artdehf
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Post by artdehf on Oct 27, 2013 5:41:58 GMT -5
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Post by T on Oct 27, 2013 6:56:46 GMT -5
Nice to see you got another show up.  -Nice idea with the pre-show promos -It's good that you use Khali. Not many people do that on here -I like Chavo's character - him getting beat was the right thing to do, and then how he complained afterwards! -Another nice addition with Scott Hall -The masked attackers interfering was unexpected. I wonder who they are? -Jericho/Flair was long, and Heenan attacking Jericho sets them up for some good future microphone promos -DiBiases running away, like it! A good show from you. I would like to see maybe a title of some sort, but it's good to see you have a unique roster and there are some storylines starting to develop. |
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Post by Wicked on Oct 27, 2013 9:44:14 GMT -5
I am glad that you got a another show up so fast.
-I liked the direction Chavo's Character is taking. I am surprised Khali won
-Bobby Heenan is awesome and I love seeing him in feds.
- Nice to see Scott Hall in another pic fed.
-I am intrigued by these masked men
-Flair. Wooo. Thats awesome.
-Posing was a bit better.
-I think you've improved a lot.
I think it would be a lot better if you made a new arena, and worked on posing. It was a good show though.
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Post by Jack on Oct 27, 2013 10:02:00 GMT -5
Right nice to see a new show. -Liked the start of the show, was done well, nice feel to it. Will let you off with the spelling. -I am not a huge fan of Khali, never have been, but I like how you have unique guys in your fed which is good to see. -Some of your poses are a bit stiff, make sure to move as many joints in the figure as possible to make it look realistic. -Collision PPV will be sweet. -Masked attackers? -Liked the ending to the show, done well. Would like to see more of a "Arena" type feel to your show. But well done |
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artdehf
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Post by artdehf on Oct 27, 2013 11:51:12 GMT -5
Thanks ! I really appreciate it !  For the arena, I made a new one, it's no perfect but it will be a lot better ! For the posing, I will try to be better in the future |
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IWU Show 2
Oct 27, 2013 17:37:37 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2013 17:37:37 GMT -5
Glad to see you stick with this and crank out amother show. You need a little work on your poses and a little work on the arena but i like your enthusiasm and would like to see another show to see what more you can do.
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artdehf
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My username is a mystery :P
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Post by artdehf on Oct 30, 2013 13:16:17 GMT -5
Thanks, I will do my best to try to improve my posing
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