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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2012 17:43:19 GMT -5
www.wix.com/dwl4ever/dwliveFirst of all I know there are too little pictures, but I promise to take more next time .. Secondly I am sorry if there are spelling mistakes In conclusion those who do not understand how to pass then press the buttons require a sign
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 11:29:28 GMT -5
Hmmmm this could be something here. Besides from a blurry pic I really liked it. Great fire effects and I noticed your using wix. Interesting.
The ring was way too small for the action, and there were some really stiff poses, but that being said the presentation was great and you put a lot of effeort into your setup. Work on your poses and expand your ring and you might be onto something here. If this was your first attempt then congrats.
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Post by T on Apr 28, 2012 12:56:50 GMT -5
+Presentation is very innovative
+Love the fire animations for the show starting and different wrestlers entrances
+Interesting roster
-Very small ring
-Commentary was very basic, didn't really expand on storylines or the match other than stating the obvious
-Grammar wasn't the best and some of the wrestlers' names were spelt wrong - not a massive problem, but just takes a bit away from your amazing presentation
Liked the show, loved the presentation and the visual effects. Now you just need to work on your actual federation - storylines, match quality and poses (june might point out that this is a bit rich coming from me), but definitely a promising start.
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Post by WCM's Izzy on Apr 28, 2012 13:37:56 GMT -5
I think I was the only dork that couldn't figure out the remote control was the way to make the images transition, lol. I spent like 30 minutes last night trying to figure it out so I didn't watch your show, but I gave it a shot just a few minutes ago. Wix is cool for presenting shows and yes, lol, the TNA ring is small, but the show was fun to watch, which I think is the important fact, and you managed to showcase lots of wrestlers yet at least for me, it didn't feel like too much. Very cool and if you follow up, I will watch.  |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2012 14:15:58 GMT -5
Thank you all ..
I read the comments and I will try to apply them for my next event
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2012 13:47:29 GMT -5
i noticed the ring changed at participant 4 or 5 haha. other than that, i liked it. those rings are way too small tho.
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