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Post by bad guy™ on Nov 22, 2010 10:28:22 GMT -5
You made no reference to your match at all. Boo sir.  I won't lie, this wasn't all that good. Grammatically, yeah. It was better than normal (though I did find a few spelling errors) so kudos. But there was just...something missing, and that had nothing to do with the lack of match referencing. A journal flashback into Albright's past is a solid idea, I just think you could have done so much more with it, personally. I think that's the missing piece. You could have done so much more. |
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Justin Sanity
Mid-Carder
PEE WEE 3:16
Joined on: Jul 24, 2010 11:11:42 GMT -5
Posts: 415
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Post by Justin Sanity on Nov 22, 2010 16:28:42 GMT -5
i honestly do not care about my RP's anymore. you give me all this advice, i try hard, and still no "good job" or "good RP" i dont give a s**t if my RP mentions my match or noot. just  ing tell me that i ing suck at this s**t and get it over with. it'll save you so much time and yes i do realize that my RP's aren't good. they never will be good. cause you never tell me im improving. stop telling me that i have bad grammar, cause my grammar will never ing improve either. i'll become the worst RPer in WF history and be damn proud of it. |
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Revvie®
Main Eventer
Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
Joined on: Jun 29, 2005 1:04:26 GMT -5
Posts: 4,327
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 22, 2010 16:39:12 GMT -5
i honestly do not care about my RP's anymore. you give me all this advice, i try hard, and still no "good job" or "good RP" i dont give a s**t if my RP mentions my match or noot. just ing tell me that i ing suck at this s**t and get it over with. it'll save you so much time and yes i do realize that my RP's aren't good. they never will be good. cause you never tell me im improving. stop telling me that i have bad grammar, cause my grammar will never ing improve either. i'll become the worst RPer in WF history and be damn proud of it. AHAHAHAHAH...oh sorry  |
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Thunder
Main Eventer
WF 10 Year Member
WFWF Record: 59-60-1
Joined on: Aug 6, 2003 9:44:07 GMT -5
Posts: 2,941
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Post by Thunder on Nov 22, 2010 20:38:06 GMT -5
So you want to be told you're improving and have written a good RP. Well, if you have this attitude you won't be hearing that. People are going to critique and criticize what you write. That's the way it works. It takes time to start writing really good RPs, and even then there will probably be advice from people that you should take. You seriously need to learn how to accept criticism or I don't see how you'll last.
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