Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot

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Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 16, 2012 0:31:29 GMT -5

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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 16, 2012 0:31:29 GMT -5

Well these are my introduction ani's to the stick figures board, This
is my first time ever creating something along the lines of pivots, and
I am very pleased with the results, I would like to take the time to
thank Tylor for stepping me the right direction and showing me the
basics and K3 and Ethan who both responded when I asked about
pivots and thanks to there contributions I have now been able to
create these. I really hope you all enjoy them and please leave
feedback on how I can improve when possible. Thanks again guys
also I would like to conclude this by saying I'm a big WWE Fan,
wrestling in general fan and I would like to become friends with
everyone of you guys on this forum.

Well that's it for me.

Making a few adjustments, but for now...

Complete.. 100% (First Ani may you mind..) Yes bad I know calm down

To be honest, I can't believe I made this..

Credit to Ethan for the pack and oKaneO for everything else.

Last Edit: Jan 16, 2012 10:28:34 GMT -5 by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~

Nov 18, 2015 18:00:18 GMT -5 Grumpyoldman said:

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Tylor Main Eventer Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5 Posts: 4,437	Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 16, 2012 0:34:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Tylor on Jan 16, 2012 0:34:25 GMT -5 It's a pretty good first animation. It does need to be sped up though. Maybe space the stick apart further each frame. Stiff, so move the joint more. Nice beginner ani!

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Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 16, 2012 9:15:51 GMT -5

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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 16, 2012 9:15:51 GMT -5

Jan 16, 2012 0:34:25 GMT -5 Tylor said:

It's a pretty good first animation. It does need to be sped up though. Maybe space the stick apart further each frame. Stiff, so move the joint more. Nice beginner ani!

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Thanks for helping me out Tylor, you been a great help to me
and I really appreciated it as I stated in the intro

Last Edit: Jan 16, 2012 9:45:28 GMT -5 by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~

Nov 18, 2015 18:00:18 GMT -5 Grumpyoldman said:

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Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 17, 2012 12:41:57 GMT -5

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Post by alexgg on Jan 17, 2012 12:41:57 GMT -5

Welcome to the sfab.

First off, you are using way too many frames, theres no spacing.
When sticks for example are falling, they need to be moved further apart from their last postion each frame. Will make them look to fall faster, gravity.
But with this, each joint needs to be moved accordingly too. Otherwise it gets stiff.

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Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 19, 2012 10:44:39 GMT -5

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Post by Ian on Jan 19, 2012 10:44:39 GMT -5

Hey Thar

Its Okay For A First. im not going to lie to you. you really need to get a good grasp of the basics. for example its really Stiff and Choppy and There isnt any spacing..
Meanings

Stiff- When The Joints Are Not Moved Enough
Choppy - When The Animation Itself Looks Too Jumpy and Not Smooth
Spacing - Makes The Animation Realistic

Also There are Fidgets Which is When You Move The Joints In All Different Directions Which Makes It Look Well Not Great Anyway..

If You Need Any More Help Either Contact Me Via Pm Or By My Msn Which is ianflannigan@hotmail.co.uk.

hope you understood what i am trying to say and if you choose to add me i shall try my best to help you get better. even if i hardly animate myself

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Pepsi Plunge Off A Ladder! (Edited) First Pivot Jan 19, 2012 17:49:53 GMT -5

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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 19, 2012 17:49:53 GMT -5

Thank you so much guys, Hopefully when I decide to make another ani I'll take
everyone's advice into practice. Glad the newcomer getting so much constructive
criticism I really do appreciate it, it helps me out a lot.

Last Edit: Jan 19, 2012 17:50:45 GMT -5 by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~

Nov 18, 2015 18:00:18 GMT -5 Grumpyoldman said:

But stay away from The Brooklyn Diner ($50 for 3 coffees & 3 pieces of pie) and Ellen's Stardust Diner. The wait staff at Ellen's are aspiring actors/singers and belt out show tunes all day.

Click Here If You Want

Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 16, 2012 0:31:29 GMT -5

Post by Tylor on Jan 16, 2012 0:34:25 GMT -5

Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 16, 2012 9:15:51 GMT -5

Post by Ethan on Jan 16, 2012 14:04:12 GMT -5

Post by alexgg on Jan 17, 2012 12:41:57 GMT -5

Post by Ian on Jan 19, 2012 10:44:39 GMT -5

Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 19, 2012 17:49:53 GMT -5