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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 7:12:34 GMT -5
Location On the road to Viridian. So Ben sets off on his journey to Viridian City. Ben decides to walk past the Poké Mart to see if there are any offers on, when he bumps into a young lad with a Tepig.
Kid: Sorry I knocked into you!
Me: Ah it's ok, can I catch your name?
Kid: Sure it's Lewis, whats yours?
Me: My names Ben. When did you start your journey?
Lewis: A few days ago, I should be in Pewter city right now facing the Gym leader, I'm heading into Viridian Forest shortly. When did you start your journey?
Me: Same as you to be fairly honest. Did you say your going into Viridian Forest?
Lewis: Yup. Been waiting a few hours to set off and I need to grab some stuff before I go through.
Me: Can I come through with you, I'm only ten and I'm scared something might happen to me as I walk through.
Lewis: Well thats fine with me!
Me: Thank you, thanks alot!
Lewis: We need to nip to the mart first, then we'll set off!
Me: Ok. What is it you need to get?
Lewis: Just wait and see!
So, Lewis and I took a quick trip to the Poké Mart. I didn't see any offers, so I decided to wait outside as Lewis went in. Lewis wasn't long, and returned with a Soothe Bell and some Potions. I bucked up the courage and said to Lewis.
Me: Lewis, you know after Viridian Forest will you take me around Kanto with you so I can complete my dream aswell as your own?
Lewis: Well I wanted to travel alone so I didn't get put into any trouble, if you do come with me around Kanto, promise me something?
Me: Anything Lewis anything at all!
Lewis: You promise to stay with me at all times, and you don't ask to come home unless its really important alright?
Me: Yes Lewis. I'll do anything.
Lewis: Well what we waiting for!
And with that, we both set off for the Viridian Forest. It only took us around 10 minutes, which went by fast as Lewis and I were talking and having fun. We reached the front of the Forest and Lewis decided it was lunch time. He fed his Axew and Tepig some soup, but his Gastly didn't seem to like it. Lewis then promised to let Gastly out of his Pokéball in Pewter City. I fed Elekid some bread I had purchased earlier, he seemed to enjoy it quite a bit, which made me happy. Lewis returned Axew and Gastly to their Pokéballs, but Tepig was no where to be seen. We shouted on him for 5 minutes, but nothing. Lewis was beginning to get very worried by this point, so Lewis and I decided to run into the Forest to look for the little Tepig. As soon as we enter the Forest we hear the squeal of Tepig. We ran about and still couldn't find him, until we heard the rev of some motorbikes. We headed in that direction and and we heard the bikers say 'Get that Tepig'. When Lewis spotted the bikers he ran towards them, I had never saw them before, but I presumed Lewis must have. Lewis told me their names were Jon, Steel ad Bold, but I gathered that as their names were on their biker jackets. Lewis confronted the Bikers.
Lewis: Hey you Big Biker Bully's leave my Tepig alone!
Biker Bully Jon: Why what you gonna do about it!
Biker Bully Steel: YEAH! What you gonna do about it!
Biker Bully Bold: YEAH!!
Lewis: Battle you!
Biker Bullys (All together): Bring it on little boy!
Lewis: Come on then Tepig!
Tepig quickly shuffled over towards Lewis and I. I walked away from Lewis, but stayed near by. The Biker Bully then sent out a Tepig, exactly like Lewis's, but looked a bit rougher than the average Tepig, the small Pokémon breathed fire out of its nose before attacking Lewis's Tepig with Take Down, 'DODGE IT TEPIG' Lewis Said, 'Use TACKLE!' It got the other Tepig but hardly did anything.
'Tepig use Take down double power!!' Said the Biker
It hits my Tepig hard and he stumbles to the floor hardly being able to get up, I then wispers into Lewis's ear 'use nitro charge'. Tepig slowly got back up to its feet. 'Time to try a new move Tepig! USE NITRO CHARGE!!' Said Lewis. Tepig ran towards the Bullys Tepig and hit it with a Nitro Charge knocking it to the floor. 'Tepig we did it!! Time for a rest Tepig return!' Said Lewis.
