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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2011 15:25:53 GMT -5
Royal Rumble back story: The Royal Rumble proved to change history once again. The Miz successfully retained the WWE championship against the viper, Randy Orton. The World Heavyweight champion Edge kept his title from Kane. Natalya's reign as Divas champion ended when Michelle McCool pinned Natalya with the help of Layla. The Rumble match pitted some of the biggest stars in WWE today. The final three of the biggest stars today, John Cena , Alberto Del Rio and Wade Barrett. Alberto Del Rio eliminated both Cena & Barrett at the same time. Alberto Del Rio was going to WrestleMania 27.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2011 15:27:01 GMT -5
 Raw Roster Faces: Brie Bella, Daniel Bryan(U.S. champion),Darren Young, David Hart Smith, Evan Bourne(injured), Eve, Gail Kim, Goldust(injured), The Great Khali(inactive), John Cena, John Morrison, Mark Henry, Natalya, Nikki Bella, Primo, R-Truth, Randy Orton, Santino Marella(1/2 tag team champion), Tamina, Triple H(injured), Vladimir Kozlov(1/2 tag team champion), Yoshi Tatsu Heels: Alex Riley, Alicia Fox, CM Punk, David Otunga, Heath Slater, Husky Harris, Justin Gabriel, Maryse, Melina, Michael McGillicutty, Michael Tarver(injured), The Miz(WWE champion), Sheamus(2010 king of the ring), Skip Sheffield(injured), Ted DiBiase, Tyson Kidd, William Regal, Zack Ryder  Faces: Beth Pheonix, Big Show, Chris Masters, Christian(injured), Edge(World Heavyweight champion), Ezekiel Jackson, JTG, Kaitlyn,Kelly Kelly, Kofi Kingston(Intercontinental champion), Rey Mysterio, The Undertaker Heels: Alberto Del Rio(2011 Royal Rumble winner), Chavo Guerero, Cody Rhodes, Curt Hawkings, Dolph Ziggler, Drew McIntyre, Jack Swagger, Jey Uso, Jimmy Uso, Joey Murcury(injured), Kane, Layla, Michelle McCool(Divas champion), Trent Barreta, Tyler Reks, Wade Barrett  NXT Rookies: Brodus Clay(Pro: Ted DiBiase & Maryse), Byron Saxton(Pro: Dolph Zigler & Vickie Guerrero), Connor O'Brian(Pro: Alberto Del Rio), Derrick Bateman(Pro: Daniel Bryan), Jacob Novak(Pro: Chris Masters), Johnny Curtis(Pro: R-Truth) |
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Post by shiftyeyes on Jan 8, 2011 15:37:24 GMT -5
STICK WITH THIS PLEASE.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2011 18:36:27 GMT -5
 January 31st, Pittsburgh Pennsylvania Raw opens with The Miz bragging about how Awesome he is. Miz is talking about how he beat Randy Orton fairly last night at Royal Rumble. Randy Orton comes walking in the ring. Orton talks about that he is going to become the WWE champion once again at Elimination Chamber. John Morrison came out and said that on the 1st RAW of the New Year he gave Miz the fight of his life. Michael Cole stood up and announced that the RAW GM has made some Elimination Chamber qualifying matches for tonight. Cole then says the first match is coming up next and it is Mark Henry vs Randy Orton. COMMERCIAL BREAKRandy Orton vs Mark HenryThe match had back and forth action in the beginning. Orton then tried to hit the RKO early in the match, but was soon reversed by Henry. Mark Henry hit the t Randy Orton kicked out. Randy Orton then hit the RKO to win the match. Winner: Randy OrtonJosh Matthews interviewed The WWE champion, The Miz. Miz said that it didn't matter who is in the Chamber he is going to walk into WrestleMania 27 the WWE Champion. COMMERCIAL BREAKDaniel Bryan vs Ted DiBiase (w) Maryse Ted & Bryan started