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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2013 17:17:20 GMT -5
High Flyer's Championship #1 Contenders MatchDane2019* vs Cooperman Jack Stip: Corner Slingshot Senton Dane: jack:  How to vote on matches: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended) If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS |
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Post by el torro on Aug 23, 2013 17:51:58 GMT -5
Dane: Not really impressive. Lighting was poor, Evan looked a bit choppy during the springboard/corner thing. Lacked in pictures, didn't have a nice flow really. The impact was alright, and the reaction was about the only good thing here. Try and take your time, take more pictures, remove the blue tack, and get better lighting.
Jack: Really nice animation here. Everything was well done and smooth. The splash was a nice add, but I did not like the dead reaction from Punk. I would've preferred if you moved him a bit since a guy just jumped on top of him. But yeah, the actual stip was nicely done too. Smooth, flowed well, nice job. Just the string and a bit of lights flickering bothered me.
Comfortable win for...
VOTE: JACK
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JDP
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Post by JDP on Aug 23, 2013 18:10:35 GMT -5
Dane: It was ok, I like the knee bend it was just really choppy and slow. There was a pic where the lighting changed which was distracting in the mid air pics were really fidgety, choppy, and slow. The joint movement was probably the most positive thing about the ani, reactions were really choppy too.
Jack: Certainly not your best imo. the taunt at the beginning was effective and kind of added onto the ani, the splash was nice but I saw string and the reaction was poorly done for the splash and senton, either you wanted it to be like that or you were lazy. the jump over punk was weird and a bit stiff but what saved it and the whole ani was really the good flow. the senton itself was smooth just i felt the arms were a bit stiff.
vote: Jack
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Aug 23, 2013 18:18:37 GMT -5
My vote goes to Jack on this one.
Dane2019: At the beginning before the animation starts, the presentation of the ani as far as lighting and quality is somewhat poor which really distracted from the animation as a whole. The squat before going into the jump was fidgety, choppy and stiff. The jump itself onto the bottom turnbuckle was very choppy and fidgety in mid air aswell. I noticed as the ani progressed from the very beginning (Wade Barret/Miz?) moved on the mat which wasn't very appeasing to the eye. The corner senton itself had very little contact with the bottom rope, it was also floaty and choppy but the impact was ok although the reaction could use alot of work. 6.5/10
Jack: Really good ani you have here Jack. At the beginning I really like the set up going into the corner senton overall, the one thing that really didn't add any significant quality to the animation was the first splash on CM Punk, CM Punk was very lifeless and didn't show any signs of pain in any regard which wasn't very nice to see. The jump over punk was smooth and I like the joint movement in mid air. The corner senton was pretty smooth, the airtime was good but the impact was lacking tremendously, perhaps if you had Bourne go all the way up as if he was in a handstand on the top turnbuckle to get more build into the impact would have made a substantial difference in this ani, a double bounce from both Bourne and CM Punk after the initial impact would really bumped up the realism aspect of the ani as well. CM Punk was also stiff and didn't have a reaction but I liked the ani regardless. 8.4/10
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2013 9:13:17 GMT -5
Dane: The animation wasn't great but I see some effort in it, it wasn't smooth and really could've used more frames through-out, Bourne was stiff through-out and lacked vital movements, same with Barrett on the floor, they both needed much more movement, I like that you added some movement from Big Show but it wasn't that good, the reaction was alright and I liked that you had Barrett at least move, but sadly the reaction isn't enough to win you this. 2/10 Jack: Not bad, the animation was smooth through-out and had good spacing, Bourne was stiff through-out most of the moves and lacked quite a bit of movement, Punk just laid there on the floor... stationary, not moving which is not good enough, the reactions were just not good either, Punk did not move during the first move and the second was very much lacking, you really need to pick up your effort Jack. A solid 4/10 Vote: Jack
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Post by DD1996 on Aug 24, 2013 16:19:14 GMT -5
my vote is for jack because of the smoothness of the animation and it is really good 4/5  dane, just take more pictures and it will look smoother 2/5 |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 11:47:35 GMT -5
Dane: It seems dark and blurry. Not very smooth, and the move is just executed a little slow. Both figs could use more movement. 3/10
Jack: Lighting and quality are good for me. Speed is good throughout the video also. Very smooth. But once again the movement of the figs, they just dont move a lot. Punk is motionless on the floor, and Bourne seems to be a little stiff, still... 6/10
WINNER: JACK
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