Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again!

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Jul 3, 2011 0:51:26 GMT -5

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Post by CF9™ on Jul 3, 2011 0:51:26 GMT -5

Hmm, the intro layout resembles my Jackson Black diary's quite a bit...

This has some bright spots, but other times it seems like it's lacking something. I think if you keep this going it could end up being a nice little story. It's lacking that journal sense, I don't know. It seems you cover too much ground in each entry. But overall I think that with every entry, you improve. Keep it up. I don't know, I think you may have read my Jackson Black journal,

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Jul 9, 2011 21:02:07 GMT -5

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Post by dbdanielson on Jul 9, 2011 21:02:07 GMT -5

Diary of a Superstar: Entry Seven

Well, I'm currently sitting in my former bedroom here in North Carolina, currently with a s--tload of beer cans on the floor, on my bed, hell, I'm typing this with one in my damn hand. I finally got in touch with AJ, who was completely worried sick asking me constantly where I was. I told her what happened and that I'd be back in Florida next week, and that was the end of that. I was also called by Dusty Rhodes and Joey Mercury on several occasions, refusing to take their calls until finally, I look on my Caller ID and see a call from an unusual source: Philip Brooks. (CM Punk to those who don't know who he is.) I pick up my phone and I got into a conversation with my wrestling idol for 1, maybe 2 hours. Punk had heard from some of the guys who work both WWE and FCW about my brother's passing, and I told him straight-up, "My brother's dead, I'm suspended for no reason, and I'm piss-drunk." Punk, well, he set my ass straight. He told me that I didn't need to solve my problems with getting in people's faces and drinking until you pass out. So now, sitting here on my bed, slightly sober, and more-than-likely gonna get a major hangover. All being said, I'm gonna get some sleep, Punk's words to straighten my ass out pounding through my head.

-NJ Michaels

Mike Bockwinkel WF Legend Joined on: Oct 16, 2008 17:58:29 GMT -5 Posts: 6,780	Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Jul 9, 2011 22:52:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Mike Bockwinkel on Jul 9, 2011 22:52:08 GMT -5 Man, this is getting very good! I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to happen next!
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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Nov 4, 2011 0:07:40 GMT -5

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Post by dbdanielson on Nov 4, 2011 0:07:40 GMT -5

Ain't no grave...can hold my...diary...down...

it. This is back and stuff.

Diary of a Superstar: Entry Eight

Well, I'm back in Florida after attending my brother's funeral. The service was fitting for a guy like him. He was the star quarterback, got the full ride offers to college, and still busted his ass in and out of the classroom. Also, it was the first time I had taken a ride in a limousine since I was like 8...didn't necessarily think I'd be back in a limousine under these circumstances. My suspension of course is now over, and I can get back to doing what I do best: being a future WWE Superstar, WWE Champion, and WWE Hall of Famer...I hope. The talk I had with CM Punk has really set my ass straight. I've decided that I'm giving up drinking beer for the rest of my life, because honestly, Punk was right. I can't drown my problems in beer, nobody can. But for now, a little sleep in a hotel room with my Chickbuster girlfriend won't hurt. Sleep tight, my friends.

-NJ Michaels

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Mike Bockwinkel WF Legend Joined on: Oct 16, 2008 17:58:29 GMT -5 Posts: 6,780	Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Nov 4, 2011 0:45:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Mike Bockwinkel on Nov 4, 2011 0:45:34 GMT -5 NJ is going straightedge?? WTF?
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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Nov 11, 2011 0:04:51 GMT -5

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Post by dbdanielson on Nov 11, 2011 0:04:51 GMT -5

Diary of a Superstar: Entry Nine

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After two weeks that featured intense training sessions, a talk with Dusty Rhodes, and more than a handful of talks with AJ, I can honestly say I feel the best that I've felt since I signed my name on that contract. I took a lot of time in a room alone, thinking and concentrating on how hard I busted my ass to get here, and how I intend on reaching the next step: television. I feel like I'm in great shape, I've trimmed down to 231 pounds. I have a great mindset, I'm...working...on giving up drinking...well, at least as much as I used to. I've re-tooled my moves, including adapting a new finisher, a Lifting Reverse STO I'm calling the Fall From Grace. I may not get to the point in WWE I neccessarily want because I use a moveset that's constantly adapting. I've learned planchas and topes down in Mexico, I've learned MMA striking and Puroresu over in Japan. I've worked over half of the states in this country. I've pretty much done everything there is to do in pro wrestling, except reach WWE TV. I have the confidence (maybe overconfidence!) that I could get the call any second to work with the "big boys" up on the main rosters. But, for now, FCW is an amazing alternative. So I guess now, those of you guys who read my Diary of a Superstar have taken a deep road into the mind of a WWE superstar. For now though, I'm going to go work out, then tomorrow, I have a tag team match, teaming with Dean Ambrose (Jon Moxley to CZW marks) against Kevin Hackman (Andy Leavine...yes...the Tough Enough winner, Andy Leavine.) and Seth Rollins (Of course, he's Tyler Black. But, I mean, honestly...why him again?)

