Return of ETW Episode 1 - Monday 25th March 2013

Thanks for the Comment Bro. Yeah, I agree, I am currently in the midst of buying a new lamp to go on the other side of the arena to balance up the light, hopefully that will work. Yes, in the future editing out the string will defo be involved. I was just to excited to get this up And finally yes, i need to practice doing puncheds without twisting the body. Glad you liked it and thanks again.

Very nice job with the federation there Fireball, it seems like you put out an ample amount of Episodes with a nice selection of other type of federations as well. I only got around to the Rhode Scholars vs Gabriel and Bourne match. You did a pretty decent on the match itself, but you must focus on transition and sequence, what I mean by sequence is if you do a play-by-play or rewind then start from the beginning, it needs to have a flow that keeps the pictures after in check so the pictures don't seem off balance.

When I say try to also manage out your conception of transition, this means the pictures in-between frames to piece each frame together, so it other words choppiness if you were to put it in animation terms. The way you swivel the figures hips when going for a punch or throwing an opponent into the ropes looks very unrealistic and it takes away from the quality of the federation as a whole so also be certain you can work on that sometime.

The sequence itself wasn't that bad, but the transition needs alot of work, the position in certain poses just look off and faulty such as the Evan Bourne hitting the Shooting Star Press over the top rope, you didn't show any sign of build-up in order to capture the moment of the motion into the move itself also I know this really isn't stopmotion but try to make the joint movement for aerials look ok because the SSP looked quite awkward in mid air and make sure you have the angles right when going for these moves as well because the trajectory where as where they started off and where their suppose to land is completely off unfortunately. Don't forget to make atleast 3-4 in-between pictures during the move so make the transition turns out smoother as well.

The storyline and plot seems to be there though. So mainly just try to work on a few things I mentioned and you should be fine.

That was awesome. I think It was your best work. I follow your youtube two btw. I really liked the revival of ETW gimmick.

Reading and replying:

-I did a very similar opening segment on my first show (great minds think alike), only difference being I like your idea of Ziggler picking someone for Punk to show that he should get a shot
-Tag match was pretty exciting. I hope you can pull off a tag division, as there's rarely feds who can keep the feuds exciting and give them enough time
-Cena vs Bryan will be interesting. I like how Bryan didn't cost him the match and Cena simply looked at him whilst doing the AA
-Interesting looking team that Y2J has assembled
-Another good tag match. Any time E&C win I'm happy
-Main event was non-existant, but very well done. I think doing it that way kept Punk's credibility as he didn't lose and got Brock over big time

Overall, a very good debut(ish) show. Match lengths were fine because they were exciting and I'm really looking forward to how this tag tournament develops.

Hey, this was your best show yet.

Very good work. I was having a withdrawal of ETW, but you picked up right where you left off! I've mentioned before how you constantly improve, and this show was a prime example.

Solid posing, although it did lack some transition shots.

Great build into your tag division.

Some solid main event storylines brewing with Punk/Zig.

Overall, solid stuff, dude. Can't wait for episode 7!

Thanks Stinger! Glad you enjoyed it! I am going to more of a highlight show sadly next time just to make sure I can get some shows out there!