Tepig returns to the ball whilst Lewis and I both smirk and say, 'Now go away you Big Biker Bullys' They got on their bikes after returning the Tepig and drove off. Lewis and I both say, tomorrow..we face the gym! Had to copy most from Lewis to fit in with the story  And yes I change from 1st person to 3rd etc, I don't care  |
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 7:23:11 GMT -5
SUB STORY Back at Oak's lab, Oak is pacing around.
"I can't believe I gave that Sandshrew to Gary, what a fool I am. That Sandshrew was meant to be kept well conceled. I hope Giovanni doesn't mind I lost Project X. But I bet he has already experimented on many other Pokémon, that he won't remember about Sandshrew"
As Oak finishes rambling to himself, the lab door is busted down by two Team Rocket Admins.
Admin 1 "Oak, Giovanni has sent us to collect Project X, where is he?"
Oak hesitates for a minute, then responds.
"Well you see, the thing is.."
Admin 2 "Oak, if you have lost Project X, i'm afraid you know what will happen."
Oak looks around, to see if there is a quick fix to this mess.
"Lost it!? How dare you accuse me, Prof. Oak of losing a Pokémon. How dare you."
The admin look threatened by Oak, they back off slightly.
Admin 1 "We're very sorry Oak. Just make sure you give X to Giovnni by Sunrise, or else there will be consiquences."
And with that, the two Admin leave. Oak is in a state of panic, as he now has to find Project X or else... |
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 8:12:04 GMT -5
Location Viridian Forest/Pewter City Lewis and I powered through the Forest. We saw many Pokémon, like Wurmple, Weedle, Rattata, Pidgey and we even saw a Pikachu run past us at one point. We both loved the Forest, and were sad to leave it. I was even sadder as I hadn't found the Pokémon I was looking for. That was, until we were about to leave the Forest. I saw a helpless Caterpie, caught in an Ariados's web. I ran over to free the Caterpie, when the Ariados returned and shot string at Lewis and I.  "That's it, Elekid use Quick Attack!" I said. Elekid ran towards the Ariados, and hit it with quite a bit of force, knocking the Ariados through it's own web, freeing the Caterpie. "Way to go Elekid!" I said, delighted with his work. The caterpie looked in bad shape, so I ran towards it. I searched through my bag for a potion, but none were to be found. Luckly, Lewis was on hand to lend me one. "Thanks Lewis, I owe you one." I said. "Don't mention it, I can't bare to see a Pokémon in pain." I sprayed Caterpie with the potion, and she ran towards me.  "You wanna join me on my journey Caterpie?" I said with glee. Caterpie's eyes widened and she jumped towards me with force, almost knocking me over from my crouched stance. "Take that as a yes then. Ok, just let me officially catch you." I threw a Pokéball at Caterpie, it shook once, twice and finally for the third time, sealing Caterpie into the ball, and securing her place in my team. "Alright! Finally, I now have my first bug Pokémon!" I said with great delight. Lewis looked pleased for me, and we continued walking out of the Forest. We exited the Forest and headed for the nearest Poké Centre. We went inside and rested our Pokémon. I let Caterpie out of her ball and she let out a loud 'Cater-PIEEEEEE'. So there we were, Me, Lewis, Axew, Gastly, Tepig, Elekid and Caterpie. All resting in the centre together after a long start.      We finished resting and Lewis returned Tepig and Axew to their Pokéballs, leaving Gastly out as he promised. I returned Caterpie to her Pokéball to let her rest. Elekid wanted to stay out, so I let him. We exited the Poké Centre and walked around Pewter City. We noticed a Piplip near the Pewter City Gym, it looked lonely, and when it saw us, it smiled. She waddled over towards us, still smiling.  |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2011 8:45:53 GMT -5
Lewis: Interesting chapter as you are now the first person to be traveling with someone. Good subplot with Tepig dissapering. I didnt like how it was able to knock out a stronger Tepig with one fire type move though.
Josh: Not a fan of you cleanly beating Brock like that. Too unrealistic. The chapter was written nicely though.