-NJ Michaels

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Tag Team Match: Dean Ambrose/Devon Richards vs Kevin Hackman/Seth Rollins

The match begins with Dean Ambrose and Seth Rollins circling the ring, locking up with Ambrose locking Rollins in a headlock. Rollins pushes Ambrose into the ropes, Ambrose however stops himself and is quick to exit the ring, citing that he "wasn't ready." So, as he climbed in, he sneakily slapped the shoulder of Devon Richards. Richards shrugged and jumped over the ropes into the ring. Rollins and Richards locked up, but Richards quickly got Rollins on the mat in a Fujiwara armbar attempt, but Rollins rolled out of it, and dropkicked Richards! Richards gets to a knee, checks his mouth, and gets back up, ducking a Rollins clothesline, jumped, catching Rollins as he rebounded off the ropes with a Pele-esque kick to the jaw! Richards went for the cover, but only got a two count. As the match progressed, Hackman entered and toyed with both Richards and Ambrose before the two worked together and slammed the big guy shoulder first into the ring steps with a double team Irish Whip! Ambrose kept Hackman down and out on the floor as Richards worked over Rollins, but Rollins pushed off a DDT attempt, went for his Superkick, but Richards ducks and hits a jumping Enzuigiri to the back of the head! Richards then signaled for the end, picked Rollins up, and planted him with the Fall From Grace, giving his team the win!

Winners: Dean Ambrose/Devon Richards in 14:21 via Fall From Grace on Rollins.

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Nov 14, 2011 11:26:05 GMT -5

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Post by Red Dragon on Nov 14, 2011 11:26:05 GMT -5

I'm enjoying this, your writing is neat and easy to follow. The story itself seems abit jumbled but I'm sure it all makes sense as this progresses. I don't like the smaller updates, I'm sure you can write more than what you did in number 8. I didn't particulaly like entry 8, seemed like Punk just converted you and it was as simple as that. Which doesn't seem to realistic but then reading in entry 9 that your struggling giving up makes it intresting. Maybe you could expand on that a little. The match write up itself could be longer, if your gonna do a match write up then you may as well write up the whole match not just segments with "the match continued then". I think it would be intresting if you wrote the matches in 1st person rather than 3rd. Good luck and keep this up.

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Dec 1, 2011 21:33:35 GMT -5

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Post by dbdanielson on Dec 1, 2011 21:33:35 GMT -5

Diary of a Superstar: Entry Ten

Well I've finally bothered to write my tenth entry in this damned diary. I must say, the whole "not going to drink beer thing"...yeah...that didn't really work. Needless to say, I'm hungover. Again. And to make matters worse, AJ and I got into a little argument last night and now she's mad at me. I was too drunk to even remember what the hell I even said (or did, I don't know.) So pretty much, I'm in an awful mood. The worst part of this situation though? An old ex-girlfriend called me, and went on for thirty minutes professing that she made a mistake dumping me, that she's become depressed and is now a drug addict. This of course, was a girl who lied to me about having breast cancer. So, I did what every guy who's sick of a girl's BS would do: Hung my phone up. Label me harsh, but I was never known as the nice guy growing up. I'm not afraid to speak my mind, and being from a conservative North Carolina family, I could argue with a fence. Though, stubborness does have its advantages....how did I get to this? Meh, I'm gonna sleep this hangover off. Later.

-NJ Michaels

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Dec 5, 2011 12:42:33 GMT -5

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Post by Red Dragon on Dec 5, 2011 12:42:33 GMT -5

Decent enough entry. Started well with the continuation of the drinking storyline but then didn't go anywhere. This whole argument with AJ is briefly mentioned and moved on, then onto your ex and then its all over. You just rushing your way through points. It seems you have a good story planned out but your just rushing it. Take you time and write more. Do emotions and make the character likable to the reader. He doesn't have to be a goody-two-shoes but he needs to be relateable. Good luck and keep this up.

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Rise of NJ Michaels: It lives again! Dec 24, 2011 0:00:16 GMT -5

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Post by dbdanielson on Dec 24, 2011 0:00:16 GMT -5

Devon Richards vs. Epico w/ Hunico

The match begins as Richards and Epico lock up, but Richards pushes him off and goes low, dropkicking Epico in the knees! Richards smirks as he locks in a Mexican Surfboard! Epico refuses to give in and Richards lets go of his arms and pushes his legs forward, sending Epico face first into the mat! Devon then takes the liberties of tossing Epico between the top and middle ropes. Richards then climbs the turnbuckles, turns around, and goes for a moonsault, but he misses and he crashes arm-first into the barricade! Richards grabs his arm yelling in agony as he yells "I think it's broken! I think it's freaking broken!" The referee holds up the X and calls for the bell as Richards cannot continue.

Winner: Epico via ref stoppage at 3:45

Breaking: FCW star breaks arm, out 6-12 months

During a match between FCW stars Epico and Devon Richards, Devon Richards broke both the radius and ulna in his left arm. Richards has undergone surgery to repair the broken bones, and doctors have given Richards a time table of 6 months to a year for his full recovery to return to the ring. At this hour, Richards is still hospitalized in stable condition at a local Florida hospital. He's expected to be released from the hospital within the coming days.

OOC: Updates to Diary of a Superstar will continue to happen during the recovery period, hopefully more often since he's now unable to perform/train.

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