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Post by T on Aug 21, 2013 18:35:28 GMT -5
 BWR Shatter this week comes live from the First Direct Arena in Leeds, England! Expected on the show tonight:*The Undertaker accepted Christian's challenge of a match on Shatter this week *Will Monty Brown continue to dominate after his win over DH Smith last week? *What will Edge have to say about the way he was screwed out of the BWR World Title last week? *Will Umaga get any closer to claiming back his £100,000 stolen by Tommy Dreamer? *All this and much, much more! www.thebwr.com/shatter06/shatter1.htmlPart 1 - 9MB Part 2 - 6MB Part 3 - 9MB Part 4 - 13MB PLEASE REPLY WITH SOME FEEDBACK IF YOU VIEW THE SHOW!  |
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 21, 2013 20:15:47 GMT -5
Nice to see a show from you! Seems like the board is a little dead at the minute. Again, really enjoyed it. Great show. Solid story lines, well structured. The commentary is top notch too. If I had to get a negative it probably would only be the kick from Nitro seemed a little over done, not sure if Brown would've flown over the top rope. Love the sound to it too, adds a bit more to it. Also the tag match was really good. Exciting moves, great commentary and a lot of action! Not sure about the ending, did Dreamer hand the briefcase over with Estrada? I think he did but I'm not 100% sure. But great show. Desolation will be great too, I know it  By the way mate, not sure if you'd want to change this or whatever but when Dreamer pulls Estrada back out to the ring, it says RVD brings him back. Again not sure if it's worth doing or whatever but I thought I'd let you know. |
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Post by Wicked on Aug 21, 2013 22:54:44 GMT -5
What a great show. I really admire how fast you can get your shows up. Another great show with almost no criticism needed. Great job Titch. What a really great show. I liked it alot. You have a great gift at making great storylines/feuds in your fed, and you are great at a character's development. I loved this show. I think you top yourself every show. Great show. CriticismPros:- The commentating was just amazing, just like any BWR show. You write the commentary as if they were actually saying it. Great job. Coach, JR, and Christian was awesome. I love the kiss @ss Coach, and Good Ol' JR working together. Great Job! - I loved how the sly Christian pulls another fast one on Taker and sends out Fit Finley instead. Good match as well. -Desolation sounds like a great Pay-Per-View name and idea. I can't wait to watch it. Can't wait to see the card. - The Jericho interview made him look like a good heel. It also set up for a great match for the next Shatter. Edge vs. Chris Jericho! - The Edge coming out to the ring skit was awesome. He sounded great. That dastardly Mr. Williams and his cronies of the "World Champ" Barrett and Mason Ryan and telling Edge he will never get another title shot, how dare him. Barrett cut a cool promo! Then I was so happy that Regal came out to stop the treacherous three. I can't wait to see Regal's role as being the Commissioner of BWR. I really like the board of directors idea and where its heading. I am so glad Edge will get his show against Barrett at Desolation in the main event. another great way to set up the ppv main event. Great sketch. Really was an awesome part of the show. - Monty Brown vs. Paul Burchill was another good match. It made both guys look really goo and it made Brown look like the Alpha Male monster that he is. There was some good pose work in this match. It was exciting. Monty looked evil at wanting to hurt Katie Lea at the end only to be stopped by his rival JoMo. Great job. It seemed like the plot only thickens between Brown and Jomo maybe it could lead to Desolation.  - The main event was very fast paced great action. It was a good match with good drama in it. It was really good with Estrada getting involved and seeing how both teams could work together. Great match. The ending was brilliant. I really loved the Pump handle slam pictures, and again it looks like the plot thickens in this rivalry. Great show again. Cons:- My cons (Kind of nit picky though) are that sometimes the wrestlers hands are bent in a weird direction. It is probably because of loose Jakks joints but it is a little off putting. It isn't a big problem, don't worry about it. My only other small gripe is that sometimes the elbow pads and kneepads on the wrestlers are not in the right position. Like they are drooping. Don't worry though. It's only a small gripe. Great show from a great mod. Good Job Titch. Big Up's! |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2013 14:29:24 GMT -5
Great show Titch. Kudos for being a Mod who actually contributes to the board first off with a ongoing show, secondly with your enthusiasm towards it. Your definitely getting more and more solid on your in ring posing and action. The pics and poses were very tight and professional in this one and your progressing nicely on all fronts, arena, presentation etc. Nice little effect for the fire works and entrances too. All around a very solid effort and I see good things ahead for you and your fed.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2013 16:33:07 GMT -5
Woo ! great Show !
