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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 12:48:21 GMT -5
so i have been typing up a couple of things if WWE and TNA got combined and i dont know if they are any good or not. share your honest opinions. DONT BE AFRAID TO SAY IT SUCKS! but also i would like ways i could improve.
Welcome to Raw everybody. We are in New York.I’m your host Jim Ross along side with Jerry, The King, Lawler. Mr. McMahon is in the ring. “Tonight we will begin a tournament for the WWA championship and United States Championship each tournament will have 6 Superstars and the first match for the U.S championships is next.”
Tyler Reks comes out to great heat from the crowd while his opponent Brian Kendrick comes out with a mixed reaction. The Match starts with some back and forth grapples with no moves coming out of them. Reks gets some big right hands and Kendrick is on his knees. Reks goes for a big boot and Kendrick ducks out of the way. Reks turns around and meets a dropkick. He goes down. Kendrick pins but Reks kicks out at 1 ½ . Reks get ups and Kendrick puts him in a head lock and goes for a sliced bread but Reks breaks the hold as soon as Kendrick hits the ropes and he spills out of the ring. Kendrick makes it back in at the 5 count, and Reks nails him in the face with a big boot. Reks puts him in a torture rack to set up for a burning hammer, but Kendrick lands on his feet puts him in a head lock, and hits the sliced bread for the 3 count as Kendrick advances to the triple threat final match.
Raw GM Eric Bishoff is in the ring with huge heat from the audiences. I’m the GM so I can make the rules. So I’m adding 2 competitors to the WWA title tournament. Crimson and The Great Khali. Skip Sheffield comes running to the ring with a great cheer. Really you add an Indian who all he says is AAAAAAGGGRRRRRRSSSS and don’t add me. I demand a match against this lunatic right now. Actually Khali is busy but you can wrestle this man. Out comes Bully Ray with a mixed reaction from the crowd.
The match begins and a running lariat and 1 2 3. Match over as Bully Ray lays there unconscious while Sheffield grabs a mic. You still think I’m not worthy. Think again.
Time for the main event JR. I can’t wait to see who it is. Whoa Jerry who turned out the lights. Ahhh!! It’ Sting.
Sting comes out with to a mixed reaction. Out comes Kurt Angle with chants of YOU SUCK!! Match begins as Angle comes out right away with some right hands backing Sting into the corner. Angle backs off not wanting to be disqualified. Sting bounces out of the corner with a series of punches and kicks knocking angle to the ground. Sting goes to grab him put Angle quickly rolls out of the way and pushes Sting down and puts him in the ankle lock but Sting quickly grabs the ropes causing a break. Sting gets up a suplexes angle near the corner which angle crawls to and gets up. Sting nails Angle with the Stinger Splash and knocks Angle down sting grabs Angle putting him into the Scorpion Death lock. Angle tries not to tap as he tries to climb to the ropes. He finally reaches them and sting has to break his hold. Angle quickly gets up surprising sting and angle hits the Angle Slam and put sting in the ankle lock making him tap as Angle smiles knowing he advances.
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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 12:50:01 GMT -5
this was my second show
Welcome to Impact. I am Tazz alongside Michael Cole. General Manager Dixie Carter is in the ring. Tonight on Impact we will not have a 7 week long tournament none of that crap. We will have Battle Royale to decide the IMPACT Championship. Next week we will have the X Championship worked out.
Jinder Mahal comes out to some heat with a microphone. I have been informed that I will not be in the Battle Royale. Curt Hawkins comes out to some cheer and the match begins. Mahal runs and hits a big boot. Hawkins gets back up into a grapple and is thrown down from a body slam. Hawkins woozily gets up and Mahal puts his into a full nelson and a full nelson slam for the 3 count.
Kofi Kingston and Evan Bourne aka Flight Time Boom comes to the ring with a huge applause to face William Regal and Daniel Bryan aka Technicians of the Ring. Evan Bourne starts it off against Regal. Both start off into a grapple and push off and go back into another one. Regal puts Bourne in a headlock. Bourne from the headlock Pele kicks Regal to break the hold and knock Regal down in the middle of the ring. Bourne turns his back to Regal setting up for a standing moonsault. Regal playing possum pulls his legs up to block the move and then puts Bourne in an arm lock near the Technician’s corner and Bryan tags himself in a starts stomping on Bryan while in the hold. At the count of 4 Regal releases the hold and goes to his corner. Bourne gets up and Bryan goes for a dropkick but Bourne jumps back and Bryan falls on his back. Bourne dives and reaches Kingston for the tag. Kingston hops on the top rope for and as soon as Bryan gets up Kofi nails him with a cross body. Kingston is fired up setting up for a boom drop and BOOM! Drops right on Bryan and tags Bourne. Regal runs in going after Bourne but he ducks and falls over the ropes Kofi had pulled down. With the distraction Bryan gets Up to be hit by a Trouble in Paradise from Kofi by the ropes with Bourne on the top rope for an Air Bourne and the 3 count.
