ROE Nitrous Episode 1

Wow ok dude your show is really confusing. I like the use of Mattel figures and the arena is pretty good but you need more fans. However the moves you are performing are really poor. Most look sloppy. The poses in the Dolph Kane match were pretty poor. What was up with the ending? I mean i'm guessing Dolph won but it wasn't really clear. Then the commentary was stupid because they were complaining the camera missed it yet they are sitting directly in front of the ring. I don't know why Punk was fired as I haven't seen your other fed. Then the main event why did Christian attack Cena? How did Christian win with a punch on Edge? Why were there 2 Edge's? Why did Big Show pick up Cena? Why does Cena have a head injury from a Killswitch?. Overall dude one of the strangest feds I've seen. Keep at it though, Pic quality was decent, just need to make what's going on clearer and try to make moves look better

Well man, it was alil confusing, id make the pics alot smaller, imageshack allows you to do more than 1 at a time, i didnt understand the 2 edges thing. one more thing if i could suggest it, use cardboard or get gurad rails man the vcw tapes look bad, my opinion, hope i helped bud

Alrighty Ben lets get to it. I liked some of your shots, and poses and the action was good in your match. I am so glad you are having fun with this cause thats what its all about. On to the critique side. I dont remember who told you to use videotapes and garbage bags but please stop. The garbage bag in particular comes off really terrible. We talked about things you could use for an arena background and piece of black foamboard costs like $4 and will greatly improve your arena look. Didnt you use a black background in your first episode? Also while I enjoy your enthusiasm I cant tell which fed is which anymore. Is this a new fed or an existing fed? You switching between feds and styles of pic fedding is greatly confusing and its hard to follow where its all going. That being said you are doing a good job as you are still pretty new to this, at least you are producing shows and not constantly promising a show and never delivering cause your too busy with school work and or your waiting for figs in the mail constantly so kudos to you on that.

I haven't been around, so I don't know how many previous feds you have had. As soon as you click the link you can tell your pretty new to this, which isn't a bad thing because everyone starts somewhere. If your really dedicated into becoming a great pic fedder, heres a few things you should know.

Presentation is KEY. You can have the best ideas, but if you truly do not "draw" the viewer in, it will never reach its full potential. Here are some tips to help the appeal of your show, that I can tell just from looking at the first few pics.

- Resize the pictures. If the picture is too big the viewer will not be able to grasp it as well or easy.

- Get a solid background. The bags are not a horrible idea, but just look a bit tacky. In my fed I had used black poster board for the background. It brings the colors out a lot more and overall makes the pics look better in my opinion.

- Get rid of the tapes.

Now you've acknowledged the show is short and I udnerstand you probably just wanted to put something out because of your excitement. You want to make your pic fed as realistic as possible. Don't shy away from having a few pics as an "opening". I would say to have ATLEAST three matches, with three segments or so to progress and emphasize storylines. If possible even try to incorporate some graphics (in entrances of superstars is an example). Remember you want to catch the viewer.

It was pretty hard to follow your show, I'm not sure if your missing pics, but it certaintly seems so. The more pictures the better your match flows, which makes it more enjoyable. I can see your trying with poses, but you have to work on these. At times you were either taking the pic too close, the joints of the figures looked stiff, etc. You want to move your figures as much as you can. Even make the ref more involved in the match. I see you payed little attention too him and was often left in the same pose for many of the pics. It seems like a minor thing, but these little things really make a difference in the long run. Commentary also can improve, but the more you do it the better you will get.

Overall keep on trying. Just focus on developing one fed, and not start over and such. Really think of storylines and the best ways to deliver them. As long as your dedicated you will be fine, just take your time with future shows.