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Post by T on Aug 30, 2013 17:50:08 GMT -5
Appreciate the feedback so far, chaps. I'm glad people are still enjoying them. Any more comments would be much appreciated. Also, the Pic Fed Magazine should be up on Sunday, fingers crossed! |
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Post by Wicked on Aug 30, 2013 22:30:36 GMT -5
Appreciate the feedback so far, chaps. I'm glad people are still enjoying them. Any more comments would be much appreciated. Also, the Pic Fed Magazine should be up on Sunday, fingers crossed! Don't worry I bet there will be a lot more comments by the time the weekend is over. People are busy during the week  ... You deserve tons of comments. Again great job, and I can't wait to read the magazine. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2013 23:43:19 GMT -5
Another top notch show Titch. I really get into these and I've been a fan of BWR from the get-go. Your presentation continues to be very strong and I'm not sure if anyone has been able to nail that particular format as well as you. Loved the Christian bit as he managed to get under the Undertaker's skin, but also get his as well. Nice when a segment can serve two purposes like that.
I also like that you've developed your cast of characters more and there's definitely a real BWR feel to it. That is to say, this doesn't just feel like another fed full of the same wrestlers being used in different feuds, but they all feel like they're real members of a different roster. It's also nice to see something that's not just a repeat of what you've seen on TV whether it's new or old BWR has it's own flavor and I appreciate that. It's definitely an area where you've grown over the past few shows and of course, putting out so much quality product is a big part of that.
I really enjoyed the Monty Brown match, because I always loved that guy, but also because you played it perfectly. You didn't stretch it to 800 spots, you kept it simple but exciting. The post match kiss was a nice little bit too. Definitely came across as TV worthy.
The main event was top notch. The Umaga spot over the ropes was SICK! This match had it all and despite a ton of high spots, ti felt like a real, fluid match. Not just something where you crammed a bunch of stuff in. I really enjoyed it. Hot finish too and I love your use of Mason and Umaga here. Nice to see an ending that strong as well, definitely gets you excited to see what will happen at the next show. This is some stuff that's been brewing.
Overall, the little touches definitely help make it stand out and there's nothing but props from me. For this to be Shatter 6 and it to be this good, really lets you know the kind of product you're putting out.
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Post by Jack on Sept 8, 2013 11:19:17 GMT -5
Ok Sir, first time watching your show, lets get into it. -Like the music at the start. Makes it seem like a real show. -Really like the earlier today segment, makes it again much more realistic. -Again fireworks are a nice addition. -All the themes are great, as I have said, great effort. -Joint movements in general are good, however, I feel they look a tad strange in some frames, as in, a joint is bent enough, or in a weird angle. -Next PPV Looks like one that cant be missed. -Like what you are doing with Taker and Christian. -Alot of talking in this show, nice storyline development, so good thing. -Love the way you do dives to the outside. -Glad Monty Brown won clean here -Main event looks good, should be a good one. -Great Pacing in the main event, loved the ending. Overall really enjoyed this mate. |
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Post by deskjet on Sept 9, 2013 9:21:42 GMT -5
Finally! Alright gettin to this, sorry for the delay. I like what's going on with Umaga and the briefcase. Christian is such a chicken dodging taker but it sets up for a future showdown. Edge and Jericho feud? Nice. Really like where your going with these two. Ah what the hell! Freakin board of Directors had to stick their nose in and get Regal in the mix..let it play out! I dont like Williams' authority getting cut. Nice poses with the Brown match. WTF Katie...gimmie some of that lol. Bollocks on the main event ending, but I like the build up you have with these guys. Your shows are easy to follow with nice presentation which helps it move along at a good pace. Lot's of good storylines going on that I'm looking forward to see play out. Nice work:)
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Post by T on Sept 10, 2013 15:44:11 GMT -5
Thanks again for the extra replies. Will always keep working on it and trying to improve where you guys suggest I could. Shatter #7 is all filmed, pics have been resized, now just to write the commentary and put the Flash together. I'm thinking it will be towards the end of the month when it's out, early October at the latest. |
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Post by Jack on Sept 10, 2013 16:04:54 GMT -5
Thanks again for the extra replies. Will always keep working on it and trying to improve where you guys suggest I could. Shatter #7 is all filmed, pics have been resized, now just to write the commentary and put the Flash together. I'm thinking it will be towards the end of the month when it's out, early October at the latest. Sounds Great. Make sure you take your time and don't push to hard for a date |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 23, 2013 14:49:38 GMT -5
WOW! First time checking this show out, but even at show #6 I feel like I could immediately get a vibe of what's been going on and the feel of the characters themselves. Really like that you've got a focus on some different characters and I liked seeing guys like Barrett and Christian get some attention in the federation. I also appreciate that you had some other different guys like Brown and Regal.
I will definitely check out some of the past episodes and try to get even more enlightenment on what's been going on. Shows like this get me excited. Very simple and effective production overall. Just the kind of stuff I imagine that makes the best pic feds.
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