Squatch
Main Eventer
Joined on: Feb 17, 2010 14:16:53 GMT -5
Posts: 3,597
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Post by Squatch on Mar 13, 2011 12:06:33 GMT -5
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Post by breakthewallsdown on Mar 13, 2011 12:08:01 GMT -5
cool dude
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Post by brm on Mar 16, 2011 20:24:30 GMT -5
Ok, first ROE show. I really liked your lighting for the RVD entrance. It really made the arena look big as well as giving a cool visual. Styles vs. RVD is an awesome opening contest. I'm not really a fan of starting the match off with a Styles Clash through a table, as I have no idea why these guys are fighting or why AJ would want to do that to RVD on the first match of the first show, but that's just me. I do like how you are using string though. Your poses seem to be good for a beginning fedder, and I can imagine you will grow into a very good poser in time. Again, I don't really like how Styles is doing finishers for every single move. He Styles Clashed RVD through a table, then Styles Clashed him on the floor, then Styles Clashed him through glass, then attempted a 4th Styles Clash. He also did a 450 splash in there somewhere. That almost sounds like a parody of a fed when it's written out. Work out the pacing of your matches in the future, and realize that nobody is going to only use finishers in a match. Wow, all of a sudden text! Haha. Nice simple Punk custom. Hmm, Punk / Sting lasted like 2 seconds. I'm not even sure what happened there. Foley has MORE mystery opponents? 3 on 1 TLC match sounds extremely one sided, but maybe Foley is playing a heel. Anyway, this was ok for a first. I feel that the youtube format gives it no real structure, and I feel I don't know why anything is happening. It feels too much like a pic fed and not enough like a real fed. If I were you, I'd do a normal picture and commentary fed, or give more text explanations in the youtube format. Overall though, you seem to be enjoying yourself, which is a good thing.
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PWSPhil
Superstar
Originally Joined WFigs in Feb 2007
Joined on: Feb 15, 2011 0:56:20 GMT -5
Posts: 652
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Post by PWSPhil on Mar 18, 2011 8:57:20 GMT -5
The poses were good but you need to ad alot to story & presentation. I understand RVD vs AJ Styles but why are they fighting? Why does AJ feel like giving RVD 937 Styles Clashes in a row? Once you get the story side going you will have a better fed, but as far as poses it was good.
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