CWE OWNER
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Post by CWE OWNER on Apr 3, 2012 22:43:09 GMT -5
cwe1.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=cwesmackdownactionSorry its taken ages guys. Fraid it will be awhile before anymore shows as i'm in middle on moving places. But will have my new room with my set up soon. So enjoy this and comment whatcha like and whatcha don't thanks guys
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2012 14:42:08 GMT -5
Good to see you're still around cranking out stuff. Shane nobody has commented on this yet, I think you're one of the good new fedders around here. I'm loving your new setup, although some of the paper stuff is an issue, it does look pretty good overall.
I like the opening segment, although there's a few minor writing errors that I have issues with. Stuff like wreck ship, instead of shipwreck. Of course I've seen some of the self proclaimed best guys around here be able to barely string together a coherent sentence, so you're not as bad as most. Just something to work on tightening up in the future, IMO, because you do have a lot of text. My belief is as much time should be spent on that as is the rest.
Loving the custom DDP referee. He looks great.
Although I detest Miz in real life, you made me interested in that match. One of the best matches pose wise that we've had on here in a while. Lots of high energy and close call action. The post match stuff was as exciting as the match as well. Wicked blood effect.
Loving the backstage stuff with the Rock, as well.
Nice to see some women's wrestling on a show other than UWA and I liked that you were building up a storyline there. Also another custom Ref, groovy.
That split from Morrison looks like it hurts!
The US Title match was incredible. I loved the Rock's ruling there and it sets up a good future storyline. Your poses and stuff are top notch, especially when it's obvious you aren't using string and are working with the limitations of the basic Mattel figures. My only complaint is that we see your hand in a few shots and when we see the top of your arena, we can see the masking tape, etc... However, it's a minor complaint because the match and story was engaging enough to keep me focused mostly on the action.
MVP's own interview show. Man, your fed definitely is not getting enough credit. Very creative stuff. The way you did the slap was great. The change in expression sold the story. Where are those sofa chairs from?
G-Rilla and Regal look to be very dangerous!
Fun main event and an awesome close with the new champion. You built that up well and the Rock's involvement just sealed the deal with controversy.
Overall a really fantastic show. A+ effort.
My only nitpicks would be the commentary and such (just run it through a spell check program and you can fix most your grammar issues) and a few blurry pics/arena tape/hands in a few shots. But those were only ever now and again.
Tighten up a few of those elements and you'll have one of the best shows around.
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 5, 2012 15:08:49 GMT -5
Wow, your show has very high production values and is nicely polished. I’m not a big fan of Mattel figures, but you show just how much good posing you can get out of those Elites. I enjoyed the Daniels/Miz match, very nice stuff going on there. The Rock playing his guitar was priceless too. It’s interesting how your show reflects the feel of what is the current WWE product too. Keep it up, man.
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CWE OWNER
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Post by CWE OWNER on Apr 5, 2012 17:18:25 GMT -5
Wow thankyou guys. I don't care for not getting many replys. Its a shame but oh well. But when i get a review and reply like you guys especially from two great pic fedders. It makes it all worth while. About the crowd. I do really wanna sit down and make a new one i've have this fan set for almost 5 years now. Umm time for an update i think.
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 5, 2012 19:56:28 GMT -5
Don't worry, man, sometimes it takes a few days before those replies start coming in. You have a very detailed and high quality show going on, and it shows you are putting lots of effort into it, not just phoning it in, so just keep fedding! I don't watch the current WWE product, but I'm enjoying your take on it regardless!
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Cena>U
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Post by Cena>U on Apr 5, 2012 22:35:47 GMT -5
Your entrance stage looks amazing and I like that you made each superstar's stage tron(or whatever it's called lol) You do a pretty good job posing the basics but i think your matches would be even better with Elites.
