Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Jan 26, 2013 17:07:55 GMT -5
Well, not quite off the tron, but oh well
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Post by alexgg on Jan 26, 2013 17:24:59 GMT -5
Awesome. It seems choppy (maybe just the speed of the gif) but it's extreme and looks great. I love the idea. The jump is fantastic, looks pretty realistic. I love the airtime. I think the ending could of had been better, it get's a little messy there. I like the movements, but not the spacing and how he just stop moving. Good work.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2013 17:25:49 GMT -5
Dude, it's really nice until the reactions. From there it's wretched, it fidgets so much from then on and it has no easing what so ever. Please fix this stuff up!
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Post by Jynxx on Jan 26, 2013 17:28:11 GMT -5
Yeah I'm not sure what happened with the speed/spacing, I slowed it down in pivot because imgur usually speeds it up but it hasnt this time I sped it up a bit, i think it looks a little less choppy but still needs work on spacing
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Post by Jynxx on Jan 26, 2013 17:29:49 GMT -5
Dude, it's really nice until the reactions. From there it's wretched, it fidgets so much from then on and it has no easing what so ever. Please fix this stuff up! Remind you of someone? Lol, but seriously I understand the reactions aren't particularly good, I'll work on them
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2013 19:13:10 GMT -5
Haha, I see..... Good, you should.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jan 26, 2013 19:39:34 GMT -5
Really nice animation you have there Viper. I like the bend at the beginning of the animation, it looked smooth and quite realistic. The moonsault was smooth and it had pretty decent joint movement but the moonsault seemed somewhat lifeless since it looked like the moonsault stick faceplanted on the other stick's sack. The impact was ok but the reaction could use a little bit of work.
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Post by Sicks on Jan 27, 2013 9:42:16 GMT -5
Overall: I like this animation! It is smooth and realistic, while some parts might need some minors improvements to my likings.
Pros: The background; it is a minor factor, but it is a factor for me. While it's neat and simple, it does a really good job for me. The moonsault; I love it, even tho personnaly I would have added an extra-frame or two in the high-peak of the jump, you did a good job on delivering the air he took benting down for his jump. I also give a little plus for having that ladder set-up like that. I have not seen that all that often and it is creative.
Cons: While I enjoy the ladder placed like that, I don't like it's reaction. Should have fallen down or a huger bounce would have made the impact looked stronger. Both sticks reactions end up quickly as soon as they hit the ground. A bit more there would add to it, or a slower fall from the receiving stick.
Favorite part: Side ladder and smoothness of the moonsault have to be my favorite part.
You did a good job, keep it up Viper!
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Post by Jynxx on Jan 27, 2013 12:19:30 GMT -5
Thanks guys
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Post by Deleted on Jan 27, 2013 14:14:47 GMT -5
That's a ladder?
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Post by Jynxx on Jan 27, 2013 14:28:33 GMT -5
Yeah lol, laid on its side so the bottom is facing the camera
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