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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2012 16:14:10 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2012 7:13:53 GMT -5
got quite the load of recomendations for you sir and if you took 'em I think you would do pretty well.
1. Most members (including myself) have a hard time wanting to view a show with no commentary on youtube 2. some of your poses are pretty awesome but you could benefit from string by alot (coming from someone who used to this the same way as you I would know it's only gonna make it better) 3. you could use a better BG cause every once in a while (a lot actually) I see cars photos on the wall couches etc. kinda takes away from the realism (I am guilty of the same thing in the past) 4. there were also scenes where I couldn't tell what was going on so either string commentary or just better posing could have fixed that but over all there some pretty nice poses
as for the show 1. I can't say I really enjoyed the Sheamus vs Kane match but it did hold my interest so you must have done something right 2. Edge vs Morrison was cool to there were some very nice poses incorporated into that match 3.Orton vs Miz was nice although there were a bunch "what's going on here?" shots 4. Bryan vs Gabriel was pretty cool and I would have loved to see that match play out the same way in real life 5. and like I said earlier I had no Idea what was going on with Orton and Kane cause of the lack of commentary why would they have a match when Kane just fought Sheamus and Orton just went against Miz?
in any case hopefully you make a proboards or something and make these improvements and take this advice and make a show twice as awesome
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2012 9:03:33 GMT -5
hey bro! thanks for feedback!
just to let you know, this was a special not a ppv! I was just using unused matches as a 200 sub special so to speak! In other words these are matches that I have made wilst i was board and i just though i would put them out there!
Now is it possible to ask a few questions!
1) I am on youtube so sadly that is the only way to make a fed for youtube! I am going to start making feds that have commentry and put them souly on here! How do u do that? I see alot of people do that kinnd of stuff where they have the picture then underneath the words! If only i knew how to do that!
2) Yeah i agree with the background and that! Hence why i changed my arena yesterday to make it more realistic!
3) I might start using string if i make a show on a proboard!
4) Also how do you get more people to view and comment on my posts as i try to comment on other peoples but sadly i dont get as much feedback at all!
Thanks bro for your feedback!
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Post by derekbrazen on Apr 22, 2012 13:17:15 GMT -5
Hey there Fireball,
Traditionally, people post pic-feds by taking pics with their camera, uploading the pics to photobucket or another pic website like that. From there you can either edit speech bubbles for the comic look that several people use, or you can just add dialog under/above the pic.
This board hasn't been too welcoming to new posters, which would explain why no ones been replying really. You've been signed up for 5 months now, but you only have 13 posts. If you were more active, then you'd prob get some of the more established guys to reply aswell, my guess is that people are waiting too see what you produce before they take you serious and reply to your threads.
Its nothing against you, but guys who have been here for a while have seen so many people come and go, and they don't take people serious til you've proven that you're serious yourself.
I'm gonna watch your video in a bit, so I'll mod my comment to give you my thoughts.
**So I watched your video and overall I enjoyed it** I like how you use Mattel Elite. I personally prefer Elite over JAKSS DA & RA. RA are very limited in their poses, and DA suffer from not being in scale.
You have some very good poses. In each match there was good poses of guys selling a move, playing to the crowd and showing emotion. But you also had a few stiff poses and a few where they just didn't look to be in a natural pose, but awkward balanced to not fall down.
Most of the matches flowed well over all, telling a good story frame by frame. But almost each match also had moments where a few pics were skipped.
The lighting felt a bit too uneven, with several shots being too dark. If you can get even lighting through out your show it would look a lot better.
Your fed would defiantly benefit from a new backdrop, bedroom backdrops ruin the "world" you try to create in your picfed.
If you continue your youtube format, please don't repeat the same song for 12min. But you should try the traditional way shows are put together.
Overall it was a good watch, hope you do more.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2012 14:09:02 GMT -5
ok thanks m8 i appreciate it! Il take your advice!
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