Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Feb 23, 2013 17:09:12 GMT -5
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Post by done on Feb 23, 2013 17:33:16 GMT -5
Absolutely awful! For a Global Stick Champion to produce that? bah gawd!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 23, 2013 18:12:28 GMT -5
Not bad Jynxx the main problem is the walking/running, it is choppy and fidgety, i think you may have over exaggerated/extended some of the joints, but the lionsault its self looks really nice just try to practice walking some more!
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Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Feb 23, 2013 18:15:32 GMT -5
Yeah, the jump threw me off on what to do with the steps
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Feb 23, 2013 18:50:37 GMT -5
Not a bad animation there Jynxx. At the beginning the running could use a little bit of work, it was quite choppy and fidgety during the movements overall. The jump onto the middle rope though was very smooth and the joint movement in the Lionsault was very nicely done, the spacing, transition and air time was superb and I like the impact and reaction.
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Post by Sicks on Feb 26, 2013 6:34:11 GMT -5
Pros: I can see you really wanted the running part to look good, but must admit it ended looking awful. I put it in the pros category because I do feel you put some effort on that part. Air time on the moonsault is smooth and flows really good.
Cons: Altought the impact is ok for me, it could easily be better. More reaction from both sticks is requiered here. You already added the rope bounce to make the impact bigger, focus on those reactions at the same time and you might have a deadly impact on that moonsault.
Keep up the good work!
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Jynxx
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Post by Jynxx on Feb 26, 2013 8:48:25 GMT -5
Hey guys, fun fact: If noone ever did reactions i'd be one of the best in the world
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Post by alexgg on Feb 28, 2013 10:58:33 GMT -5
Everything after the running looked great! The jump, airtime and reactions were fantastic. The starting pose was good but the running was really weird lol, needs some practice there.
I think you are getting better though, I like the style too.
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