Time for the main event. CM Punk, The Miz, Mr. Anderson, Sheamus, Wade Barrett, and the Big Show enter the ring. All the men stare at the Big Show and the match begins with the 5 men attacking the Big Show. Barrett, Punk, Anderson, and Miz hold Big Show against the ropes and a Brougue Kick by Sheamus eliminates the Big Show. Sheamus goes after Barrett while Miz and Punk work on Anderson. The Miz drops Anderson on the ropes bouncing off and barely landing on the edge. Punk goes for a high knee to Anderson but he ducks and pulls down the rope as Punk flies over and is eliminated. Barrett on the other side of the ring threw Sheamus down on the matt with a huge Wasteland. Barrett is facing the fans taunting them when Anderson shoves him over the ropes eliminating Barrett. Barrett yells this is not over. You will see the end of your days. Miz comes out of nowhere and hits a Skull Crushing Finale on Anderson. As soon as Miz turns around he is put him in a high lock and flatten him with a High Cross. Only to be hit into a Mic Check by Anderson and he throws Sheamus over. Final 2 Anderson and Miz. The 2 stare each other down. Then a grapple with no result another grapple nothing again. Miz then clotheslines Anderson going for another grapple. Miz then Irish Whips him into the turnbuckle with a swinging corner clothsline and throws him over and gets the win for the IMPACT championship.
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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 12:52:04 GMT -5
3rd show
Welcome to Smackdown I’m Josh Matthews along side with Matt Striker. Teddy Long is in the Ring.
Now tonight playa the beginning of the World Heavyweight Championship tournament will begin. In tonight’s main event will be a tag team match. With AJ Styles, John Cena, The Undertaker, and Rey Mysterio taking on Alberto Del Rio, Christian, Randy Orton and Samoa Joe. Now remember you gotta play by the rulss. Holla!
This is a Fatal Four to decide the Intercontinental Championship. Sin Cara comes out to a loud cheer. Austin Aries comes out to a mixed reaction. R-Truth comes out to some heat. Matt Morgan comes out to Major heat. The Match begins with Sin Cara quickly rolling out of the ring. R-truth and Austin Aries work together beating on Matt Morgan. Aries then surprises Truth and Irish whips him out of the ring but momentum carries both of them over and they spill out of the ring. Sin Cara quickly takes advantage and frog splashes on Morgan laying in the ring for a 2 count Sin Cara then goes for his senton and lionsault combo and lands it perfect and just as the referee goes for the 3 Aries runs in and breaks up the pin at 2 ½ . R-truth then surprises Aries with a What’s Up at the exact same moment Sin Cara flattens Morgan(it’s his off match next couple of weeks he will get better so don’t complain)with a cross body, but the ref sees Sin Cara’s pin and not Truth’s as Sin Cara gets the win and the Intercontinental Championship but Truth goes ballistic and brutally attacks Sin Cara.
Mark Henry comes out to some big heat. He is facing a local competitor named Steve Wall. The match begins with Wall punching Henry doing absolutely nothing. Henry looking angry grabs Wall and body slams him and gives him a World’s Strongest Slam and the delivers a big splash and gets the 3 count.
Time for the main event with the final four advancing in the tournament. This match is a tag team match but the match will enter when only 4 competitors remain. The match begins with Undertaker against Samoa Joe. Undertaker quickly hauls off on Joe and knocks him into taker’s corner and makes a tag to Mysterio. Joe playing possums push Mysterio out of the corner. Rey runs at Samoa Joe but he flips Rey over his head but Rey grabs his head and Joe’s head bounces off the mat. Joe slowly gets up to be kick by Mysterio to the rope and delivers a 619 and tags Styles on the top ropesandflattens him with a 450 splash. 1 2 3. Then out comes teddy Long playas this will be to slow just make this a Battle Royale ding ding ding. All the men go after each other with Undertaker and Orton getting caught off guard and being eliminated. Christian then grabs Mysterio by the corner and performs a unique tornado DDT bouncing Mysterio off the ropes out of the match. Stop call it that’s four match over holla.
What the heck what’s up with Teddy Long and this weird tournament hopefully answers next week I’m josh Matthews good night.
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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 12:53:09 GMT -5
this is this is my 4th show its not done yet but
Welcome everybody to Monday Night Raw. I’m Jim Ross alongside Jerry “The King” Lawler live in Atlanta Georgia. We have a special Monday Night Raw. We will know the 3 other men that join Kurt Angle in the Championship Scramble match and determine at least 1 competitor in the US Championship triple threat match.
