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Post by dazwwe on Jan 25, 2011 17:14:29 GMT -5
 or a whore. First ani in...I don't even remember how long, it was fun animating again though so I might make more.  Thoughts, suggestions, etc? Edit:cred to Alexgg for the style. |
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Post by wwetypo on Jan 25, 2011 17:30:02 GMT -5
Alexgg deleted his account because he decided it wasn't worth posting. So he can't tell you off for not crediting but hey.
Pros
1: The rise was ok but a little stiff and too many frames and the knee bend was a little weak.
2: It was not floaty but the twist was a little too fast.
3: The jump was pretty ok.
Fails:
1:Their was no rope bounce.
2: It had a lame reaction.
3: The purple didn't do anything really after reaction
6.3/10
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Post by dazwwe on Jan 25, 2011 18:12:30 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply, for the stand up I was trying to get it as close to the way Gabriel does it as possible, guess it could've went better.
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Post by Mr.W² on Jan 26, 2011 7:04:16 GMT -5
I like this, [:
The rise was smooth, but needs an extra frame, it looks like he springs up last minute, kinda ruins the flow, it would also be better if you deleted the frames where no joints are moving, also ruins the flow, the pre jump is kinda weak but the jump itself is okay, could be better if more height was used, the spins are fast but work well, purples reactions are nice reds could be abit stronger, impact is good as well as the animation speed.
[AnimationSkill=7/10]
[AnimationComplexity=5/10]
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Post by TheNinthCloud on Jan 26, 2011 13:54:25 GMT -5
Pretty good, had decent movements and what not. Perfectly smooth. The only real flaw is that there was no jump. It looked liked he was glued to the turnbuckle and he barely lifted up. The reaction seemed a bit quick and rushed.
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Post by picfedguy on Jan 26, 2011 23:50:21 GMT -5
Pretty good, spacing was kind of there but could use some touching up, didn't really like the pause during the jump. During the jump you should have given the stick more height as apposed to kind of just having it fall downwards. Spins were nice. Not too stiff, reactions were there but lacked impact. Good job man with some more I'm sure you'll start to pick it up again.
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