Christian vs Jomo was a nice long ppv type of match up with a lot of near falls Like fandan said it is nice to see some divas action in a pic fed I can see Kane returning to his monstrous ways and making MVP eat his words My fave match was the main event but I was expecting Orton to retain
I really hope that you stick around as I already cant wait for episode two of RAW and Smackdown. Looking forward to your first ppv as well
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derekbrazen
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Post by derekbrazen on Apr 6, 2012 23:13:49 GMT -5
What can I say that hasn't been said already? Great show man! I love your set up, the Titantron is amazing, love the crowd (but yea it's about time for an upgrade, cuz it looks real damn good, but could look even better) & you have very good & interesting story lines. I liked the opening segment, really set the tone for a real good show. I like the backstage setup with Miz, what is it? Good match between Miz & D-Bry, like how you gave D-Bry color. I love theese Royal Rumble promos. 4 weeks til CWE's Royal Rumble, no? That means at least 8 more CWE's? I don't wanna wait that long But, I really like how your building to something that seems important, I just hope It's not gonna take 8 more episodes. Good Diva action, I haven't seen much Diva use on other shows, so it's cool that CWE does. Good match between Morrison and Christian. Could be even better with Elites. Love the V.I.P. set up, real interesting, really like how Kane's expression changed. Really liked that. Good main event, with a great ending. The only things that I think you can do to improve your show is redo your crowd, bc it's great and really gives CWE a personality, it also takes away from it bc it's not crisp. Also there were a few blurry pics, I know that I usually take multiple shots of the same pose just incase I get a blurry pic I didn't notice I have options. Also I could see your hand's shadow in a few pics. I'd also work on your grammar, sometimes it gets a bit hard to read. I'd also hit the "return" button on some of your longer dialog. Sometimes I have to scroll the screen over to read a long piece of dialog. That's king of annoying. But the show was great. CWE is very fun and entertaining. Your shows aren't too long, but it takes time to get through, it's worth it though. That could be a reason feedback isn't rolling in so fast. If anyone hasn't read it I suggest that you do. It's a very good show, worth the read. Good Job!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2012 7:16:36 GMT -5
First off to kudos to you for ACTUALLY posting a show instead of spamming up the discussion board with constant updates and meaningless drivel. Secondly you are doing an amazing job thusfar. I am unfamilar with you so I dont know if you previously fedded or not but THIS is the way to start things off even though its yuor second show. Great quality show, decent arena and awesome storytelling. I enjoy seeing pic feds emulate real life feds, and the way you had the Rock playing guitar had me in stitches! Im not gonna go into a match by match review just wanted to say congrats on getting your fed off the ground and doing it with class and style. This is what pic fedding is all about.
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Post by T on Apr 12, 2012 14:04:58 GMT -5
I did have a big reply written out but then my browser messed up! Anyhoo, the main points were:
-The Rock's character is good and his interference in the US Title and CWE Title matches worked well -Two more title changes though, that's five out of five title matches finishing with new champions, not the best thing to do -Another long show and the Bryan/Miz match was my favourite, in particular Miz's attack after the match
Hopefully you can sort out your move soon!
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CWE OWNER
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Post by CWE OWNER on May 20, 2012 6:57:11 GMT -5
Hey guys just thought i'd let you know moved in to the new place now and ready to start filming later today. Looking really forward to it. Especially showing everyone MY NEW CROWD enjoy
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Post by Deleted on Jun 2, 2012 3:08:10 GMT -5
very awesome cant wait to see more
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Post by skiver on Jun 28, 2012 11:12:46 GMT -5
I would prefer you post in a web cite that actually works.... I see nothing and have created 4 usernames, connected to my fb and my yahoo account and still see the same screen asking me to login....
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CWE OWNER
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Post by CWE OWNER on Jul 3, 2012 19:13:23 GMT -5
I would prefer you post in a web cite that actually works.... I see nothing and have created 4 usernames, connected to my fb and my yahoo account and still see the same screen asking me to login.... Its back up now ! hope you enjoy !
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Post by PhoeniX™: Valoween on Jul 15, 2012 8:45:11 GMT -5
Hello again. Thought I would give Smackdown a view, seeing as I loved your RAW. Brilliant stage. So beautiful. Nice team of JBL and JR. Holy shit...that Dolph stage print out...how much printer ink do you own?! The Rock! He's the GM? Awesome. I contemplated making him GM of my show but decided against it. Haha, love the Spirit Squad and Kerwin White references. Mr. Orton is the champ? Pretty cool. Jericho! Smackdown is shaping up to be epic. Wonder what The Miz has to say? Triple threat match: good main event! Wow, JBL STILL hates The Miz. Yay, Daniel Bryan is shutting up The Miz. Nice Royal Rumble commercial. Miz taps! What a jackass, attacking him after the match. Drew and the MITB contract? Nice segment with The Rock and Orton. Cool match with the Divas. Jomo! I liked his promo, and the CLB reference. I love the shot of Christian walking away with the belt. Shows the beauty of the arena. Rematch after the break? Sweet. Good match, saw your hand a couple times though I prefer Christian to Jomo, but his reign as US Champ could be good. Love the set for MVP Lounge. Kane! Wow, I love the change of scans for Kane...wait its a full figure change to Elite, I didn't notice at first Kane walks away? I'm intrigued as to where this story is heading. Nice match between Matt and Regal, nice intro for G-Rilla too. Good Main Event in progress. Dolph wins?! Thanks to The Rock...by accident I presume. Overall: Great show. I don't know how you have time to run two shows! Great paced matches and segements. Storylines progressing nicely and the different stage print outs for entrances is amazing, but must be time and ink consuming.
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