Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Oct 15, 2011 13:43:25 GMT -5
 Credit to whoever made the ring |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Oct 15, 2011 14:07:00 GMT -5
Why hello there.  The Animation is stiff, so work on that. Is this your first animation? If so, it's pretty good. |
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Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Oct 15, 2011 14:12:20 GMT -5
Nope its not my first, i've animated before but not for a while and when i did before i only made a few , so im still a beginner |
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Tylor
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Post by Tylor on Oct 15, 2011 14:13:04 GMT -5
Nope its not my first, i've animated before but not for a while and when i did before i only made a few , so im still a beginner Ah, ok. Cool. |
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Post by picfedguy on Oct 19, 2011 11:39:03 GMT -5
This is an alright animation man, first off though not too big a problem or really one at all but you should have used a different color on the black stick - it's not too hard to see but would stick out better in a lighter color. Anyway the run thing up to the top by the Orange stick looked quite odd as it looked like the stick was going to take the step then kind of just floated up to the top - it would have been better had you just done a jump instead. You seem to move the joints around reasonably well though there are still some stiff parts like during the flip the arms and legs could have been extended a bit more. Reactions looked decent but the main problem throughout the animation is that it is too fast or choppy, to fix this up you just gotta start using enough frames to get a nice realistic speed. Overall pretty good, for now I'd say mainly just working on getting a good consistent speed going.
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Post by Jynxx on Oct 19, 2011 14:28:16 GMT -5
This is an alright animation man, first off though not too big a problem or really one at all but you should have used a different color on the black stick - it's not too hard to see but would stick out better in a lighter color. Anyway the run thing up to the top by the Orange stick looked quite odd as it looked like the stick was going to take the step then kind of just floated up to the top - it would have been better had you just done a jump instead. You seem to move the joints around reasonably well though there are still some stiff parts like during the flip the arms and legs could have been extended a bit more. Reactions looked decent but the main problem throughout the animation is that it is too fast or choppy, to fix this up you just gotta start using enough frames to get a nice realistic speed. Overall pretty good, for now I'd say mainly just working on getting a good consistent speed going. Thanks for the good in-depth reply man! |
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Post by extragravy on Oct 19, 2011 14:30:03 GMT -5
Its actually really good! The running was choppy and stiff and a little slow and laggy, but the airtime, was great, IMO a good ani, nice job bud.
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Post by Jynxx on Oct 19, 2011 14:38:13 GMT -5
Its actually really good! The running was choppy and stiff and a little slow and laggy, but the airtime, was great, IMO a good ani, nice job bud. Thanks |
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