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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2012 23:09:46 GMT -5
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Tyler Black
Main Eventer
the former #1 Tyler Black fan/Tyler F'n Black
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Post by Tyler Black on Jan 26, 2012 0:10:05 GMT -5
First match was good saw your finger on the senton
Syko promo was great, great idea for a character
The King of Hearts Jimmy Jordan is another character i like he has a great look
Wild Will Jefferson annoys me because his head is so damn big reminds me of a bobble head lol
MegaStar is another cool character
To quote WCM Izzy some of the guys you made are pure genius others are odd
I think u made a mistake during the 6 man match u used the same picture twice but have different commentary on the second one.
really didn't like the way MegaStar and Jimmy Jordan were eliminated felt like it was too early in the match
Love the show so far
I like styles but damn he was dominating
the Mob is an awesome faction just felt like that match was a little short
Logan Brookes is by far my favorite. Syko is my second favorite
Assassin is cool too
When Assassin alabama slamma'd Brookes into the turn buckle Brooks should have had a better reaction like holding his back
Your commentary had some gramatical errors like kick to the the guy instead of kick to the gut but thats not a big deal
Overall i really liked your show 7/10 you cut great promos
I think you could benefit from three things.
1. String
2.Longer matches
3.Better reactions to moves
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2012 8:39:20 GMT -5
Hey what happened to those turnbuckle covers i sent you?
First off I am so glad you are pic fedding again and kudos to you for ACTUALLY doing the fed you announced! I am not a big fan of head swaps, that being said you did do some nice things. I agree with what ardilita said, it would be great if you could use a basement wall as a background, something dirty and gritty ya know, but you seem to be going for the same type of setup you used previously. The action was good, the poses were decent and so forth. I am hopeful you will continue on and be a good addition to the board!
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Jan 26, 2012 8:52:50 GMT -5
Hi! It’s good to have a new show to watch and rave about. I want to be as honest as I can, without knocking you down, man. It would be awesome if you had a basement, cellar, attic or underside of a kitchen sink cabinet or something like that to film in, it would give it that “basement” look you seem to want to go for, unfortunately, right now it just looks like a big bedroom. The idea of the “low-riding” ring is something I tested once or twice, and it’s neat to see it put into use. I like the use of DAs, as big a fan of RAs as I may be, DAs will always be superior for posing. Wild Willf Jefferson creeps me out with that bubble head syndrome he has going there, one too many chairshots to the head? As I said in another thread, your costumes are BIZARRE, but as you go watching them, they start to get under your skin and they develop personalities of their own, which is a good thing. It was an interesting first show and I found the action easy to follow and for what I have seen, it can only get better! PD: When someone else's show makes me want to set up my arena and work on my own show, it's a damn good sign that it's a damn good show!  |
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derekbrazen
Superstar
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Post by derekbrazen on Jan 26, 2012 17:06:53 GMT -5
Just finished watching your show, took me over 2 hours bc I kept having to stop and do other things.
At first I thought it was going to be difficult to get into the mix-match wrestlers and not see them as who they're based off, but as the matches went on, the characters started to develop. I think it's mainly due to your commentary, so good job with that.
I agree with others who say it would be great if you could change your background to give it more of the "underground" look your feds going for.
Do you plan on using that computer monitor you have in the background?
I like the mob, I've always been a fan of wrestling stables.
I also have a pet peeve with wrestling figures that have a yelling face like your ref, I find it to be distracting, but again, that's always just been a pet peeve of mine.
overall, I enjoyed your show and I'm curious to see more.
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Post by deskjet on Feb 1, 2012 23:01:21 GMT -5
Like i mentioned in the discussion thread, I like the concept but not the execution. Your arena is turrible, alot of stiff poses, and the pics are too big. Try to give your arena an actual look, do some backstage segments, develop the characters. I've always liked made of characters as it really brings forth originality. Keep workin at it and let me know if ya need any help.
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