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Post by Deleted on Feb 13, 2012 1:33:17 GMT -5
Well, it's past midnight and that means it is Monday and the Underground has returned. Episode #1 of Zero_Distance and the official website are online! Not much to be said here, just view, enjoy and respond!
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Feb 16, 2012 21:44:30 GMT -5
For you, my friend, a detailed reply:
- I've been looking forward to this! - Love, love Styles on commentary. You do a great job of portraying his and Cyrus' character through text. - I take back what I just said... You apparently do an outstanding job of portraying everyone's character through text. Really enjoy the back-and-forth between Punk and Danielson. - You and I write out the results of matches fairly similarly, and I think it's effective -- displays the feel for the match without drowning people in text. I dig it. - I love the explanations of production such as the "paused" black-and-white shot for "During the Break." - You have a good mix of talent. Love the inclusion of Dolph. - Once again, you have the Dolph character down well in text, but I was waiting for one of those classic moments where he just gets on a roll and starts to ramble on about seeming nonsense. - Haha, love the shilling by Cabana. - Digging the use of Compton and I think the cheap victory was the best bet here. Would love to see him continue vs. Kingston moving forward. - Love the boxing-style intros for the main event. - I may have added a little more detail to the main event myself, but it's your show and the description given got the job done in explaining the chemistry of the match. Think you went the right route to have Punk pick up a clean win, though I'm sure it's not over between these two.
Fantastic show. In summary, I dare say you should point anyone looking to start a text fed towards this show for explanation on how to write up a show in a concise but descriptive fashion. Keep up the good work.
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