Ben: The only bad thing is that you had to copy Lewis`s story which is the negative side of traveling with people. Catching Caterpie was nice. The ending was in interesting and I wonder if your gonna catch that Piplup.
Also the subplot with Oak and "Project X" was very good. Im guessing the Sandsrew was apart of that which is why it went crazy like that. Good job at dropping hints early while keeping the mystery.
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 8:57:12 GMT -5
Cheers Angus, yeah, I didn't really mind the copying, I just added some more bits in . And yeah, Sandshrew went mental due to the experiment Oak and Giovanni conduced on him. More will be revealed soon  |
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 9:50:12 GMT -5
Location Pewter City Lewis and I watched as the Piplup waddled towards us. Elekid and Gaslty stand their ground to protect us.
"Elekid, relax, I don't think she is here to harm us" I said.
"Yeah you to Gastly, chill." Lewis said.
Elekid and Gastly drop their guard for the time being.
Piplup walks towards Lewis, and starts tugging on his leg.
"What is it Piplup?" Lewis asks.
"Pip, Piplup, Pip" Piplup replies.
Elekid and Gastly jump up and start following Piplup as she runs away.
"Guess we ought to follow them, don't you think Lewis?" I said.
Lewis looks at me as if I had just said the most obvious thing ever. We chase after Piplup, Elekid and Gastly until we reach the Pewter City Museum. We see the same two robbers I saw at Oak's lab.
"Lewis, I have saw these two before, they robbed Prof. Oak when I went to get Elekid. They must be up to something. We have to find out what." I said.
Lewis and I, along with Piplup, Elekid and Gastly enter the Museum.
"Hand over the Old Ambur and no one gets hurt." Said one of the robbers.
The museum curator is shaking as he pulls the Old Amber out of his pocket.
"Hey, stop right there." Lewis shouted.
Me and Lewis run towards the robbers.
"Hey, look, it's that twerp from Oak's lab. He must have followed us here." Said the second robber.
"Actually, I didn't follow you, it was more fate that brought us together again. Now, hand over that Old Amber or else." I said
The two robbers laugh.
"Or else what? You will battle us? HA! Let's go then" Said robber one.
I look to Lewis.
"Let's do this Lewis. I'll take the first, and you take the second. Deal?" I said.
"Deal!" Lewis replied.
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"Elekid, GO!"
"Kid Kid!" Said Elekid.
"Ha, your puny Elekid is no match for my Pokémon!" Said the robber. Houndour GO!" The robber exclaimed.
"Dour!" Houndour screeched.
"Quick Elekid, use quick attack!"
"Dodge it Houndour, and use Ember!"
Elekid charges at Houndour, only for Houndour to dodge at the last second, hitting Elekid with an ember swiftly after.
"Elekid, are you ok? Get up and use quick attack again!"
Elekid gets up and charges for Houndour again.
"Do the same again Houndour!"
"Elekid, switch to Low Kick!"
Elekid jumps and kicks Houndour. Houndour goes flying back and can't get up.
"Gah, Houndour, return."
"You did it Elekid, congrats buddy!"
As Ben celebrates, Lewis rejoins him after beating the other robber.
"Now, hand over the Old Amber and no more harm will be caused to you." I said
"Here, take it. We will get it another way" Said robber 1.
The robbers throw the Amber onto the ground and run out of the Museum. Piplup runs towards the curator, with the Amber in hand.
"Lup, Pip, Pip Lup." Piplup says.
"Thank you boys, I was in a right pickle until you showed up. Allow me to introduce myself. I am the Curator of this Museum. The Old Amber was given to us by Steven, the current Pokémon Champion. He found it on his quests and it is believed, that when restored, the Old Amber can be turned into Aerodactyl, a prehistoric Pokémon of flight. This is my Piplup, thank you for keeping her safe. As a reward, I would like to present you both with this."
The curator hands the boys two stones.
"Now, these are no ordinary stones. These are evolution stones. They can be used on certain Pokémon to evolve them. The most commonly associated Pokémon is Eevee. This Pokémon has seven different evolutions, all occur when different situations arise."
