Ian
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 14, 2008 8:12:48 GMT -5
Posts: 1,205
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Post by Ian on Dec 31, 2010 18:03:44 GMT -5
and they turned out ok well 1 i like   i dont think its terrible but its not great creds dustins folder :L  i like this and my best reactions me thinks |
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Post by alexgg on Dec 31, 2010 19:18:38 GMT -5
Thesse are really awesome, and not stiff like usual.
They have great flow and good reactions.
The first one had good movements although some more frames are needed in areas as theres a fast speed change and it becomes slightly choppy.
The second animation is alright, could do with a better starting pose but the jump is good and the spins.
Reactions are nice but lack impact.
Good work.
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 1, 2011 13:00:06 GMT -5
That cartwheel was really good, well spaced, joints were well bent, nice spped ect. Though when you got to the flip part it just got fast, choppy and just pretty much the opposite from the start. Green's reactions were alright though kind of looked unfinished, White's were also decent just seemed to end a bit quickly. Overall a decent animation, the cartwheel was great but yeah from there it just went south, honestly if you can do a cartwheel that well I have no doubt that you could have done the spins better had you taken the time.
This one looks better, I felt that during the jump you should of had another frame or two with the legs fully extended, also during the jump I think that you should of moved the bottom back joint more foward and put the arms down more so that the move would of had more mounmentum going into it. Mid air was nice, good amount of frames, well spaced just the spins would of looked better as I said before if you had more mounmentum going into them. Reactions were pretty dissapointing, the Blue didn't have impact of reactions and the Pink stick was missing impact. Good animation overall though.
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