Hey guys, I'm looking to start a fed, known as PCW, I'm not really an avid poser, but I like to do it, I hope you like this match, I will set-up a website soon, So I can post all my future work, Enjoy guys!
Dolph Ziggler vs John Morrison:
Christian vs Drew McIntrye vs Matt Hardy: Coming soon...
I can't access my YouTube account atm, but I'll try to get it to work if I keep with the video style. I'll start commenting on some more shows from here on in.
A new show is always cool and I like how yours looks so far! The pics are nice and sharp with some neat angles and good poses. The high-flying shots look great, nice editing. Your arena setup is also nice and clean, I especially like that 6-sided ring! I know video pic feds usually get critiqued for the limitations in commentary/storytelling that are helpful in enhancing and explaining a feud.
I'd suggest having your commentating team at least give us some pre and post-match info so that we can better put the in-ring action in some context. Just adding something as simple as "Ziggler's jealous that Vickie Guerrero was making googly eyes at Morrison earlier tonight and wants to teach him a lesson!" or "This is a Hair vs Hair match, so both of these guys are giving it all they got!" can instantly change the stakes and how we see the match.
Well, I hope this helps! You have a really good start, I hope you have fun with it and keep working on PCW. Thanks for sharing!
Micro
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Hi, only needed to watch 30 seconds to realize you are pretty damn good, man. Nice set up, good photography and great poses. With the overall quality you have right now, anything you do I think would be watched. Like Micro says, even the most minimal commentary helps a video fed, you can do something like in the old mute movies, that would be cool.
Hi, only needed to watch 30 seconds to realize you are pretty damn good, man. Nice set up, good photography and great poses. With the overall quality you have right now, anything you do I think would be watched. Like Micro says, even the most minimal commentary helps a video fed, you can do something like in the old mute movies, that would be cool.
haha, thanks, I've gotten use to using string and making poses not stiff from animating, thanks for the reply, I'll be making my own site soon for making my fed, so I'll include commentary on that.