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 9:50:42 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2011 11:52:13 GMT -5
^ Pretty epic, I must say. I didn't even think about using the museum. Glad to see continuity with the robbers... will we see them again perhaps? Plus I like the dark twisted storyline of Pokeymans experimentation. Hopefully, though, your story isn't brought down and confined with your traveling partner. And Lewis' too.
I should get at least one chapter done today.
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 12:28:00 GMT -5
You may see them again Also, me and Lewis talk about what's going in the next chapters, so don't think we'll be brought down |
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 15:51:21 GMT -5
Lewis and I have decided we will write a part each. But I will still write my Sub Story whenever |
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Post by King Silva on Jul 3, 2011 16:28:43 GMT -5
Yeah the traveling together is cool but it is difficult to make a story with another person so I think I'll stay solo but that isn't to say I'm against ever seeing one of you in my journey or meeting a friend that I can control 100%. My next part should be up within 2 hours. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2011 16:40:27 GMT -5
So.. um.. yep. I meant to write something different than this today. This whole episode was supposed to be a paragraph in what will be my next story. But it turned into a whole episode on its own.
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Post by King Silva on Jul 3, 2011 16:48:48 GMT -5
@ Immigrant ~ Nice entry. I think it was great. The museum battle was nice. I almost thought you would get the Piplup but it was the museum guy's so yeah. At least he gave you some evolution stones. I take it you are keeping the type a secret for now? @ James ~ Cool you caught a Hoothoot. He shouldn't have pecked your tent!  I'll be writing mine now. |
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 3, 2011 17:04:30 GMT -5
You're right, I don't get to keep it And yes, a secret... for now |
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Post by King Silva on Jul 3, 2011 17:56:49 GMT -5
This one was a lot shorter than I thought but I will be doing Part 4 later today for sure. And Part 5 will probably be tomorrow..----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------  Trainer Name: Silva Age: 18 Pokemon: *Silva started his journey with an Eevee:   *The pokemon egg he has was a starting his journey/birthday gift from his sister Stephanie who is a breeder. Location: Pallet Town heading north to Viridian City. Badges: N/A Traveling With: No one but maybe later he’ll meet some friends. Entry # 3: "Meeting a Pokemon Icon"Silva: "Eevee we are in Pallet Town! Now we need to go find Professor Oak's lab." [Eevee makes a happy sound.] Chris: "Why waste your time going to see that overrated old man?" Silva: "Umm no one was talking to you and overrated? Professor Oak is a pokemon icon!" Chris: "Whatever bro.. I guess you can forever be in my shadow as I win the Kanto badges before you."  Silva: "Really you can win a badge? ;D We'll see about that. Now I have to go so bye." [Chris walks towards Route 1 while Silva heads in the direction of the big white lab that is Professor Oak's home.] ************************ [Silva knocks on the door to Oak's Lab.] Silva: "Hello?" Prof Oak's Assistant: "Hello, can I help you?" Silva: "Yes I need to talk to Professor Oak about updating my pokedex." Prof Oak's Assistant: "Okay I will tell him." [Oak's Assistant talks to Prof Oak about his visitor.] Professor Oak: "Ahh how are you doing young man? What is your name and where are you from?" Silva: "My name is Silva and I'm from Cinnabar Island. I just started my journey today actually!" Professor Oak: "Don't you think it is a little late? Why didn't you start earlier?" [Silva is embarrassed but speaks.  ]: Silva: "I would have started years ago but my dad would have none of it. He finally gave in this year so here I am!" Professor Oak: "I see. So what is your problem?" Silva: "You see my sister Stephanie gave me this old pokedex of hers and she recommended that I get it updated from you since it is a few years old." Professor Oak: "Ahh so Stephanie is your sister? How is she? Silva: "Yes she is. She is doing well. She actually told me she is going to be heading to Cerulean City to visit some friends of hers." Professor Oak: "That is great. She is quite the Pokemon breeder and coordinator. I remember watching her win one of the Master Ribbons. You are lucky she is your sister. Tell her I said hi. Well let me see this pokedex, it shouldn't take me long to update it." Silva: "Here it is professor." [Professor Oak quickly tweaks with the pokedex and tells Silva it is 100% updated.] Silva: "Thanks so much professor." Professor Oak: "So I take it you are on your way to earn the 8 badges of Kanto? Your Eevee seems to really enjoy you. That soothe bell looks great on her. Is that the only pokemon you have?" Silva: "Yes that is my only pokemon. Eevee and me are best buddies. [Eevee has a cute expression on her face:  Silva: "I do have a pokemon egg that my sister gave me." [Silva pulls out his pokemon egg from his backpack.  ] Professor Oak: "That is quite nice. It doesn't seem to be moving all that much but eventually it will start to fidget so that will be the sign that it is getting closer to hatching. Do call me when it hatches I want to know what pokemon it was." [Oak writes down his phone number and hands it to Silva.] Silva: "I will call you when it hatches professor. I should be off to Viridian City now so bye Professor Oak." [Professor Oak and his assistant say good-bye to Silva as he walks north to Viridian City.] |
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Post by Honkey on Jul 3, 2011 19:23:58 GMT -5
Well, here's my first entry into Honkey's Pokemon Adventure So, there I was, sixteen years of age. Asleep in my bed was the location. I was dreaming of my future life, I mean I was soon to graduate high school with a major in science. I aspired to be a doctor like my father. My mother told me stories of my father as a child. I had never meet him, but my mother told me he left when I was two weeks old to further perfect his craft, and that one day he'd return home. I lied there in bed, dreaming my favorite dream, my graduation from Indigo Plateau College. I was next in line, prepared to walk across the stage. I step on the stage, recounting my life, remembering my friends, my schooling, the crazy college parties, and most importantly, fantasizing my future work aside my father. As I shook the dean's hand after receiving my diploma, he looked me in the eyes and asked the question, "Are you a boy or a girl?"I shot back a puzzled look, but he just repeated the question, "Are you a boy or a girl?" He then started shaking. At that moment I woke up. So there we were, caught in an awkward stand off. Myself, and some 60 year old pedophile in a lab coat. "Good, you're awake," he said, "Now are you a boy or a girl?" I continued giving him a puzzled look, but nonetheless I responded. "Umm... a boy? What exactly are you going in my room at 6am in the middle of summer again?" "Good, I see," he retorted, "Now, what's your name?" "Oh God," I thought to myself, "I'm gonna get raped. Oh well, just agree, don't fight it, get it over with, call the cops." "Honkey," I responded with a lie. "Thank you very much for your cooperation, I'll see you later son," he spoke as he exited my door. I watched him leave my house through the window. All of Pallet Town was asleep not knowing my interaction with this man, but as I continued spying, he entered the world famous Oak Laboratory. I sat there analyzing everything that just occurred. The man. The confrontation. His entrance into the Oak Laboratory. It then all added it up. That man was Professor Oak. He tried molesting me. Professor Oak is a  ing pedophile. I immediately ran down stairs to tell my mother. I flung open her door, awakening both her and our pet Nidoran♀. My mother looked shocked as I awoke her, but I then explained what just happened. "Oh, it's fine, just go to the Lab." I couldn't believe my mother uttered those words. "But mom he..." "It's okay, it happens all the time. Now, get dressed, and go to the Lab." As I dressed myself, I tried absorbing everything that had happened. As headed for the door, I came to this conclusion: My mother just told me to go to the Lab and get molested by a creepy old dude who studies Pokemon. This cannot end well. |
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Post by stonecold316 on Jul 3, 2011 19:28:15 GMT -5
Honkey's gonna get raped! (x3) lol. jk, bro. Seriously, pretty good first entry, although a little short. (that sounded wrong!)
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Post by Honkey on Jul 3, 2011 19:32:42 GMT -5
I plan on making fun of every "flaw" in Pokemon and making characters as over the top as possible.
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Post by King Silva on Jul 3, 2011 19:54:31 GMT -5
Interesting start and direction Honkey.
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Post by Ben - #6 Munchie on Jul 4, 2011 2:33:29 GMT -5
@ Silva, nice entry, little short but got the point across. Like how Oak knows your sister @honkey um.... |
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