something up for you. Overall, the show was enjoyable, but there's lots of room for improvement. Solid effort dude, keep with it!
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June
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High Fives All Around!!!
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Post by June on Nov 20, 2010 11:19:31 GMT -5
Hmm, bit indifferent on this show as a whole if I'm completely honest, since most of the things that were good about the show weren't quite good enough to be considered a pro, but not bad enough to be a con either if you understand what i'm saying. The matches had a nice flow to them, which is a good indication of you knowing what you are doing when filming, but the posing looked pretty awkward at some points, and it took away from the matches a bit. You have some good customs, and I like the idea of using youngsters who would later become stars, it gave me, someone from a later generation, a good feel of when this pic fed was based time wise. The lighting on the show as well is inconsistent, dark in some shots, bright in others, try and get it to be one or the other, preferably brighter. While on the subject of pictures, some were quite blurry, so maybe invest in a tripod, or build one out of a stack of books or old tapes. Commentary was pretty solid all the way through, so well done there, probably the only thing I think was consistently good. Hosting wise, I have no problem with proboards, as long as you use it correctly, which you haven't in my opinion, as the entire show is stuffed into one post. It causes the show to drag a bit, since your either constantly scrolling or have a finger on the page down button or down directional key. Instead, split the show up into certain segments in different topics, and post them in different topics. As well, try and make the site look less like a message board, and more like a regular website. If you want some help with that, message me, and I'll set something up for you. Overall, the show was enjoyable, but there's lots of room for improvement. Solid effort dude, keep with it! I agree about the pics being blurry at some points, but the lighting being different in some shots is due to the multiple cameramen that Mid-South uses, and if you watched old school wrestling, you would know that the shows were darker, not brighter. But thanks for watching the show and finding something you like about it. This is my 2nd full lenght show, so obviously I have room for improvement. |
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Post by shiftyeyes on Nov 20, 2010 11:27:31 GMT -5
Hmm, bit indifferent on this show as a whole if I'm completely honest, since most of the things that were good about the show weren't quite good enough to be considered a pro, but not bad enough to be a con either if you understand what i'm saying. The matches had a nice flow to them, which is a good indication of you knowing what you are doing when filming, but the posing looked pretty awkward at some points, and it took away from the matches a bit. You have some good customs, and I like the idea of using youngsters who would later become stars, it gave me, someone from a later generation, a good feel of when this pic fed was based time wise. The lighting on the show as well is inconsistent, dark in some shots, bright in others, try and get it to be one or the other, preferably brighter. While on the subject of pictures, some were quite blurry, so maybe invest in a tripod, or build one out of a stack of books or old tapes. Commentary was pretty solid all the way through, so well done there, probably the only thing I think was consistently good. Hosting wise, I have no problem with proboards, as long as you use it correctly, which you haven't in my opinion, as the entire show is stuffed into one post. It causes the show to drag a bit, since your either constantly scrolling or have a finger on the page down button or down directional key. Instead, split the show up into certain segments in different topics, and post them in different topics. As well, try and make the site look less like a message board, and more like a regular website. If you want some help with that, message me, and I'll set something up for you. Overall, the show was enjoyable, but there's lots of room for improvement. Solid effort dude, keep with it! I agree about the pics being blurry at some points, but the lighting being different in some shots is due to the multiple cameramen that Mid-South uses, and if you watched old school wrestling, you would know that the shows were darker, not brighter. But thanks for watching the show and finding something you like about it. This is my 2nd full lenght show, so obviously I have room for improvement. Like I said, haven't seen much in the way of old school stuff so I wouldn't know, but thanks for clearing that up. If this is only the second full length show, then good job dude, because it's not that bad an effort for a beginner. |
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The Warsman
Main Eventer
The one and only...
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Post by The Warsman on Nov 20, 2010 12:48:52 GMT -5
Hey! A new ring announcer in Mid-South! Alright!
Whoa! Big man in the house! Andre is looking like a monster entering the arena! Smothers and Rodz never stood a chance! Ha! I thought Ladd and the Samoans were about to destroy Andre, but Dusek put a stop to that before it could happen! Headbutt from behind and Ladd is outta there! I love it! Great fix-up for Ladd, too!
