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Post by whwchannelv2 on Feb 22, 2011 19:47:29 GMT -5
Hey Everyone, well i did a build up for my show a few months back meh.. i failed to deliver.. and i didnt produce it.. But this isnt really a " show " its a promo for a match On my show. if that makes any sense.. just a hype up for a match basically. My show will be up very soon! No lies :3 But yeah this is to decide who undertakers WRESTLEMANIA opponent will be! Note - This is my first time doing somthing like this! so please dont be too harsh!Link whwchannelv2.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=general&thread=1 |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 22, 2011 19:57:31 GMT -5
Oh man i love this! new feds popping up all over the place! I will check this out and edit after i watch welcome to pic fedding!
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Ok I am glad you finally decided to put up something after promising for so long. Heres my thoughts, your pics are crisp but WAY too dark. You need some kind of ambient lighting so your viewlers can see what the heck is going on. Also a bit too large and too close. But that being said your poses were decent and hopefully you can put together a whole show soon.
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Post by whwchannelv2 on Feb 22, 2011 19:58:30 GMT -5
Ha  Ah Ok mate & Thankyou. |
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Feb 22, 2011 20:16:25 GMT -5
Hey, it's you! I remember your world famous promo from a while back: "My Aim is to make this picture fed, the best Pic Fed EVER Hopefully, with support from you guys the Viewers, The picture fed will become one of the greatest, if not THE Greatest!" At least you finally managed to put something out... I were you I'd ask to have this moved to the discussion area maybe, since you are saying yourself that it is not really a show... I think your "intro" didn't play out so bad, the concept was actually good, perhaps the execution fell a bit short, which may be due to, as you say, this being the first time you do something like this. Pics were pretty big and stuck together, same with the text, making it hard to follow through. I did however, oddly enjoy watching HHH beat the living daylights out of Taker, Paul and Kane, leaving aside the fact that your fed really needs a Spell Checker, lol. I always enjoy (this is my personal point of view) a brief beginning that can really get you hooked on a single storyline versus a clusterf@#k of wrestlers, matches and story lines that don't get anywhere fast. You were, as I recall, planning to kick off your fed with a 80 (100? 200?) man rumble... glad to see you downplayed it and stuck to a minimalistic, yet actually solid start. I think you have material to advance on this little HHH/Taker (plus Kane, plus Paul) feud and maybe introduce 1 or 2 other stories as you advance. I always thought: "Man, this kid is talking real loud before actually putting anything out, setting himself up to be a real walking target if he doesn't make his talk walk". However, staying low and silent has helped you out, and this modest beginning I believe puts you in the right spot to actually pull out what may be an entertaining fed, kiddo. My two cents, for whatever they may be worth. |
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June
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Post by June on Feb 23, 2011 5:47:15 GMT -5
I'm glad you are following through with this. I like the look of your Taker, and damn Triple H was pretty sadistic. Looks like The Game has opened the gates of hell.
I look forward to more.
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Post by whwchannelv2 on Feb 23, 2011 12:10:11 GMT -5
Ah thanks for the responses & yeah i forgot to do the spell checker ha it was like 1am at night so i was abit out off it. & The darkness i cant help that i dont have a lamp which i can use to brighten things up, and using flash on my camera makes it mehh a little bit to light. And yeah the royal rumble was abit silly with the 80 man paha. Thanks for the responses |
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Post by Callum1993 on Mar 14, 2011 16:26:45 GMT -5
Any news on this
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PWSPhil
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Post by PWSPhil on Mar 14, 2011 19:10:32 GMT -5
I liked this segment, but i want to help you with some advice since this is your first show.
1.Make your pictures a little smaller. Use tinypic.com and resize them to message board size.
2.Your pics need more light. Any way you can do it get more light on those poses!
3. While the story was good you may have done too much. That was like 3 weeks worth of beat downs in one segment. Unless your going right to the Wrestle Mania match you could have had HHH beat down Taker,Kane, & Paul Bearer in the weeks leading up to Wrestle Mania instead. Keep this in mind when you go to do shows.
Well thats about it, maybe you can get a piece of cardboard to tape your entrance to so its not on your bed sheets. You have a good show, keep working at it!
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