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Post by Prophet of Ash on Aug 21, 2012 17:12:50 GMT -5
Bet you were expecting to see a roleplay here. Guess again. This is an unconventional roleplay. The way this roleplay is going to work.. You, WFWFers (and WFWFers ONLY) PM me. I'll link you to the roleplay, along with the password needed to enter the page. I'd prefer my feedback for this piece be left via PM as well, but feel free to say something discrete here like "I liked this" or "this was different" to sound off.
If you're given the link and password to this roleplay, do not spread it. Even to other people within the federation. Everyone needs to come to me and me alone to get the information needed for this. This roleplay is internal only. People aren't going to stroll in off the street from other boards and read this. If the password ends up in any hands other than those on the WFWF, and trust me, I've got IP monitors set up, I know who's reading it and when.. I'll change the password and we'll start fresh again. Be mature, be responsible, and don't screw this up, as someone within the federation is attempting to break boundaries that haven't been done here before.
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Post by Prophet of Ash on Aug 21, 2012 17:17:26 GMT -5
also, whoever is supposed to be judging my match this week, please be in touch with me, so I can give you not only the link & password, but know to go to you should the password need to be changed.
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Post by sonstuds on Aug 21, 2012 17:29:39 GMT -5
This is the follow up to that rape RP isn't it?
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Post by eljefe on Aug 21, 2012 17:56:29 GMT -5
I'll be honest....IMO, this is one of the worst main event RPs I've ever read. I don't want to give out spoilers, but the entire first half was just....flat and strange. It didn't consist of anything at all of substance. It just felt like you were typing with a part of your body that wasn't your brain. Normally, your monologues are fantastic. These? "Horrific" might be a better fit. Your dialogue was...meh at best. I normally enjoy most of your RPs. But this didn't give me any enjoyment, or any kind of "Wow that was creepy" or "He's a sick f*ck" feeling. It was just...dull.
Much like the prior Sabat RP, this was different. And different sometimes really sucks.
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Post by bad guy™ on Aug 21, 2012 18:07:12 GMT -5
This was...interesting to say the least. I sent you my opinions on it, but I'll leave it at that. It wasn't terrible or anything so to say...and I actually liked the monologues, but the rest of this RP...it just wasn't my own personal cup of tea.
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Post by edgehead628 on Aug 22, 2012 13:37:09 GMT -5
I thought it was a great RP. Not the best Obo has put out there, and kinda strange to be honest, but still a powerful piece and it actually helps define a few things I hadn't known before. Well done.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 2, 2012 10:19:53 GMT -5
While I think the concept of having to get a password off you to read an RP is straight obnoxious and f*cking ridiculous I will actually need the information as I'm judging your match.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on Sept 5, 2012 20:39:11 GMT -5
I'm in the boat in that I dug the monologues but I felt like the scenes were...well...what they were for the sake of being what they were. I feel like what you're going for next could be handled a little more gracefully, in spite of what it is you're going for, if that makes sense.
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Post by Raider on Sept 8, 2012 0:10:25 GMT -5
While I think the concept of having to get a password off you to read an RP is straight obnoxious and f*cking ridiculous I will actually need the information as I'm judging your match. Word. |
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Post by Kyzer on Sept 8, 2012 3:14:49 GMT -5
I am going to brutally honest here. This rp makes me wonder how you ever beat me. This was by far the worst rp I have read from you since I returned. It reminded me distinctly of rps that Drakz and myself put out in 2006 but bad.
I get you want to take Schneider to a darker side but this was just short of a snuff film which isn't a compliment. Your monologues were slightly better than the rest but still fell short of what you have done in the past. You just sound crude and unintelligent at times.
I am disappointed that I read this rp.
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I dont know good luck 