The Great Khali walks down to the ring with harsh boos from the crowd. Eric Bishoff comes out next and has an announcement. “Skip Sheffield tried to get his way in to the tournament by attacking Crimson earlier today. Crimson suffered no injuries but has not been medically cleared tonight, but his replacement is not Sheffield it’s James Storm.” James Storm walks onto the stage and watches as Bishoff hurries backstage. Storm has little reaction from the crowd. The match begins with Khali pushing down Storm. Storm gets up only for the same to happen again. Storm this time backs into the corner. Khali staggers over to Storm and Storm chop blocks Khali only to knock him down to one knee. Khali gets up and grabs Storm to give him a double handed choke slam but Skip Sheffield runs to ringside and distracts Khali and Storm then nails Khali with a Last Call. Storm goes for the pin 1 2 3. Storm advance to the final against Kurt Angle and 2 other superstars.
Cody Rhodes walks to the ring with some mild heat. Rhodes grabs a mic. “ I am Cody Rhodes. The son of Dusty Rhodes, brother of Goldust. I am a 3rd generation superstar. I am going to do something none of my ancestors have done. I will be the first Rhodes to be WWA champion.”John Morrison walks to the stage. “Cody if you keep on talking we won’t have time to have a US qualifying match. Morrison walks down to the ring while the crowd goes crazy. Match starts with a grapple and Morrison arm drags Rhodes to the mat. They both hop up and go for a grapple but Rhodes goes low and pulls Morrison’s legs out from underneath him. Morrison kicks him from the mat and gets up. Morrison drop kicks Rhodes and stands by the ropes ready for the Star Ship Pain. As he jumps Rhodes was playing possum and pulls his knees up as Morrison’s gut lands right on top of it. As Morrison stands the stunned Rhodes runs and jumps off the rope with a beautiful disaster kick plants Morrison and Rhodes goes for the pin but Morrison kicks out at 2 ½ . Rhodes stand there waiting to set up the Cross Rhodes but Morrison jumps up quickly and surprises Rhodes with a European Uppercut. Morrison drops Rhodes with a dropkick and sets up Rhodes and plants him with a running knee and Rhodes may be out cold. Morrison once again goes for a star ship pain and hits it for a 1 2 3. Morrison advance to the scramble.
Angle and Storm walk out to the ring to accompany Morrison as they shake their heads knowing that next week they will face each other in the scramble match.
A qualifying match for the US championship is next between Kazarian and Drew Mcintyre. Kazarian approaches the ring with pure silence from the crowd. Mcintyre come to the ring to pure hatred.
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Post by Matt on May 5, 2012 13:35:58 GMT -5
You should continue, but not with this and not right now. Spend some time looking through the Hall of Fame. Study those diaries - storyline progression, characters, creativity and realism, format, length, and writing style.
After awhile, once you get a good idea, open up a word document. Type up a backstory, roster page, and start writing shows. Write a month worth of shows and go back and read over them. Are they good? Does everything make sense? If yes, post them here. If no, keep trying.
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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 13:41:20 GMT -5
You should continue, but not with this and not right now. Spend some time looking through the Hall of Fame. Study those diaries - storyline progression, characters, creativity and realism, format, length, and writing style. After awhile, once you get a good idea, open up a word document. Type up a backstory, roster page, and start writing shows. Write a month worth of shows and go back and read over them. Are they good? Does everything make sense? If yes, post them here. If no, keep trying. well i really want to try using both wwe and tna rosters and i used random.org to randomized the rosters. |
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2012 16:23:58 GMT -5
I like the idea, but I would want a backstory to explain everything, and a roster to tell us who all we have to watch here. Also, work on your grammar and overall sentence structure and you should be good.
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Post by bennet07 on May 5, 2012 21:43:18 GMT -5
I like the idea, but I would want a backstory to explain everything, and a roster to tell us who all we have to watch here. Also, work on your grammar and overall sentence structure and you should be good. I have rosters set I just didn't post them because I was just asking if it was good |
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Post by Red Dragon on May 6, 2012 5:31:08 GMT -5
I'd go with all the advice given above. I would say layout is highly important, because at the moment its just a chunk of text which is almost unreadible. Have a look at some of the other diaries and how their set out. The whole WWE/TNA mash-up ins't prefered here really, its more fantasy than a diary. If I were you I'd just try one WWE brand or TNA. But if you have your heart set on using both why not do them as seperate companies. Have a look at the FAQ/guidelines thread and take those points on board. When your ready start a new diary properly, your writing is already good its just making it a presentable diary. If you got any more questions just ask me via PM.
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