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Post by kezley008 on Jan 6, 2011 16:31:18 GMT -5
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Mr.W²
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Post by Mr.W² on Jan 6, 2011 18:47:06 GMT -5
Spacing is terrible, lots of fidgets, the laying stk is outside the ropes, it also floats into the air before the attacker connects, attacker has no jump, the ring movements are also very unrealistic.
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matfin123
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Post by matfin123 on Jan 7, 2011 17:21:11 GMT -5
good background and nice a sticks but spacing isnt that good and the stick doing the SSP has no jump and seems to float off the top rope and the laying stick is outside the ropes
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 8, 2011 0:45:38 GMT -5
Okay, this is alright seeing as your new. I think that you need to work on some of the more basic stuff at the moment. Like to start off you should of made the height dimension of the animation higher which goes along with the next thing - the stick didn't really jump but instead more or less fell onto the other stick. If your looking to add a reaction to the ring a better way to do it would be to add a thin stick line and put it behind the ring and bounce it up and down whenever a stick hits the canvas. Anywho some parts are rather stiff, you should try to move all the joints in all the frames to avoid this, good to see that you did the reactions. Overall a decent start just work on the stiffness mostly for now and the movements.
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