Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Jun 7, 2013 15:25:11 GMT -5
This week on Raw! We have the aftermath of what happend at No Way Out...what's going to happen with Mankind? How will our Royal Rumble winner the Undertaker take to the new champion? We get to see the debut of Ryback! and what will unfold over Kane and Shawn Michaels? Tune in to see! wweafs.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rawshow&action=display&thread=98&page=1(Just click the link above to view the show! ^) Hey guys! Sorry it took me so long to post another show...im graduating this year and i've been studying for exams and stuff. So here it is! I know it's not my best work but next week it's going to be a big Raw so this one isn't the longest. I did attempt using string for the first time! Only in one part! But I think I like it and will be using it more. Tell me what you think! |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 7, 2013 17:00:22 GMT -5
Pretty nice show. Loved the Orton/Sin Cara match. Could've done with an Undertaker promo instead of just the lights/beat down but nonetheless I am looking forward to hearing Kane, Mankind, and possibly Undertaker cutting promos on the next show. keep it up  |
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Jun 7, 2013 19:19:54 GMT -5
Thanks buddy for the feedback! The next show is a long one as ive gotta continue towards Wrestlemania. Should be a good one! Glad you enjoyed it, and yeah the Sin Cara match had my first try with string so hopefully that was good!
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Post by T on Jun 8, 2013 2:56:51 GMT -5
-Think you're one of the first feds to use Ryback, so hopefully you use him well -Oh, Heath Slater's already in the ring...we know how this goes! -No surprise with the result, but liked that you set up a feud afterwards rather having a squash and be done -Massive improvement with the string poses! You couldn't have done a finish like that Sin Cara match without it, well done there -Interesting to see The Undertaker strike Like you said, it was short, but still pushes a few things on towards WrestleMania. Maybe would have tried to squeeze another match out, or stretched out the Mankind segment a bit. Poses with the string look good, just make sure you get the whole figure's body in the pic rather than chopping off his head. Next step for you is to bend the knees of the figures more.  Looking forward to the next one! |
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Post by Cordaro on Jun 8, 2013 7:58:49 GMT -5
Nicr Show Can Not Wait For The Next One
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Post by Deleted on Jun 21, 2013 18:27:05 GMT -5
Hey really nice show here glad to see a new fed on the rise hopefully you can keep these going.
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Takerfan814
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Post by Takerfan814 on Jun 21, 2013 18:36:48 GMT -5
Hey really nice show here glad to see a new fed on the rise hopefully you can keep these going. Thanks for all the replies guys! It's nice to see people actually watch my show! The next Raw will be up pretty soon! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 17, 2013 1:18:45 GMT -5
Hey, I just read your post, so now I'm gonna leave you some feed back.
I enjoyed reading through your show. My favorite part of the show was the Mankind interview. I thought you captured the essence of the character very well.
I like your story telling. You do a great job with cliffhangers. I do with the segments were longer, however. Many of the segments, especially the matches, seemed very short. They didn't really have time to develop.
Overall, I did enjoy the show and will be reading again!
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