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Post by attitudesback on Aug 11, 2013 15:50:19 GMT -5
Hey guys, follow up to Raw; which if you didn't see is here: wfwlive.webs.com/But here's the new show SmackDown! It's not as long as Raw because I wasn't spending the time I spent on Raw for no-one to comment on it again. Anyways, here's the show and I hope you enjoy it. All comments are welcome. wfwsmackdownaugust1.webs.com/
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Post by RCW on Aug 11, 2013 17:04:30 GMT -5
Alright, first time I've been able to properly watch some WFW.
Eric and Edge in the GMs office, some nice work. The segment allowed both characters to develop a little more as well as hyping the briefcase. I look forward to seeing what may be in there. Ziggler backstage, his "show off" gimmick is still there, at first I thought you were going to have him as a face, thankfully you didn't as we see where he's going with WWE. I was a bit taken back at how he man handled Cena and carried him at to the ring.
The commentary is good! Ouch! Cena landed badly on his neck when going through the table. I'd recommend you get a proper background rather than windows, also work a little on your posing, some seem to be okay but others are a bit off. Also, the camera angle's haven't been great so far, mainly the ones from straight up on the figures. I didn't realise that was a match there either! Ziggler with an impressive win though.
Oh, wow! Stone Cold set to take on the Rock! Another very short match, Edge coming out was nice. I am liking what you're doing with Edge. You could have dragged the match out a little more seeing as its two of the biggest names in Wrestling.
Edge to take on Taker now? Wow! What a night on SmackDown, although the matches have been short so far. Okay.. As was that one. Not sure what I think about that. Pwhoa, Taker hits the tombstone. His words towards Eric Bischoff were interesting.. Is he in on it with Edge?
A very short episode, look forward to what comes from Edge although you could have maybe had a few other segments hyping other wrestlers too.
Seemed like you may have rushed it.
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 11, 2013 17:20:32 GMT -5
Alright, first time I've been able to properly watch some WFW. Eric and Edge in the GMs office, some nice work. The segment allowed both characters to develop a little more as well as hyping the briefcase. I look forward to seeing what may be in there. Ziggler backstage, his "show off" gimmick is still there, at first I thought you were going to have him as a face, thankfully you didn't as we see where he's going with WWE. I was a bit taken back at how he man handled Cena and carried him at to the ring. The commentary is good! Ouch! Cena landed badly on his neck when going through the table. I'd recommend you get a proper background rather than windows, also work a little on your posing, some seem to be okay but others are a bit off. Also, the camera angle's haven't been great so far, mainly the ones from straight up on the figures. I didn't realise that was a match there either! Ziggler with an impressive win though. Oh, wow! Stone Cold set to take on the Rock! Another very short match, Edge coming out was nice. I am liking what you're doing with Edge. You could have dragged the match out a little more seeing as its two of the biggest names in Wrestling. Edge to take on Taker now? Wow! What a night on SmackDown, although the matches have been short so far. Okay.. As was that one. Not sure what I think about that. Pwhoa, Taker hits the tombstone. His words towards Eric Bischoff were interesting.. Is he in on it with Edge? A very short episode, look forward to what comes from Edge although you could have maybe had a few other segments hyping other wrestlers too. Seemed like you may have rushed it. Thanks for the comments dude. I didn't make it as long as Raw because I wasn't sure if anyone was going to watch it again, but of course a lot of the matches were short, shorter than what they should've been. Lots more to come and with me using more string work the camera angle's should improve. Again thanks for the comments dude, much appreciated!