with a Lock-Up that Ted won. Later on in the match, Tyson Kidd came out and distracted Bryan and DiBiase capitalized by hitting Dream Street to pick up the victory. Winner: Ted DiBiase (w) MaryseThe Nexus is shown backstage talking about how John Cena just wont quit on making his own life a living hell. Punk said that he will take care of Cena next week in the Main Event. COMMERCIAL BREAKA promo was shown about Alberto Del Rio winning the Royal Rumble and how he will be on RAW next week. John Morrison vs William RegalIn our second Chamber Qualifying match of the evening. John Morrison hit a flying kick and hit Starship Pain to qualify. Winner: John MorrisonCOMMERCIAL BREAKJosh Matthews now interviewed John Cena. Cena stated that he will face Punk anytime, and wants a Falls Count Anywhere match for his match with Punk next week. Melina vs Gail KimMelina and Gail Kim went toe to toe in this weeks RAW, Melina dominated the match and hit Gail with the Last Call to win. Winner: MelinaAfter the match, Melina continued to attack Gail Kim, eventually Eve came down to chase away Melina. COMMERCIAL BREAKThe Nexus(Justin Gabriel & Heath Slater) vs Kozlov & SantinoLate in the match, Husky Harris came out and interfered by attacking Santino when the ref wasn't looking. The Slater hit a suplex on Kozlov that led to the 450 splash. Winner: The Nexus Alex Riley and the Miz was talking on how Riley could help him out in the Chamber and thats by qualifying next. Riley said that this is going to be his shining moment by defeating John Cena next. COMMERCIAL BREAKJohn Cena vs Alex Riley (w) The MizAlex Riley took some cheap shots during the match. Miz got in the ring but Cena threw him out. Cena then delivered a Attitude Adjustment on Riley to get the win. Winner: John CenaAfter, the match the Nexus came out and attacked Cena. The Nexus was standing tall over Cena to end the show. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2011 19:10:04 GMT -5
 February 1st, Pittsburgh Pennsylvania The show opens with Matt Striker saying that the last four rookies are going to be competing in a Obstacle Course later on tonight and that right now will be competing in a Trivia game. Derrick Bateman scored 2 points, Brodus Clay scored 0 points, Byron Saxton score 1 point, Johnny Curtis scored 3 points. Johnny Curtis is the winner. Brodus Clay then went to attack Curtis but Byron Saxton made the save. The rookies start brawling but the pros broke up the fight. COMMERCIAL BREAKJohnny Curtis vs Alberto Del RioOur opening contest of the night pitted Rookie, Johnny Curtis vs 2011 Royal Rumble winner, Alberto Del Rio. Del Rio made quick offense in the match and won with the Cross Armbreaker. Winner: Alberto Del RioCOMMERCIAL BREAKBrodus Clay vs Derrick BatemanBrodus Clay and Derick Bateman fought for a good 10 minutes, but the match finished when Clay hit the ICU on Bateman. Winner: Brodus ClayCOMMERCIAL BREAKIt was now time for the Obstacle Course. The Course was easy, you had to run through 12 tires, jump over 3 different walls, do 25 push-ups, balance on a balance beam and push a cart over the finish line. Brodus Clay completed the course in 54.6 seconds, Byron Saxton finished in 34.9 seconds, Derrick Bateman finished in 34.7 and Johnny Curtis finished in 37.5 seconds. The winner of the Obstacle Course is Derrick Bateman. |
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Post by legendkiller8 on Jan 8, 2011 23:16:04 GMT -5
Some decent shows, so far. Nothing really to heavily judge. Good luck.
