Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on May 15, 2013 23:30:41 GMT -5
There Is NO WAY OUT! For the superstars of WWEAFS! The Animal Batista is challenging The Champion CM Punk for the WWE Championship in what will be an amazing all out battle! wweafs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=payperviews&action=display&thread=71&page=1(Click on the link to see the show! If anybody hasn't seen any of the shows since my first one....ive made ALOT of improvements and I hope everybody enjoys this one! Tell me what you think!)
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on May 16, 2013 11:24:01 GMT -5
Hey, there. Good PPV, man, I know you have been building up to this for quite some time. Gonna be real honest with you, I'm going to avoid the whole this could be better or that should improve, leave it to other people and keep it to myself. You are putting out shows on a pretty regular basis, and I think that is an example others should follow, or try to follow, if they can, if they want, etc. I particularly liked seeing the belt on Mankind, very cool. Keep fedding and keep having fun, man, that's all that matters here at this point.
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2013 13:22:25 GMT -5
Good Show Man.
This has been building up for a while and I have been watching your stuff just not had time to lay down my thoughts. Apologies for that. I really liked this tbh. Again I somewhat agree with WCM here. I am going to leave the constructive feedback to Titch ect, these guys have more of a wider knowledge than myself and their advice will be better to listen to rather than mine. Nice to see a new regular fed on the site, makes it that bit more active. I enjoyed seeing mankind win, had a good feel to it.
Keep going man.
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on May 16, 2013 14:13:40 GMT -5
Thanks alot guys, I know it's probably still somewhat stiff but Im tryin, I believe it's getting less stiff with every show I put out. Im trying to create quality here. Also i'm glad people actually watch the show! Lol
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Post by Wicked on May 16, 2013 15:18:52 GMT -5
I enjoyed it. Good show. I think you need to work on bending joints and posing. 5/10.
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WCM's Izzy
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Post by WCM's Izzy on May 16, 2013 15:20:30 GMT -5
A fed and a fedder need time, practice and exposure to get better and better, and the difference between your first show and now is huge, you are doing fine and having fun at it, just keep going, man.
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Post by T on May 16, 2013 16:21:04 GMT -5
Been looking forward to this. -Could maybe have changed the stage and ring apron so that it's different from your Raws -Can tell that your poses are improving show by show -Decent opener, I liked how Del Rio weakened Kofi's arm by slamming it into the ring post -Really enjoyed Cena/Henry. Lots of reversals and didn't know which way it was going to go -Tag match was fun to match. Surprised to see Miz and Show pick up the victory. Would've liked a little aftermath section as to Eddie's reaction to Morrison getting pinned -Not too keen on your backstage area background. The back of the CS figure packs are a bit too busy for my eyes! -Kane/HBK was short but got over Kane quite well. Could've maybe carried on his attack for a while after he knocked the ref down -Interesting to see you making HHH/Rock already for WM -Main event was just starting to get going, then it ended! -Oooh wait, Teddy's here. Interesting announcement -Mankind winning was definitely a swerve and I definitely didn't see it coming. Nice twist Very good PPV, my friend. Poses are definitely improving, would still recommend that you make sure you move both arms on every pose and both legs. Some interesting storylines developing, such as Henry's dominance, Punk/Mankind and Rock/HHH. Not sure about the tag title scene, but hopefully you'll do something with that. Looking forward to your next show already! P.S. Would appreciate if you could reply to my BWR show.
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Squatch
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Post by Squatch on May 16, 2013 17:20:41 GMT -5
This show could have used better camera angles, lighting, and better posing. I liked Del Rio/Kingston match. I thought there was plenty of good action in the match, but with better camera angles, lighting, and posing this could live up to be a lot more. John Cena's talking was good, but it felt too short. Try to change it up and have a bit of a longer segment. If you do an interview that will make it a bit longer. Also I feel like the Cena/Henry match could have been placed somewhere else on the match card because of where you had Cena trash talking. Cena/Henry was good and there was some very good dominance from Mark Henry. This could have used a better camera angle because the head was cut off on the shot. It was good for a potential storyline going into the future for Mark Henry to win the match. There was some back and forth throughout the match, but there definitely was dominance by Mark Henry. It's cool that Mark Henry is undefeated, and you have a nice storyline going on there. Good job with the quality of the match, but once again try to get better camera angles, lighting, and posing. Sho-Miz/Morrison and Guerrero was good. Morrison and Guerrero seems like an odd pairing for a team, but it will make things interesting. There was some cool moves done in this match. I'm glad Sho-Miz won because Guerrero and Morrison was an odd duo. CM Punk's talking was a good segment and represented how he would talk to an extent. The shirt could have been fixed to make it seem like something Punk would actually wear. I say that because you don't wear a shirt with half of it down on your chest. Kane/HBK was good. It was good to see Kane in the bad guy role attacking HBK before the match. Kane absolutely destroyed the referee and HBK with the chair before leaving. I hope we get to know more about why he is attacking HBK with the chair. Lots of potential with Kane/HBK. The Rock's talking in the ring was good. I liked it! Work on some of the grammar in your talking segments. An example of that is when Triple H interupts The Rock and says, "You just couldn't get the job done at The Royal Rumble and you and I both know it!" That could be reworded to say: "You just couldn't get the job done at the Royal Rumble, and both of us know it!" Triple H/Rock will be a good match when it happens. The main event between Punk and Batista was something I got excited for. The action was very back and forth in the beginning and I liked that. The counter to the Batista Bomb by CM Punk was good for this match. I seen the win by CM Punk coming. I was very surprised when Mankind was announced as an opponent against Punk right there. That didn't make sense to me. I was trying to figure out why Mankind was given the match. Did he win a tournament or a match to get the right to wrestle Punk for the Championship, or did Teddy Long do it because he wanted to? I hope there is a rematch between Punk and Mankind because there is potential for a good feud. A match at WrestleMania would be good. In conclusion, I would recommend using clear fishing line for posing, downloading a free program like Gimp to edit the fishing line out of the photo, fixing your camera angles, your lighting, and posing. There were some good matches on this show. Keep it up and try to use some of my tips with your next show!
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on May 16, 2013 23:09:27 GMT -5
Wow the replies are amazing guys! Thanks alot! I'll for sure change the apron for the next ppv and I'll try some of the fishing line. The Raw will explain alot of the storyline's so wait for that! You guys are great...I've really been trying to improve and the next show I'll bring even more improvements. I'll be changing the backstage area...any ideas what I can do? Print off something for the background? Any tips for that would be great...also how could I make some ring apron's for the Wrestlemania, I'd like to try and obviously go all out and do some real nice Ring Aprons and some nice posters and stuff. Again thanks alot guys!
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Post by Squid: The Anti-Hero on May 20, 2013 15:16:47 GMT -5
great matches
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