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Post by MizTV on May 13, 2013 18:08:10 GMT -5
Dont Forget Me-The Story of Curtis Axel-By MizTV |
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Post by MizTV on May 13, 2013 18:10:35 GMT -5
Entry 1 Most people don't mind sitting in the locker room doing nothing and earning a paycheck. I'm not one of those people. I didn't sign with the WWE to mess around and have fun. I came to win and I came to carry on the family tradition. As my father and his father went before me they helped define the business and helped it into it's boom. But me i sit back in this locker room waiting for an opportunity. All I ever heard is "Oh yea we are real high on you and your time is coming. We got huge plans for you." Well where are these plans? What are these plans? I don't know. I want to know.
I am Michael McGillicutty but more importantly I am a Hennig |
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Post by DTP. on May 13, 2013 19:05:29 GMT -5
Hoping to see lots of random face/heel moving in this diary.
(I actually like McGillicutty so hopefully this goes somewhere)
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Post by MizTV on May 17, 2013 11:53:34 GMT -5
Entry 2 Ring-a-ling, Ring-a-ling BEEEWWWWPPP. "Hey Michael, Its John. We need you to come to my office as soon as you get to the arena. Thanks! click.
It's time I thought to myself. They are finally cutting me off the roster. I didn't live up to my father's legacy. I'm not perfect. Maybe I can go to TNA or work the indepent scenes. Wherever this leads me I guess. I began to pack my bags and head to talk to John. I figured Vince would be there too. As I rode in the car with my friend, Curt Hawkins we talked. "Well Curt, I hate to tell you this." "Oh god not this story again. Did Kofi beat you with a last second Field Goal again?" "CURT! It's not time for sarcasm! I got a call from John Laurinatius this morning telling me he wanted me in his office as soon as I get there. I think I'm being fired." "Oh......" The rest of the car ride was silence.
I walked in the Staples Center for Raw tonight. I took a look around expecting it will be the last time I will ever see this place again. I found where John had set up his stuff. I knocked. "Who is it?" A voice hollered. "It's McGillicutty, you wanted to see me?" A silence followed. "Yea, come in." I opened the door and was shocked to see not just John Laurinatius but also Vince McMahon, Triple H and Michael Hayes. "If this time isn't best for you I can come back" I said. "Your here already" said Hayes "so sit down, We were expecting you." I sat down. What do I expect? |
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Post by Zigzag on May 19, 2013 1:07:14 GMT -5
Please continue. This is great so far.
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Post by Rated R on May 20, 2013 2:39:43 GMT -5
Not really a lot to comment on right now but I like the idea and the writing so far seems pretty solid. I love the thought that he goes around calling himself McGillicutty in everyday situations, lol. I'm looking forwards to seeing where this goes once you actually get into the proper stuff, keep it up.
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Post by MizTV on May 21, 2013 16:34:50 GMT -5
Entry 3
Hunter spoke first. "Michael we have decide with help from creativeyou are no longer being called Michael McGillicutty." Thank God I thought under my breathe now what obsane name have they given me. "You are now going to called Curtis Axel. A combinations of your father and grandfather. " I spoke " Why I really like the name but is that it just a name change?" Hayes spoke directly to me "We have placed you with Cody Rhodes in a tag team called Sons of Glory. You are being managed my Cody's father Dusty." John spoke up "You need to act differently for this gimmick. You need to act better than you royalty. A series of Viganettes will be played before you debut." I sat there. "I can do that. Thank You" I shook the men's hand before I walked out. Curtis Axel. I like it. |
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Post by MizTV on May 31, 2013 15:06:44 GMT -5
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Post by DTP. on Jun 6, 2013 18:16:46 GMT -5
Mmmm. Got off to a good start, it had comical little traits here and there. But entries three and four weren't that good, honestly. Curtis Axel remaining is cool and all, and I like the attempt at a change in direction for the Axel character compared to real life - but a team that is practically the new Legacy incarnation (which Cody Rhodes was a member of anyway...why not just use that?) - additionally, Cody being in another tag team is a bad idea, honestly. It could've also worked with Ted Dibiase, anyway. I don't think he's doing anything. Anyway, Cody has only recently left Team Rhodes Scholars (well, ish. He's inkling back and forth between a solo run and a tag team, so this timing wasn't best.
Another complaint I have is that you decided to skip the vignettes and what they exactly were that told us more about the characters and the tag team. Additionally, if they were going to end up on TV as a tag team, I imagine that they'd be put through the live event circuit for a trial run. I'm sad to see that skipped. Nonetheless, you have more than enough time to turn things around.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 7, 2013 17:21:25 GMT -5
Interesting little POV you have here. You referenced Wrestling Royalty, eh? I wonder where Ryan is? I am quite disappointed as you don't do the live events. Those must be generally fun to write.
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