Anytime I see "Precious" Paul coming to ring, I know I'm in for a treat! Hey! I know that jobber! It's a young Shawn Michaels! ;D Aww, Shawn... You put your head down! DDT and it's over! That just proves how devastating that move is! Lights out in a hurry! Great post match interview by Roberts, sounds just like him.
Murdoch time! I don't like Mr. Warner's chances!
Nice posing with the Mattel Warner body, aren't they fun to use? Ha! Murdoch hit Orndorff with the beer can! Great! These two are as diametrically opposite as two wrestlers can be! But both are great, tough men! HAHAHA! Orndorff cussing out Murdoch! Great! Murdoch hits his devastating brainbuster! Wham! It's over...
Orton vs Taylor, main event time...Orton blocks the dropkick, did he use his cast? ;D Akber "shut your mouths." Ha Ha! Nice trip with the cane by Ak... Orton unloads on Taylor, nice superplex with a sweet floatover into a pin! Uh-oh, payback time by the JYD! Orton distracted, do I smell a five arm coming? Yep! Good match!
I love wrestling on Saturday mornings! Thanks for taking me back!
Awesome work, june!
Wars
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Post by britishinvasion on Nov 20, 2010 17:42:48 GMT -5
This show was awesome! I really get drawn into your fed and I love the way you present it. It's old school flavor is very authentic. I love the handicap match and run in with Ladd. Andre's looking great. Cant wait to see what happens next and to see who else pops up in your fed. Great work.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 20, 2010 22:14:15 GMT -5
I liked it a lot. Fun stuff all around. Might have been a tad long for a saturday morning affair, but that's to be expected. I'm sure you're like me and wanting to get a lot of stuff in and then trying to squeeze it all in with not enough time.
The Andre match was probably my favorite, just cause I used to love those types of things.
Great stuff overall and it's these feds that are making me finally get around to finishing my stuff.
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Post by carly1988 on Nov 20, 2010 22:23:23 GMT -5
Very nice show bud. I really like the Tracy Smothers custom. I might be looking to steal that idea sometime soon  . You and John have really gone all out with this. You're doing an incredible job and hopefully you keep all this momentum up. |
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Post by britishinvasion on Nov 21, 2010 20:30:32 GMT -5
I agree about the pics being blurry at some points, but the lighting being different in some shots is due to the multiple cameramen that Mid-South uses, and if you watched old school wrestling, you would know that the shows were darker, not brighter. But thanks for watching the show and finding something you like about it. This is my 2nd full lenght show, so obviously I have room for improvement. Like I said, haven't seen much in the way of old school stuff so I wouldn't know, but thanks for clearing that up. If this is only the second full length show, then good job dude, because it's not that bad an effort for a beginner. If this is only your second show my hats off to you! I thought you were a veteran with the way your stuff comes out, very professional looking. I cant wait to see where you go from here. |
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Post by indywrestling on Nov 21, 2010 23:41:09 GMT -5
Glad to see andre there man!!!
Your ellering custom is great!! Jake taking out the new kid shawn michaels!
I feel a fued with Orndorff and Murdoch coming along
Orton and Taylor! JYD makes the save!
Wahoo!!!!!!!!, haha, loving it man, great to see it, Nice lengthly show, cant wait for more buddy
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tirva
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Post by tirva on Nov 22, 2010 17:49:29 GMT -5
Solid opening bit with Andre winning over the 2 jabrones! I liked the headbutt to Ladd taking him out. That should be a good match-up!
The string is killing it for me, it really is.
Sweet Jake vs. Michaels. Oh young Michaels got caught! Match served it's purpose! Poses so far are great. I wish each segment had it's own topic, that way it broke it all up a bit presentation wise.
Glad Orndorff hit the Piledriver! Loved when Murdoch tossed the can out at him. Billy Warner is a sweet jobber! Looks like 1-2-3 kid. Murdoch vs. Orndorff should be good.
Orton vs. Taylor lighting is weird. Good match, Nice ending with JYD getting after Orton. This was a great episode. Keep up the good work and fix the presentation, edit out the string and pick the same lighting all the way through. (i changed one show too and it's weird to view)
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