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Post by Wicked on Aug 11, 2013 22:44:33 GMT -5
Hey dude. It was a good show man. I think you have made some improvement. I think you really need to bend the joints on your figures and make there poses not as stiff as they are, but to make them look like the moves you are making with the figures. -I liked the fight between Edge and Bischoff that sets up for a new feud between them. -Why were all the belts in the office and then again in the interview area and why are they there? -Why Does Dolph Ziggler have incredible super powers? He cant lift up Cena like he did (He would need the rest of the Spirit Squad to help him). I like the feud idea between Ziggles and Cena but Cena gets squashed by a Incredible Hulk like Ziggler. Cena Jobbed and now the champion looks like a loser to a new guy. Beside ziggler's super powers and Cena jobbing, It is a good feud idea. It could lead to a cool match. -Stone Cold versus Rocky was cool. Champ vs. Champ. There were some cool poses but Stone Cold never really ever did an inverted arm bar.... Cool match, nice drama by Edge making Rock lose and SCSA and Edge may be in cahoots??? I want to see Edge's and Stone Colds reason to do this. - Why Taker Why! No dont job like Nash to Edge! I dont get if Taker wasn't going to lay down for Eric, Why would he lay down for the 3 count and let edge beat him? I liked how Taker tombstoned Edge. It is cool to think maybe Edge, SCSA, & Bischoff may be in CAHOOTS.. (COUGH new nWo COUGH). Good show. You just need to work on posing. You'll get better.
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 12, 2013 7:09:56 GMT -5
Hey dude. It was a good show man. I think you have made some improvement. I think you really need to bend the joints on your figures and make there poses not as stiff as they are, but to make them look like the moves you are making with the figures. -I liked the fight between Edge and Bischoff that sets up for a new feud between them. -Why were all the belts in the office and then again in the interview area and why are they there? -Why Does Dolph Ziggler have incredible super powers? He cant lift up Cena like he did (He would need the rest of the Spirit Squad to help him). I like the feud idea between Ziggles and Cena but Cena gets squashed by a Incredible Hulk like Ziggler. Cena Jobbed and now the champion looks like a loser to a new guy. Beside ziggler's super powers and Cena jobbing, It is a good feud idea. It could lead to a cool match. -Stone Cold versus Rocky was cool. Champ vs. Champ. There were some cool poses but Stone Cold never really ever did an inverted arm bar.... Cool match, nice drama by Edge making Rock lose and SCSA and Edge may be in cahoots??? I want to see Edge's and Stone Colds reason to do this. - Why Taker Why! No dont job like Nash to Edge! I dont get if Taker wasn't going to lay down for Eric, Why would he lay down for the 3 count and let edge beat him? I liked how Taker tombstoned Edge. It is cool to think maybe Edge, SCSA, & Bischoff may be in CAHOOTS.. (COUGH new nWo COUGH). Good show. You just need to work on posing. You'll get better. Thanks dude. I thought if WWE has super Cena, I'll have super Zig No just kidding but I can see why you said that! As for the belts and the briefcase, all will be revealed soon and a new nWo? Who knows..
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Post by T on Aug 13, 2013 10:58:17 GMT -5
Viewed the shows one after the other, as I've been on holiday the last week. Here's my observations: -The format you use is growing on me. Easy to navigate and the commentary is more detailed -Some original bits here and there. I particularly liked Ziggler dragging Cena out to the ring -You have too many title belts - I think I counted five - which will prove difficult to build storylines around that many as well as other matches -Take more time with your shows - I'd rather have one every three weeks than a rushed one each week. It gives people time to view your shows too that way and you can build upon feedback -Poses are getting better with each show Another promising set of shows. Looking forward to you taking a bit more time over the next one and some interesting developments storyline wise.
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 13, 2013 11:20:58 GMT -5
Viewed the shows one after the other, as I've been on holiday the last week. Here's my observations: -The format you use is growing on me. Easy to navigate and the commentary is more detailed -Some original bits here and there. I particularly liked Ziggler dragging Cena out to the ring -You have too many title belts - I think I counted five - which will prove difficult to build storylines around that many as well as other matches -Take more time with your shows - I'd rather have one every three weeks than a rushed one each week. It gives people time to view your shows too that way and you can build upon feedback -Poses are getting better with each show Another promising set of shows. Looking forward to you taking a bit more time over the next one and some interesting developments storyline wise. Thanks! I think I've got 4 champions but storylines for each one at the minute but once they've finished I'll probably change the amount. I think it'd be better too to take more time on each show so I'll definitely do that.
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 13, 2013 12:55:17 GMT -5
3 shows by the end of the month; Raw SmackDown August PPV - No Way Out. After that I may change the schedule as I'll be a lot more busy but I got so much time this month, so it should all be completed and to a good standard (if it wasn't I wouldn't release it.)
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