Hspam RAW 1st FULL EPISODE!

Hey, I enjoyed this show.
There are a few grammar mistakes throughout the show, I’d go back and try to correct them.
I really like the Nation of Domination story, I like picfeds that try new things.
I also like the “Best in the World” team of Daniel Bryan & CM Punk. I like the Jeff Hardy figure, I’ve never bought one bc it lacks a joint in his mid-section. Great fig otherwise.
I think you should have put the Hspam’s debute recap at the beginning of the 1st episode, because I totally forgot about it, and was a little annoyed how your 1st show started without an intro in what the Hspam was, what’s the company’s mission statement is, and set some kind of internal logic.
I like the background segment with Kofi & the Nation.
Why didn’t you have a longer intro for Cody? I love that coat you got (from Ralph I assume), you should have had a few pics showing that off!
I liked how “Best in the World” don’t want to defend their titles right away, but wait for a team to earn a title shot. Hope to see a full tag team division.
I was really looking forward to Rock vs Eddie, so BOO! To the nation for screwing me outta seeing a match I wanted to see. What heels!!!

I liked this show, I hope to see where these storylines go.

Thanks for.the feed back. I thought I got the grammar mistakes, but I'll triple check lol. With the Nation, I wanted to use The Rock but not as a face. I liked him better when he was leading The Nation, and what better use for Mark Henry than as the muscle for the group, and why not add some faces in MVP and Truth? Got some big some big plans for Kofi, The Nation and Eddie. Best In The World just seemed like a great idea as a tag team, and I plan on doing a full tag division. I had a couple more matches planned but due to time constraints on my end I had to cut them along with another segment, the next episode will be longer as well as the entrances.

This was good.

I liked it!!! I know I am suppose to break it down into chunks but I liked it. The one piece of advice is in ring the camera is to far away. But great job!!!

Love love love it!! Really good story line and it shows how much effort you put into this! I definitly would like to see the second episode!

I also want to add that Cody's Duster/Coat is awesome! From where did you buy it/get it?

I really liked it! The only thing that I didnt like was the pyro at the end. Why would they burn the stage down lol? I get they are trying too make a point, but attacking an announcer for saying that the rock won because of the nation of domination would have shown a better message

Reading and replying:

-Enjoyed the Nation coming out and announcing themselves. The new members should have some good chemistry.
-Opening tag match wasn't too bad, nice to see you having Punk in the midcard
-The recap was a niec idea, as I didn't see Fall Brawl
-Glad Cody got the win and sets up a Kofi/NoD feud
-Very cool angle with the NoD beating up Eddie then torching the entrance way

Enjoyed the tshow, especially for your first non-PPV. It will be interesting to see just how dominant the NoD are. A few points to consider (from my opinion, of course):

*The camera angles from above during matches didn't give you a good view of the action
*You may have too many titles on your show for now. It's always a risk as to how much time you will give to other titles, as well as all of the other feuds. Be careful not to ignore them/make them worthless
*Think of a new entrance way seeing as though the other one got burned down!