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Post by Matt on Jan 9, 2011 0:53:03 GMT -5
Your format is gross, your grammar is poor at times, and you lack the ability to write a compelling show. Your shows lack backstage segments and storyline advancement, which is truly the biggest downfall of this dairy.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2011 20:27:42 GMT -5
 February 3rd, Detroit Michigan Alicia Fox vs Brie Bella (w) Nikki BellaBrie Bella beat Alicia Fox by switching places with Nikki. Winner: Brie BellaCOMMERCIAL BREAKZack Ryder vs Yoshi TatsuYoshi Tatsu beat Zack Ryder with a roundhouse kick. Winner:Yoshi TatsuCOMMERCIAL BREAKAfter the commercial break, Josh Matthews interviewed Heath Slater. Slater said that he is going to show former Nexus member Darren Young how he is better then him. Darren Young vs Heath SlaterHeath Slater got the victory after interference from other nexus members. Winner: Heath Slater |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 13, 2011 20:40:49 GMT -5
Like the backstory on Young/Slater on Superstars. Qualifying matches on Raw were predictable, but that's realistic for WWE nowadays... decent shows, keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2011 14:51:26 GMT -5
 February 4th, Detroit Michigan The show opens with Alberto Del Rio coming out and saying that he is going to WrestleMania 27. Wade Barrett then came out saying that he should be the one going to WrestleMania. Kane then came out and said that he wants another match with Edge. Edge then came out and said that he is going to be champion until and after WrestleMania. Teddy Long then came down and announced that he has already made Chamber qualifying matches for the Chamber match. COMMERCIAL BREAKDolph Ziggler(w) Vickie Guerrero vs Kofi KingstonIn the first Chamber qualifying match of the night. Kofi Kingston hit the Trouble In Paradise to win. Winner: Kofi KingstonBig Show is being interviewed by Scott Stanford. Big Show says that he will beat anyone in his way to become World Champion. COMMERCIAL BREAKBig Show vs Jack SwaggerIn the second Chamber qualifier, Big Show knocked out Jack Swagger to advance. Winner: Big ShowA video package was shown about the induction of Randy Savage in the Hall Of Fame class of 2011. COMMERCIAL BREAKKelly Kelly vs Layla(w) Michelle McCoolLayla got the count-out victory by having Michelle distracting Kelly. Winner: LaylaAfter the match Lay-Cool attacked Kelly until Drew McIntyre made the save. COMMERCIAL BREAKRey Mysterio vs Tyler ReksIn our final Chamber qualifying match, Rey Mysterio hit the 619 for the 1-2-3. Winner: Rey MysterioScott Stanford then interviewed Edge. Edge told Scott that Del Rio would not be able to make it to WrestleMania after he is done with him tonight. COMMERCIAL BREAKEdge vs Alberto Del Rio(w) Ricardo RodriguezIn the Main Event of the evening, Edge hit a spear and when he was just about to get the win Ricardo took out Edge out of the ring. Kane then came out to attack Edge making Edge win by disqualification. Winner: Edge |
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Post by Sam on Jan 14, 2011 19:23:21 GMT -5
1 - Your format is bad, I would change it by either centering the text or just centering the the superstar vs superstar parts
2 - Your details on the matches are really poor. Three to four sentences would be fine, but not one sentence, especially for shows like Raw and SmackDown. Superstars is the kind of show were I would only use a one sentence detail for a match
3 - Add more backstage segments and in ring promos and detail them some more. Your opening promos are fine, as they are the most detailed out of every show you've posted
There are a few more errors you need to work on if you want this to get better.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2011 19:54:34 GMT -5
 Elimination Chamber Card so far.... Sponsored by WWE MattelWWE title Elimination Chamber match The Miz(c) vs John Cena vs John Morrison vs Randy Orton vs ? vs ? vs  vs  vs  World Heavyweight title Elimination Chamber match Edge(c) vs Kofi Kingston vs Big Show vs Rey Mysterio vs ? vs ? vs  vs  vs  |
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Post by legendkiller8 on Jan 17, 2011 22:06:04 GMT -5
-I was expecting for Kofi Kingston to enter considering Ziggler will most likely defend at EC.
-Show over Swagger is the most realistic call as WWE tends to do this.
-Layla over Kelly Kelly is the fine either way, Layla being a champion before gives her a slight edge I guess.
-Mysterio over Reks is good. But I really hope Reks makes a way back into the EC though.
-Edge over Del Rio is a great main event actually. A good call here.
-An actually very good show, though I wish the layout were better. I enjoy this.
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