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Post by Scotty on Jan 16, 2012 20:06:45 GMT -5
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 16, 2012 22:24:00 GMT -5
Not bad Scotty, the drop was a bit choppy so take more pics there. The impact
was good but Morrison lacked a reaction, and the string was visible but that's
not an issue. Regardless good ani but clearly not your best.
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Post by axelwarjp on Jan 17, 2012 2:10:13 GMT -5
I actually like what you were going for. If you had add a reaction, (maybe build up), it would have came out good. Morrison flinched or twiched in the air but other than that it was smooth.
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Post by Scotty on Jan 17, 2012 12:01:34 GMT -5
I actually like what you were going for. If you had add a reaction, (maybe build up), it would have came out good. Morrison flinched or twiched in the air but other than that it was smooth. I was thinking of the ani you made with Punk through the glass :3 |
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Post by Scotty on Jan 20, 2012 15:33:40 GMT -5
updated
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Post by jwsowner on Jan 22, 2012 17:34:42 GMT -5
Good job on both, but these are your two main problems here:
The camera is SHAKY. It might be the tripod, but what I do if it's the camera is I use a 2 second timer for every picture. The weight of the finger pressing down on the button is different each time you press it which results in the camera being pressed down as well and this results in a shaky image overall. I never have my hand on the camera as the picture goes off. Don't do that.
Also, the figs are shaky. Jeff Hardy was twitching on the ropes, now it may just be because he is a drugy or because you don't look at each pic after you take it to see if it matches up with the others WITHOUT fidgetiness. Also, Paul london was floaty, probably because that moves is very unrealistic. Besides that, good job, nice dog, and that Macho Man movement when he turns over at the very end was the smoothest part I have ever seen in anyone of your animations. That is all I have to say.
7/10 on London/Hardy, 5.5/10 on Miz/MachoMan/Dog
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